I like it. Honestly, I think the cinematography is great. I probably wouldn't have gone with that music at the beginning though. Second track was much better.
I can see that you guys put a lot of effort into this, and the tension's there for the most part. The opening shot is dodgy (difficult doing pan/tilts). The cinematography over-all is great, though, my favourite being the deep shot at 1:35. I really liked the tense rythm of the music, up until 2:45, where it seems to chnge in tone, and become that of a cheap 80s horror film. The dialogue's clear, but the sound is mono, making it sound thin. Finally, and sadly, the director says "cut" at 0:58.
@lukepietnik haha cheers for the feedback luke, but please remember for the stuff uve picked up on... it was done in 2 days! and we certainly struggled to get any kind of story together with a thriller about an arborist. the tilt was to accomodate the landmark that had to be included as part of the brief. as for the music, it was a bunch of tracks one of the crew made without seeing any kind of edit, trying to blindly hit the themes.
@binsy89 Oh I know, Chris gave me the lowdown. I just didn't have the space in that comment box to put that down, lol. I know it was a bloody quick turnaround, and you guys did a brilliant job considering that, I was just being constructively critical.
I like it. Honestly, I think the cinematography is great. I probably wouldn't have gone with that music at the beginning though. Second track was much better.
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Mr48tv 1 year ago
I can see that you guys put a lot of effort into this, and the tension's there for the most part. The opening shot is dodgy (difficult doing pan/tilts). The cinematography over-all is great, though, my favourite being the deep shot at 1:35. I really liked the tense rythm of the music, up until 2:45, where it seems to chnge in tone, and become that of a cheap 80s horror film. The dialogue's clear, but the sound is mono, making it sound thin. Finally, and sadly, the director says "cut" at 0:58.
lukepietnik 1 year ago
@lukepietnik haha cheers for the feedback luke, but please remember for the stuff uve picked up on... it was done in 2 days! and we certainly struggled to get any kind of story together with a thriller about an arborist. the tilt was to accomodate the landmark that had to be included as part of the brief. as for the music, it was a bunch of tracks one of the crew made without seeing any kind of edit, trying to blindly hit the themes.
binsy89 1 year ago
@binsy89 Oh I know, Chris gave me the lowdown. I just didn't have the space in that comment box to put that down, lol. I know it was a bloody quick turnaround, and you guys did a brilliant job considering that, I was just being constructively critical.
lukepietnik 1 year ago
@lukepietnik cool cool, sorry if i sounded a bit rude there! i always appreciate the comments.
to me, this film is bloody hilarious... Pat Dobson's limp a 2:52! We all cracked up laughing when we saw that for the first time.
binsy89 1 year ago