I write myself, for about 35 years now, so you know I'm most impressed by your writing ability. I just posted my first ever you tube video. It's stark, but I want another writers/ performers opinion. You're great; do something about it NOW, while you're young. It's all too fast to sit and ponder. Listen to my tune if you can and tell me if I'm worthy. God Bless.
...con't...to be in order to make your stories compelling. You did a great job and I hope you will consider my meandering ideas. My hope is to encourage you to avoid falling into any traps later on. Development as an artist depends on exploring and expressing yourself. You could probably find yourself a pop audience, so if you can captain your own soul in that genre, you could have a big career. You should be very proud of yourself. You already deserve success, so don't give up on this. thx
... cont'd... like you might be losing something along the way. It's not screechy, and in this particular song, it fits the lyrics so I wouldn't change it here. I like that your songs tell stories, and I think you have a lot of potential as a singer-songwriter. I think folk, country and maybe a kind of light alt rock fit your sound. I think you should stay acoustic and avoid playing around with too much voice/sound technology. You sing in a natural pocket, and that's where you need to ... con't
cont'd ... That's not to say that I think you need to change yourself. Based on your writing, I think you have a greater truth inside you that you can find and share with your audience. Otherwise, in a way, the songs come off as whimsical but flat (lacking depth). You're already way better than a lot of contemporary artists, because you make your own music. A note on your vocals. I don't know enough about singing to get this exactly right, but when you sing louder, it sounds like ... cont'd...
I took some time to listen to a few of your songs, and this song strikes me as the best among them. You have a lot of talent, and I think you're almost ready to have a major career. I noticed a few things that I wish to offer you as an exercise in thought--an invitation of sorts. Your songs tell a romantic story. That's wonderful in its own right, but my suggestion would be to consider a break from the theme of romantic/courtly love, and to explore your own story a bit more. to be continued
When you get super famous, which I know you will... Don't change anything about what you do. People let the stardom get to them. Stay strong with your music. It does sound the same in each song, but I know you will make it far. Good luck. :)(:
When you get super famous, which I know you will... Don't change anything about what you do. People let the stardom get to them. Stay strong with your music. It does sound the same in each song, but I know you will make it far. Good luck. :)(:
This is not very interesting. There are loads of videos like this on YouTube. Not to insult you, you have a fine voice but this is painfully uncreative.
luv the song. u look like my kind of gurl.:-p when i turn 8teen im going to la just 2 sing. u luk lik ur 13 im 12 so i wud no.lol! awsum guitar. ma mom has a acustic (spelled rong probably) thats black. (like me). pleez comment back.
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you're really awesome! i subscribed! r u wearing like a whitestrip on your teeth? cuz it looks like you're wearing something on your teeth the pictures kinda blurry so i can't tell... Whatever it doesn't matter cuz ur so amazing!
you wrote the chorus and freestyled the verses on your own recording.....I like the vocals and the guitar struming is ice....really do raspect it.....say your words a lil more clearer tho...
but please the lyrics are like really really corny ! man it got boring after the first chorus :( well thats just my oppinion :) keep it up girl you have future !
Cute lyrics :) and your voice is so sweet! found your vid only because it was one of the ones on the side of my song 'heaven knows' (who know why? haha), but i'm so glad i *did* find it :) -Katie
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yeah, your voice is lovely! You got the sound of a star. Your song is definatly the thing! It is really good. Again star quality. But, (please don't take this is a bad way) You need to redo it and tune your guitar better. Also turn up the volume on the guitar.
try to find a computer site: Guitar tuner, and you will find an online site for free to help tune your guitar. I would love to hear your song again with it tuned. Then I would as where I can download it!
i loved it! great song they way you slowed down the tiempo and sped back up on the bridge was a beautiful addition to whAT ALREADY a beautiful song great job :)
really nice song-guitar sounds a bit wrong though-i think you're strumming in the wrong place-try it further back and not over the sound hole for a better sound-i can see that you're only little and may have no choice but to play it there-also try to play more loosely with your wrist and less of your arm-sorry only trying to be constructive-i really like the song tho and subscribed-keep it up!
Hey there! im a professional singer and i can honestly say you have a fantastic voice and presence. Keep doing what you are doing because you have so much potential for greatness! Follow your heart!
I freaking love you and your guitar!!! lol im so jealous! you have the john lennon signed guitar! i feel like just getting a sharpie and writting it on mine.
I only saw this video but just in case someone didn't say it yet, and hopefully if they did you couldn't be told enough. You have it girl, you found it when your so young. Brings a strong attraction on people's attention to you. Don't lose it now you can go far if you stay connected with yourself. Smiles and **cheers**
I love the lyrics to this song I'm hoping to write one like this I subbed because I love your voice and songs any way check out my channel have a nice night :)
You're amazing! <3
Cookielover415 4 months ago
I write myself, for about 35 years now, so you know I'm most impressed by your writing ability. I just posted my first ever you tube video. It's stark, but I want another writers/ performers opinion. You're great; do something about it NOW, while you're young. It's all too fast to sit and ponder. Listen to my tune if you can and tell me if I'm worthy. God Bless.
MrWeimmer1 5 months ago
...con't...to be in order to make your stories compelling. You did a great job and I hope you will consider my meandering ideas. My hope is to encourage you to avoid falling into any traps later on. Development as an artist depends on exploring and expressing yourself. You could probably find yourself a pop audience, so if you can captain your own soul in that genre, you could have a big career. You should be very proud of yourself. You already deserve success, so don't give up on this. thx
RewtheBrave 5 months ago
... cont'd... like you might be losing something along the way. It's not screechy, and in this particular song, it fits the lyrics so I wouldn't change it here. I like that your songs tell stories, and I think you have a lot of potential as a singer-songwriter. I think folk, country and maybe a kind of light alt rock fit your sound. I think you should stay acoustic and avoid playing around with too much voice/sound technology. You sing in a natural pocket, and that's where you need to ... con't
RewtheBrave 5 months ago
cont'd ... That's not to say that I think you need to change yourself. Based on your writing, I think you have a greater truth inside you that you can find and share with your audience. Otherwise, in a way, the songs come off as whimsical but flat (lacking depth). You're already way better than a lot of contemporary artists, because you make your own music. A note on your vocals. I don't know enough about singing to get this exactly right, but when you sing louder, it sounds like ... cont'd...
RewtheBrave 5 months ago
I took some time to listen to a few of your songs, and this song strikes me as the best among them. You have a lot of talent, and I think you're almost ready to have a major career. I noticed a few things that I wish to offer you as an exercise in thought--an invitation of sorts. Your songs tell a romantic story. That's wonderful in its own right, but my suggestion would be to consider a break from the theme of romantic/courtly love, and to explore your own story a bit more. to be continued
RewtheBrave 5 months ago
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i kinda like it
SuperTrojanhero 8 months ago
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Hello. :)(:
When you get super famous, which I know you will... Don't change anything about what you do. People let the stardom get to them. Stay strong with your music. It does sound the same in each song, but I know you will make it far. Good luck. :)(:
-Rhavene and Dalton-
P.S. Dalton says you are now his favorite artist.
:)(:
rjoree 10 months ago
Hello. :)(:
When you get super famous, which I know you will... Don't change anything about what you do. People let the stardom get to them. Stay strong with your music. It does sound the same in each song, but I know you will make it far. Good luck. :)(:
-Rhavene and Dalton-
P.S. Dalton says you are now his favorite artist.
:)(:
rjoree 10 months ago
you sound like taylor swift great voice
sxybabygurl69 10 months ago
lol i listened to your song and my little bro loved it i have no idea why
0oSilverWingo0 11 months ago
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I luv this song:)
Cookielover415 11 months ago
Another good song. Cool! : )
AllieCat055 1 year ago
subscribed!! :]
miserendix 1 year ago
Love love love love love love love you & your voice! <3
xxXabbiskittyXxx 1 year ago
LOVE IT!!!!! <3
bikerz442 1 year ago
WOW! You are reaaalllly goooooddd!!!! Keep singing, you're going places!
amomusica16 1 year ago
you sound even better than taylor swift! (no offense to taylor :))
GangstaGal4000 1 year ago
you rock!
deniiipeace 1 year ago
Amazing performance. you have great confidence and poise. please dont listen to anyones negative opinion.
TheAmericanNight 1 year ago
This is not very interesting. There are loads of videos like this on YouTube. Not to insult you, you have a fine voice but this is painfully uncreative.
QuestionYourThoughts 1 year ago
Great lyrics..! :)
HaylieGrace 1 year ago
I love this song it is so cute <3
Cookielover415 1 year ago
guitars a little off... good thought
esankk 1 year ago
Really Good, but I do recommend that you carry your voice a little bit more.
I still think you did a good job though!!!!
TheEleckt 1 year ago
this is really stupid bad voice inflection uncreative. you suck
incwithaperiod 1 year ago
@incwithaperiod try do as good as her b4 talk ;)
bllllood 1 year ago
good stuff
TerryKuo777 1 year ago
I love this song it is so awesome!
Cookielover415 1 year ago
nice! you remind me of Avril from a few years back. ~
mmffxx 1 year ago
Very nice. Wonderful lyrics.
Ifeology 1 year ago
I like your original song “Tonight”. Very beautifully done. Don
turtlelakend 1 year ago
You can sing, but its not a unique voice. Many girls sound just like you.
If you want to stand out, you need your own style.
TheOtherSun 1 year ago
luv the song. u look like my kind of gurl.:-p when i turn 8teen im going to la just 2 sing. u luk lik ur 13 im 12 so i wud no.lol! awsum guitar. ma mom has a acustic (spelled rong probably) thats black. (like me). pleez comment back.
nicegurly456 1 year ago
Wow, your good!
meathookmayhem 1 year ago
U SHOULD BE ON TV RIGHT NOW AND UR MUSIC SHOULD BE EVRYWHERE !!!! WHAT ARE U DOING HERE !!! XD
iluvtowatchppldraw 1 year ago
your amazing great job
shlabs1 1 year ago
Wow... Keep it up! Amazing lyrics, love your voice. Don't ever give up on writing or singing!
BlazeFire53 1 year ago
you are amazing
great song
xoDonnaLeeox 1 year ago
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Born2RiteLyrics 1 year ago
you're really awesome! i subscribed! r u wearing like a whitestrip on your teeth? cuz it looks like you're wearing something on your teeth the pictures kinda blurry so i can't tell... Whatever it doesn't matter cuz ur so amazing!
444Singer4life 1 year ago 2
@444Singer4life thanks! and i have braces lol it's really hard to see them in the video :P
EmmaRowleyMusic 1 year ago
@EmmaRowleyMusic oh! sorry. i love the style of singing you have and all the songs that you have written! you are so awesome! (again)
444Singer4life 1 year ago
@444Singer4life
Braces.
pschristina 1 year ago
@pschristina I know that's what she told me. the picture was blurry so i couldn't see
444Singer4life 1 year ago
Cute song, cute singer
Richard (TFCT)
uandme06 1 year ago
omg ur so awesome! u hav a lot of talent! love ur lyrics and the ones to this is my revenge! ah-maz-ing!!!!!!! :D
babycakesgurly 1 year ago
you wrote the chorus and freestyled the verses on your own recording.....I like the vocals and the guitar struming is ice....really do raspect it.....say your words a lil more clearer tho...
jussCrazy1 1 year ago
I LOOOVE THIS SOND :D
CULLENLOVA4EVA 1 year ago
I think your trying to hard to be taylor swift O_O
Handgunmaniac 1 year ago
@Handgunmaniac Hater's gonna hate.
jzev 1 year ago
wow ur good
ipodmusicjunkie30 1 year ago
THis is awesome!!! I love it! chck out my videos!
marjomul 1 year ago
you play awsome and you sing really good
but please the lyrics are like really really corny ! man it got boring after the first chorus :( well thats just my oppinion :) keep it up girl you have future !
Izat277 1 year ago
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EmmaRowleyMusic is great check her out!!!!!!!
Cookielover415 1 year ago
keep up the good work girl never give up ..
bigstagemagazine 1 year ago
your really good!
emilybjn 1 year ago
what a nice song! i really like it! ood job sweetie!!!
brenthanks44 1 year ago
Love it!
pschristina 1 year ago
ur amazing i love your voice soo much!!! i hape u become famouse!!
TheBballlover10 1 year ago
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hey could i get some subs im a singer i will sub back!
1houE 1 year ago
your really good :) i wish i could sing haha :p
XoXlululemonXoX 1 year ago
amazing !
Jb4EvEr1325 1 year ago
Wow!!!!!!!! You Miss have amazing Talent!
MisTaken121 1 year ago
This is nice! Love the words and you have a pretty guitar! ^_^
Ktpcwriter 1 year ago
from one artist to another....
freakin amazing
wesiscool2 1 year ago
A very fresh style. Great voice
MononasWorld 1 year ago
i can't guess who your inspired by
jwinston46 1 year ago
HOW HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH THESE?????!!!
kittenlover82 1 year ago
Cute lyrics :) and your voice is so sweet! found your vid only because it was one of the ones on the side of my song 'heaven knows' (who know why? haha), but i'm so glad i *did* find it :) -Katie
KateAndOrKatie 1 year ago
Awesome.
PopPlayer3 1 year ago
Your awsome sweet hart. Keep up the great work!!
fntgroundcrew 1 year ago
u rock!!!
JustinBieberLover859 1 year ago
@JustinBieberLover859 haha! thank you! :D
EmmaRowleyMusic 1 year ago
great job!
nattx0x 1 year ago
awww i like it! :)
Thumbs up!
ImKaylaD 1 year ago
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PLEASE DONT READ THIS. YOU WILL GET KISSED ON THE NEAREST POSSIBLE FRIDAY BY THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. TOMORROW WILL BE THE BEST DAY OF YOUR LIFE. HOWEVER IF YOU DONT POST THIS COMMENT something bad will happen. NOW UV STARTED READIN DIS DUNT STOP THIS IS SO SCARY. SEND THIS TO 5 VIDEOS IN 143 MINUTES WHEN UR DONE PRESS F6 AND UR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR ON THE SCREEN IN BIG LETTERS. THIS IS SO SCARY CAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKS THIS ACTUALLY WORKS
Coropolis 1 year ago
Nice hoe u get so many views?
AdrianEaston 1 year ago
i like your song :)
sweetheartomgsee 1 year ago
@sweetheartomgsee thank you :)
EmmaRowleyMusic 1 year ago
i love this o ur o good famous
natureisgood1998 1 year ago
you sound wonderful. your vocals are my favorite. your song writing is also done very well.
brainbug187 1 year ago
xoNatalie09xo Well some people who have gutairs dont have tuners so I was just saying if you know what I mean:)
8hiphopchick8 1 year ago
Sounds like you have a good start, keep up the practice and great work
lilaffie 1 year ago
Good Play !!
words1maker 1 year ago
yeah, your voice is lovely! You got the sound of a star. Your song is definatly the thing! It is really good. Again star quality. But, (please don't take this is a bad way) You need to redo it and tune your guitar better. Also turn up the volume on the guitar.
try to find a computer site: Guitar tuner, and you will find an online site for free to help tune your guitar. I would love to hear your song again with it tuned. Then I would as where I can download it!
AngieCosco 1 year ago
nice song; but i would try a different technic; u sound alot like Taylor Swift...
all in all a good song tho = )
MsBubbles90210 1 year ago
she is not bad as I thought
bnannet 1 year ago
hi! new taylor swift!!!!
KennaMatta 1 year ago
this is really good. I'm no good on guitar -- wish I was though.
~Alexandryne Skyfaller
AlexandryneSkyfaller 1 year ago
Excellent song and beautiful voice!
Beaubix 1 year ago
Yeahh agreed Do you haveeaa tunner?
8hiphopchick8 1 year ago
@8hiphopchick8 if she has a guitar i'm sure she has a tuner
xoNatalie09xo 1 year ago
i give her a 9 out of 10 :)
Vi02100 1 year ago
might help to tune the guitar
marsviking 1 year ago 6
@marsviking It's tuned the way she wants it!! The whole world doesn't have to go your way
JasonSirstins 1 year ago
hey check out my channel, all songs i wrote my self :)
thanks !
nice voice!
SaraMione 1 year ago
Real nice!
cricket28bridlepath 1 year ago
My God, your voice is amaaazing!!! :) and youalso write goodlyrics.
you should become famous..lol i'd buyyour music!!!:)
rawrtaylorable 1 year ago
How do you get featured? Good job.
MisledProduction 1 year ago
not bad kido!
43174317 1 year ago
i like the beginning alot. but then the screaming later not too good. "n ite" no! "sounds" is good at 2:53.
frankho99 1 year ago
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elpuma049 1 year ago
Yes.
DAZEOFTHESTONED 1 year ago
i loved it! great song they way you slowed down the tiempo and sped back up on the bridge was a beautiful addition to whAT ALREADY a beautiful song great job :)
-Cheyenne Hickey:)
CynandChey 1 year ago
so ugly..
shaktim16 1 year ago
@shaktim16 thats mean! shes so pretty!
msgleeluver 1 year ago
i personally think its your best from what ive heard so far =)
lalalandgirl13 1 year ago
really nice song-guitar sounds a bit wrong though-i think you're strumming in the wrong place-try it further back and not over the sound hole for a better sound-i can see that you're only little and may have no choice but to play it there-also try to play more loosely with your wrist and less of your arm-sorry only trying to be constructive-i really like the song tho and subscribed-keep it up!
richrica 1 year ago
Your so real :)
i like that about you :D
*Thumbs up!
Stardollinsider 1 year ago
One word....AWESOME :)
jubr16 1 year ago
Hey there! im a professional singer and i can honestly say you have a fantastic voice and presence. Keep doing what you are doing because you have so much potential for greatness! Follow your heart!
musicismyreligionnn 1 year ago
every1 please check out my channel and my songs :)
SongwritterGirl 1 year ago
you are very BEAutiful......
n nice job
karansingh55 1 year ago
hey..great job gal! m ur fan ur now..wish u could produce some more like ths in the future.
MrDizzysue 1 year ago
Put ur hand over ur mouth
2. Make a wish into ur hand
3. Put ur hand over ur heart for 5 sec
4. Put this comment on 3 vids
5. Then 2morrow u will have the best day of ur lif 2 minu
nbaalltheway 1 year ago
Great voice and good song writing. :)
MarcusKyo 1 year ago
another great song!! :)
varesy 1 year ago
omg! i wud totally buy this on itunes!
agawakgrl 1 year ago
Awesome song here...5/5*'s..loved it!!
146Johnny 1 year ago
not bad. good look babe!
christianetstu 1 year ago
Very good! 5 stars:)
jlefvert 1 year ago
that was sweet as keep it up you will go places :)
puppenFresh666 1 year ago
I freaking love you and your guitar!!! lol im so jealous! you have the john lennon signed guitar! i feel like just getting a sharpie and writting it on mine.
hedz02 1 year ago
i feel singing with you
govindahinduja 1 year ago
hi.i like your song a lot....cowboy boots!...those
first two words sort of hit you....i like it,oh i like yer
voice too,
guitardave1100 2 years ago
this is sooooo good ! you have such a nice powerfull voice !
im also a singer/songwrite please check out my songs :D
xmegaannx 2 years ago
thanks for your comment on my video!
and this song is really sweet! :)
olgaboermusic 2 years ago
I know, youve probably heard this a million times but i hope i'm number one million and one. YOUR AMAZING, keep it up. You're gonna go far girl. ♥
hunnikatt 2 years ago
you have such a beautiful voice+amazing guitar+great song writing= happiness! :)
HelpTheUnknown 2 years ago
v nice song. all d best
MrKennygoa 2 years ago
Emma(: another great song! (: keep on writing songs!! (:
xoxoxoxo
amber(:
ambercasper1 2 years ago
I only saw this video but just in case someone didn't say it yet, and hopefully if they did you couldn't be told enough. You have it girl, you found it when your so young. Brings a strong attraction on people's attention to you. Don't lose it now you can go far if you stay connected with yourself. Smiles and **cheers**
Smogydabear 2 years ago
Tonight - by - Emma 5/5 ★s
BeautifulGirlByDana 2 years ago
You're awesome!
TheIsraelyGuy 2 years ago
like this one to emma good work mate
onelastbreath7777777 2 years ago
Good song really :P
check out my channel please (p.s. I know we don't hear the voice of my friend very loud but heyy) check it out
SongwritterGirl 2 years ago
I love the lyrics to this song I'm hoping to write one like this I subbed because I love your voice and songs any way check out my channel have a nice night :)
guitarismypassion11 2 years ago 3