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  • def part one tho

  • I luv this one, and the second part also

  • word. thats real shit!

  • ...this is part 1=.=

  • had this on my phone for years....and still loves it

  • "Told me life was a journey and he's ready to explore this shit" Wellll...

  • Maybe if dykes get off the computer and hit the treadmil,and check your nasty attitudes maybe you could get a man!!!!!

  • i jus went threw this shit...she was speakin to me

  • WWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW­

  • I sure do feel her!! Thats some real sh*t when she went into eating all the food, having the remote and sharing that one side of your bed...lol. Makes you realize just how much you will sacrifice for the man you choose to be with.

  • I'm that "friend" for sure!  Im done!

  • I only wish she was my lady...together we could easily form an incredible open mic duo

  • "Just because im crying yall dont mean that im the victim it just means i was scared to let him go cuz some other chick might get him, & that was my fault cuz it was my decision i shoulda never put my heart in my minds position but i couldnt shake him he was like a bad habit & all this for a nigga that was just average doin average nigga shit" ooo i love that part

  • I Was To Busy Bitch Jumpn Nd Cryn Like I Was Goin Hit Him

  • I think you just told my story girl.

  • "And all that time i spent mad at him, hell, i shoulda been mad at ME"

    PREACH

  • damn straight

    

  • Killed it!!!!!!!

  • LOVED this !

  • You go Girl (Martin voice) haha

  • "I SHOULD HAVE NEVER PUT MY HEART IN MY MINDS POSITION !" GIRRRLLL YOU BETTA SAY THAT !

  • lol shes cold

    

  • She went hard!!

  • Go Headd Girl !!! .

  • AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!

    

  • Wow....beautiful.

    

  • PREEEEEAAACCCCHHHHH! omg. definitely been there

    

  • OMG This is bad ass!!!!!

  • man i agree with her, sometimes we give ourselves and our closest keepsakes to a man thats not ours, we get so caught up in the fantasy and the fake image that this man is now apart of your life and belongs to you, but in reality...stray dogs dont belong to me nor you!! lol smh in every relationship its important to know in the beginning where you stand, so you never get your feelings hurt in the end!!

  • ah shoulda bin mad at me.............hype shid

  • wow!! this really inspired me i feel so lifted :)

  • THIS SO TRUE AND REAL SHE IS A SMART WOMAN WHO SEE THING IN A NEW LIGHT AFTER HIM. SHE LIVED AND LEARNED, I LOVE THIS POEM

  • I feel this so much. Now I have a boyfriend who treats me like a queen.

  • "And All This For A Nigga That Was Average Doin Average Nigga Shit. Like Talkin Out The Side Of His Neck And Thinkin Wit His Dick. But I Must Admit He's The One I Wanted To Commit. So Either I Wasnt Livin Up To My Full Potential Or I Was Just An Average Chick"

  • I love this soooo much, its amazing!

  • I love this shit...

  • how can this poem be disliked?

  • this is part one

  • beautiful poem

  • mos def is stupid lmao "sit yo asses down...sit yo asses down." lol

  • i know some of y'all can relate to this....

  • this is part one.........

  • even though his name is not on the lease he's got sh!t in my house that's off limits to me like "his side of My bed" and "His stash of weed".

  • that man who got a main chick freeloading off her in her house and aint married...probably disliked this

  • every woman living with a man (not married) needs this advice.

  • LOVE IT!!!!!

  • "Never put your heart in your minds position..." best advice in the poem

  • true stuff feel u

  • where is the damn love button lol

  • all females need to listen to this

  • man i feel her im going thru the same thing

  • this iznt part 3....itz dah 1st one

  • I love her poetry and she is fine as hell

  • This issss my shiiiiiiiiiit!! I used to slap this back in '08 when I was going through hard times wit my (EX)NIGGA!! No lieeee this made me think so very different!! DANA WHERE U AT? U NEED TO COME OUT THE CAVE WIT MORE DEEP SHIT!! I'M FEELIN YO STYLE!! U GOT FLOWS FAHREAL!!!

  • there is no part 3 this is part 1

  • mh, girl tell it like it is! Fa real!

  • WOW

  • seriously WHERE is part 1??

  • @winklesnorf there is no aprt 3 this is part 1

  • that was good, i almost started clappin in the library...;^)

  • Love the part where she says she was a friend, not a wife, and should have acted in that capacity. That's wisdom!

  • Anybody know where to find part 1?

  • there out of order this is part 1. the one where she is wearing black has longer hair is part 2

  • reminds me of somethin...

  • Dana it has been a few years ago when we met in screenwriting class, but I always come back to this poem it is so relevant to my life. Love it girl.

  • "All y'all sit your asses down, sit your asses down, sit your asses down".

    This was so good,people did not want to stop the standing ovation :).

  • She always does her thing...Part 2 is the shit also!!!

  • I love it!

  • DAMN SHE IZ SO TIGHT I LUV THIZ PEOM

  • she kept 100 on this poem!

  • too real!

  • She did her thing on that one. You can see the pain that she took control of. LORD HAVE MERCY girl. You did the damn thang! Great performance!

  • I see a lot of black women give their teenage years and their entire 20s to "average niggas" who do not put a ring on their finger. They end up unmarrieda t 30 years old and pointing the finger at everyone but themselves. This sista actually did something that a lot of women can't do and that take responsibility for her own actions. She actually did some major self reflection and corrected her mistakes. She went hard on this one! Big ups to this sista. She gets much respect.

  • @norcalnupe I couldnt agree with you more, I'm going thru the same thing in her poem and Im just 21. I'm glad I seen this cuz Lord knows if I didnt I could be 30years old 4 kids and not married

  • I can't get enough of this, even after all these years. I love the feedback from the crowd, especially from the women. The way they all say "hmmmm" when something nice is said... :)

  • DAMN! couldn't even wait for it to finish...had to login to add this to my favorites. This woman is the Truth...

  • isnt this part 1

  • Wow thats what I'm talking about.

  • Funny how a piece I wrote 5 years ago sound like this. The girl is good.

  • That's an example of good self reflection right there. She blamed herself for the time she wasted & now she know better. BEAUTIFUL!!! I love this. I'm gonna show this to everybody!! lol

  • this is what happens when we get blinded by our own attraction and ego, and we fail to see how the other person is feeling....

  • She left a nigga speechless, thats how real this poetry is. NO Retort for this one.

  • YES!

  • oooh my fuckin god

    she aint neva said it no better

    this shit deep and real ass fuck

  • AND All this for an average N***a doing average N***a  s%@t....Either I wasn't living up to my potential or I was just the average chick...

  • That IS whats up KUDOS To her!!!!

  • YOU an average woman? Wow. They talk about hypersexuality...this is hyperintellectuality

  • dat was hard

  • oh hell naw! shit that was off limits like his side of my bed, AND my stash of my weed111

  • ...'he hit me with the forehead kiss.'

  • soo qood but yeah its the 1st part

  • love this poem but it's not prt 3

  • this isnt pt 3...

  • "..even tho his name is not on my lease, got shit in my house thats off limits to me; like his side of MY bed.."

  • so dope...

  • Yea this was one of my favorites from that season of Def Poetry. I miss that show so much. I liked Def Poetry even more than I like Brave New Voices.

  • I LOVE THIS POEM..NOTHIN BUT THE TRUTH

  • This isnt part 3.. its part 1.. its only 2 parts to it

  • dis a real good poem

  • love her

  • wellll......

  • omg... i love this poem. she tight!

  • Damn.. that was nothing but the truth. Alot of us women do this..

  • Best URBAN POEM!

    Real Talk indeed!!!

  • She is beautiful! YOu go girl!

  • Word!

    Real Talk!

  • I LOVE THIS SPOKEN WORD!!! Its so sad I know it wrd for wrd she is all that!!

  • this is just RIGHT!!!

  • this is the shit!!....great job. i can relate

  • this is actually Prt.1

    not prt.3

  • loved it!

  • she is the TRUTH, i love this piece

  • "although in my world i was his girl, so i would pretend 2 be his wife"

    most mistakes us women do..

    great piece of poetry

  • Word!

  • i remember this....I know this girl, matter fact i know 2 girls like this. This 1 girl i know look like and kinda talk like Dana too....Both of the girls i know got prenent by the niggas tho.

  • i can definitely relate to this, but we live and learn!! and like she says, i will difinitely do it, but for my husband!!!

  • That was so pertinent right now...wow! @ pry3i the two words are Raw Dogged

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  • AMEN!!!!

  • amazing piece of lyrical art.

    1:20 - 1:23

    ... for the times that we

    (something)

    cause he lost all the rubbers...

    damn. im sure those two words are poignant. just cant make 'em out.

  • "for the time that we'd raw dog cause he lost all the rubbers."

    haha my ex hit me with that donnell jones shit too. daggerrrr

  • nah its raw dog. you can check urban dictionary if youd like. i can understand why you would hear that though it does run together.

  • I feel you on this one...she's tellin tha truth on this one

  • Hell Yeah....need I say more?

  • this is the first part of this poem not the

    3rd

  • I LIKE :]

  • This poem is empowering on so many levels i really love this show and think that it was a stupid idea to cancel it.

    oh yeah, this poem is on FIRE.

  • innooo wat she talkin bout goin thrroo diss shitt noww kmttt

  • rate my naked poem

  • i love this 4real

    rate

  • go head girll

  • this is part one dammit!

  • this is tight as shit!

  • wow

    so speaking to my situation right now

    i think there are alot of us give all our heart so we can receive someone's back, but it does not work like that

  • my fav!!

  • SHE BAD

  • I did a project on this woman!!! She is wonderful...

  • this is part ONE not THREE

  • speak girl!

  • This is poetry!!! That is something that almost every woman can relate to. Just last week I was saying the same thing "I'll do it all again just next time for my husband and not for some nigga i call my friend"

  • this is part 1 there is no pt 3

  • I love her.

  • Right.

  • does anybody know where you can download this to your ipod or something???

  • You know this!!! Thats why we need the husband first...

    This poem & Tisha Benson's He Called It A Blessing, speak truth... commit first all the rest come beautifully after...

    Love thiss

  • ... "I would do it all again, just next time for my husband and not that nigga I call my friend." Love that line. ;)

  • Dam! I'm feelin' this!She spoke the words I've been knowing but not saying. Amazing!

  • she is so amazing, chills through my body. i can relate. does anyone else have any other videos of her besides this one and the other wife woman friend poems?

  • she has one called sweet sixteeen

  • i love that poem very moving

  • damn. very truthful for me.

  • danas words are so powerful

  • Preach girl Preach i feel everything u sayin....

  • oooooooooooooooooooo son dat was hot

  • oh man does this woman preach....CHURCH!!!!

  • I have just gone through this - and believe - the healing starts when we ask ourselves that fantastic question 'am I reaching my potential'? Change happens after that! She is amazing!

  • I am loving this and living it...

  • you are not alone....

  • the punchline is AMAZING. Hits you, BAM!

  • damn i know exactly how she feels too,damn this shit is the tops!!!

  • I've watched this sooo many times damn Dana Gilmore speaks truth! Im feeling this!

  • DANA!!!!! bitch! everytime i hear this shit i get chills!

  • love this

  • That was so tight, snaps sista!

  • You spoke to my heart and of my heart. Thank you girl for the inspiration!!!

  • this was some real talk. it's amazing how no matter what background, nationality,sex or upbringing, we can all say we've played the fool at some point. ? is have we learned.

  • Amazing!

  • That is so f**king true..You go girl

  • girl i hear that