The Hardy boys and the mystery of where babies come from #2

[rotcrebel]

k i used this piece for a humor piece in speech senior year, i broke to nationals and a little advice i could give is tone it down, Nurse Ratchet takes the jokes WAY too over the top and they lose the humor. the boys are not playing the hardys as young and innocent as they should be, make these characters they way you would see young men, yes naive but also innocent and childish. your on your way to getting it right but it needs to be polished

[JoshuaKBenson]

I'm sorry guys. I just didn't enjoy. I'll offer some advice, though. Understand the characters. Understand the innocence of their characters and how that affects their actions. Nurse Ratchet was probably just a little too over the top to be believable. Mr. Hardy-loved the way you entered! Everyone needs to practice comedic timing, characterization, and giving the audience time to laugh. I've performed this, so I'm not completely off with this criticism.

[kidnamedjd]

this is really funny, do u have the rest of it?

[brandon1124]

that was sh~!~t!

my friends learned this skit in two days and did a better job!

[spatulalover]

hahaha, this was fantastic. I love Christopher Durange, and you all did it wonderfully.