My Original Poem: "I've Been There"

[NoopyInfinoopy]

You took my hair,

now I have no hair.

[rockerforever10]

oooo nice!! short but good! keep it up! :)

[missbeautyandsexy]

loooooool

[physcobuny]

ROFL

[IrohTsuyoi]

@physcobuny LMAO! Thanks for watching!

[SuperStarSaira]

Keep it up, great poem <<33

[IrohTsuyoi]

@SuperStarSaira Thank you! I have more on my channel if you are interested!

[SuperStarSaira]

I'm in love with a poet

[IrohTsuyoi]

@SuperStarSaira Cool.

[intrptr]

Prison... poison... military... mayhem done that too, salute

[coolnofool]

good stuff man..

[chiparoo222]

An ACCOMPLISHED piece ! ! ! -- Such a good creation in words takes a brain ! -- And you definitely have one ! -- Best Wishes !

[xxthisisErikaxx]

great poem!

[meanmrmustard89]

Awesome man enjoyd that! Upload more man

[JoSieLove2Sing4u]

Added you to Poets on Youtube Playlist ~ Grazie Sir.

[JoSieLove2Sing4u]

Intense expressions, bravo dear one ♥

[CptnAura]

Really good poem.

[Dragonslair7]

i love your poem. its so heartfelt and absolutely lovely. thanks for sharing it with us. keep writing.

[Wizardsixr]

VERY  GOOD.

[Wizardsixr]

VERY GOOD.

[TheCharraZ]

Nice job, person

[BLACKHEATS]

that was good

[LovingLifeandWords]

very good!

[FreezingSun14]

nice poem, you should make a rap or some sorta song out of it.

[yurushii]

Awesomeness!

[TonyeStarr1]

Very heartfelt. I enjoyed the poem.

[TonyeStarr1]

Very heartfelt. I enjoyed the poem.

[DawnBpoems]

I like your style

[madmum23]

duuude that was awesome! :D

[MrRancher02]

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[sokiberon]

AMEI O VIDEO DE VOCES !

Voces tem que ver esse Video !

BEIJOS !

GABBY

[ezseeker]

Very good. I imagine that most of us have been there. You stated it very well.

Easy

[alpha493]

this poem describes my life to a tee

[Orange4thewin]

nice dude, you could probly make a song outta that

[daltonsbadboy]

I have been there to my brother....I like the poem...Five starts and favoriting

[cartoonage]

I´ve been here, Iroh and liked it a lot !

[colorina1980]

Fantastic!!!

[dragonball316]

very good wondeful job dark & mystoius almost outstanding could make a good qoute of an end of a video or soemthing. 5/5

[Shad0wdrift3r]

rly nice

[IrohTsuyoi]

Thank you very much! I try!

[Shad0wdrift3r]

yes u do

[sopherkins]

Wow, that was great! You are a good poet.

[concker2000]

i really like this good work

[edistar]

good job

[IrohTsuyoi]

Thank you very much!

[Ogre7222]

That was amazing and beautiful. Was that your poem?

[IrohTsuyoi]

Thanks alot! Yes, it is my original poem from my book. I am glad that you liked it!

[elijahcrigger]

wow that really touched me man.....thank you.

[IrohTsuyoi]

I thank you for your view and comment! I am honored.

[johee626]

nice poem :) I do poetry too. check me out. you might like.

[IrohTsuyoi]

Sure! I will check it out. ^_^

[3602433]

man that was deep you are so f***ing talented

i love your vids well next to kamen rider 5stars

[kfkonrad]

Pretty good. Why did you get rid of all your other vids?

[IrohTsuyoi]

The camera I was using at the time made the playback quality screwed up. Some of my viewers complained about feedback, playing, to not hearing my voice at all. So, I got rid of them.

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Off to a great start 5*

[IrohTsuyoi]

Thank you sir! ^_^

[phantomscarz]

this is in my favorites

the last part killed it!

[IrohTsuyoi]

Freakin A!! I am glad that you've enjoyed it!