En un programa de televisión llamado "Vida después de la muerte" (programa grabado en los 70s o 80s) el presentador del programa lee un fragmento del poema de Emily Dickinson (todo esto que estoy narrando sucede en español) y la traducción que ahí colocan en el segmento del poema, habla de “la quietud del cuarto” y “del cristal la ventana que estaba empañado”.
En el poema original en inglés no dice nada de un cuarto (habitación) ni de una ventana empañada. ¿Pueden colocar aquí esa traducción? la de la ventana empañada.
Voy a colocar aquí lo que yo recuerdo de esa traducción que vi en ese programa (no está completa): "Escuché el zumbido de una mosca cuando fallecía, la quietud del cuarto era como la quietud del aire, era como la quietud de la tormenta, el cristal de la ventana se empañó, la ventana se abrió y yo no podía oír, sólo sentir” [•••] Por favor coloquen la traducción que más se parezca a lo que yo he colocado aquí: "La quietud del cuarto era como la quietud del aire" y, "El cristal de la ventana"
I feel honored to have you subscribe to my whirligig videos. Wielding are carving knife is more difficult than wielding a scalpel. whorligiger32 aka B. Thal
In a way, but I was already doing clay on glass and had made this piece before I saw her work. The first piece I saw was Mona Lisa Descending a Staircase. I was more influenced by Caroline Leaf, actually. I saw The Street. I tried out paint, but couldn't get it to work how I wanted, so I tried clay, underlit.
read is many times before,I cried a many forgotten
lore,when dawned youtubes of Emily,so rare,you're so blessed,I cried so,it's beyond great,beyond genius,beyond art,truly.I'll always have this as a fav.I'llwatchittilmydeath like the poem,I'll cry so, love it with a love more than love,I'll post this as my top fav.on her bday,This is one of the greatest gift to Emily, she would be so pround and honored,tearfully,theremembrance,youhaveprofoundly affected my life,& I am eternally~ANIMA~
I loved it! Death with loved ones surrounding our death bed used to be common in days before ICU (etc.), but now we have an insight into the last moments of one.. What will ours be like (as we ALL will have one -- a death, if not a deathbed)??
Really cool animation and well read
chris92124 8 months ago
Wonderfully done!
fairywithtornwings 9 months ago
@fairywithtornwings
TheIronGimp 8 months ago
very well done
IIIMPULSE 10 months ago
En un programa de televisión llamado "Vida después de la muerte" (programa grabado en los 70s o 80s) el presentador del programa lee un fragmento del poema de Emily Dickinson (todo esto que estoy narrando sucede en español) y la traducción que ahí colocan en el segmento del poema, habla de “la quietud del cuarto” y “del cristal la ventana que estaba empañado”.
m3c4n0 11 months ago
En el poema original en inglés no dice nada de un cuarto (habitación) ni de una ventana empañada. ¿Pueden colocar aquí esa traducción? la de la ventana empañada.
m3c4n0 11 months ago
Voy a colocar aquí lo que yo recuerdo de esa traducción que vi en ese programa (no está completa): "Escuché el zumbido de una mosca cuando fallecía, la quietud del cuarto era como la quietud del aire, era como la quietud de la tormenta, el cristal de la ventana se empañó, la ventana se abrió y yo no podía oír, sólo sentir” [•••] Por favor coloquen la traducción que más se parezca a lo que yo he colocado aquí: "La quietud del cuarto era como la quietud del aire" y, "El cristal de la ventana"
m3c4n0 11 months ago
What does this poem mean to you? Let me know...
TheMeister210 1 year ago
Press the soccer button for more fly buzz!
HelloDown 1 year ago
I feel honored to have you subscribe to my whirligig videos. Wielding are carving knife is more difficult than wielding a scalpel. whorligiger32 aka B. Thal
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whirligiger32 1 year ago
Thanks! I like whirligigs and kinetic sculpture -- like animation, art that moves.
summerkitchenstudio 1 year ago
I didn't think that poem could get sadder, until I saw the fly on her eye.
ImGoingToBeAnMD 2 years ago
This is wonderful. You really made this poem come to life. Thanks!
DALOVE75 2 years ago
You have a rare gift of sight! Thank you for sharing your vision.
Awfulitch 2 years ago
word! best video ever.
f2509p 2 years ago
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FartherThanAlaska 2 years ago
this was the most creative and well put together video i have ever seen anywhere ever. you are an artist and a visionary of the highest order.
Xylok 3 years ago
This is friggen amazing! Great job!
zackalphaomega 3 years ago
This is amazing, I don't believe there is a better visual interpretation out there.
mpd3234 3 years ago
well done.. Happy Halloween.
paintingangels 3 years ago
In a way, but I was already doing clay on glass and had made this piece before I saw her work. The first piece I saw was Mona Lisa Descending a Staircase. I was more influenced by Caroline Leaf, actually. I saw The Street. I tried out paint, but couldn't get it to work how I wanted, so I tried clay, underlit.
summerkitchenstudio 3 years ago
Bravo! Bravo! ^ ^ really great
XxTwistidxX 3 years ago
creepy how the fly stand on the eye....
16dreamy16 3 years ago 2
Beautiful! Wonderful reading and Stunning animation!
wordcaker 4 years ago
i did this poem for a poetry recitation contest. Although I lost the reigonal competition, I owned that contest with that poem!
Obistalker1 4 years ago
amazing. you did justice to this poem
Ireytha 4 years ago
Enjoyed this very much
megansspark 4 years ago
i love this video, very creative
suckafreesouth 4 years ago
tony soprano, fade to um onset
ePhilosopher 4 years ago
excelente video!
magadenoche 4 years ago
Excellent visual interpretation and a good voice for the poem. Thanks
binaryg 4 years ago
Really Great...
I imagined the poem differently in my head, but your way makes a lot of sense and flows beautifully.
SwtMsT 5 years ago
read is many times before,I cried a many forgotten
lore,when dawned youtubes of Emily,so rare,you're so blessed,I cried so,it's beyond great,beyond genius,beyond art,truly.I'll always have this as a fav.I'llwatchittilmydeath like the poem,I'll cry so, love it with a love more than love,I'll post this as my top fav.on her bday,This is one of the greatest gift to Emily, she would be so pround and honored,tearfully,theremembrance,youhaveprofoundly affected my life,& I am eternally~ANIMA~
ANIMAart 5 years ago
I loved it! Death with loved ones surrounding our death bed used to be common in days before ICU (etc.), but now we have an insight into the last moments of one.. What will ours be like (as we ALL will have one -- a death, if not a deathbed)??
Philali 5 years ago
this was really scary!! the fly's buzz makes my spinal cord shudder!
muusicfreak678 5 years ago
lol. a bit of deja vu striking since my english class just finished reading and talking about this poem.
HaloGrun0 5 years ago
You have a beautiful voice, complements the poem ... wonderful visually as well.
claire92284 5 years ago
OK that was creepy. But then I don't like flies.
I liked the movie and the poem.
wstoner 5 years ago