I sure do feel her!! Thats some real sh*t when she went into eating all the food, having the remote and sharing that one side of your bed...lol. Makes you realize just how much you will sacrifice for the man you choose to be with.
"Just because im crying yall dont mean that im the victim it just means i was scared to let him go cuz some other chick might get him, & that was my fault cuz it was my decision i shoulda never put my heart in my minds position but i couldnt shake him he was like a bad habit & all this for a nigga that was just average doin average nigga shit" ooo i love that part
man i agree with her, sometimes we give ourselves and our closest keepsakes to a man thats not ours, we get so caught up in the fantasy and the fake image that this man is now apart of your life and belongs to you, but in reality...stray dogs dont belong to me nor you!! lol smh in every relationship its important to know in the beginning where you stand, so you never get your feelings hurt in the end!!
"And All This For A Nigga That Was Average Doin Average Nigga Shit. Like Talkin Out The Side Of His Neck And Thinkin Wit His Dick. But I Must Admit He's The One I Wanted To Commit. So Either I Wasnt Livin Up To My Full Potential Or I Was Just An Average Chick"
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This issss my shiiiiiiiiiit!! I used to slap this back in '08 when I was going through hard times wit my (EX)NIGGA!! No lieeee this made me think so very different!! DANA WHERE U AT? U NEED TO COME OUT THE CAVE WIT MORE DEEP SHIT!! I'M FEELIN YO STYLE!! U GOT FLOWS FAHREAL!!!
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I see a lot of black women give their teenage years and their entire 20s to "average niggas" who do not put a ring on their finger. They end up unmarrieda t 30 years old and pointing the finger at everyone but themselves. This sista actually did something that a lot of women can't do and that take responsibility for her own actions. She actually did some major self reflection and corrected her mistakes. She went hard on this one! Big ups to this sista. She gets much respect.
@norcalnupe I couldnt agree with you more, I'm going thru the same thing in her poem and Im just 21. I'm glad I seen this cuz Lord knows if I didnt I could be 30years old 4 kids and not married
I can't get enough of this, even after all these years. I love the feedback from the crowd, especially from the women. The way they all say "hmmmm" when something nice is said... :)
That's an example of good self reflection right there. She blamed herself for the time she wasted & now she know better. BEAUTIFUL!!! I love this. I'm gonna show this to everybody!! lol
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at least she realized what happened, all the bitches clappin are the dumb one they aint know what was going on tell she told them, listen to the ooos and auhhhs. bitches are stupid, but she broke some of these niggaz down
i remember this....I know this girl, matter fact i know 2 girls like this. This 1 girl i know look like and kinda talk like Dana too....Both of the girls i know got prenent by the niggas tho.
This is poetry!!! That is something that almost every woman can relate to. Just last week I was saying the same thing "I'll do it all again just next time for my husband and not for some nigga i call my friend"
she is so amazing, chills through my body. i can relate. does anyone else have any other videos of her besides this one and the other wife woman friend poems?
I have just gone through this - and believe - the healing starts when we ask ourselves that fantastic question 'am I reaching my potential'? Change happens after that! She is amazing!
this was some real talk. it's amazing how no matter what background, nationality,sex or upbringing, we can all say we've played the fool at some point. ? is have we learned.
def part one tho
sydnetmoore315 5 days ago
I luv this one, and the second part also
shante86100 1 month ago
word. thats real shit!
haymonstermack 1 month ago
...this is part 1=.=
Ifeelpurpleful 2 months ago 3
had this on my phone for years....and still loves it
itayroo 2 months ago
"Told me life was a journey and he's ready to explore this shit" Wellll...
peachesandherb91 2 months ago in playlist dana gilmore "wife..woman..friend pt.1
Maybe if dykes get off the computer and hit the treadmil,and check your nasty attitudes maybe you could get a man!!!!!
GTR1nissan 3 months ago
i jus went threw this shit...she was speakin to me
ladyduce2012 3 months ago
WWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW
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tiecethepoet 4 months ago
I sure do feel her!! Thats some real sh*t when she went into eating all the food, having the remote and sharing that one side of your bed...lol. Makes you realize just how much you will sacrifice for the man you choose to be with.
KellBeezy28 4 months ago
I'm that "friend" for sure! Im done!
blackpower9 4 months ago
I only wish she was my lady...together we could easily form an incredible open mic duo
507papa 5 months ago
"Just because im crying yall dont mean that im the victim it just means i was scared to let him go cuz some other chick might get him, & that was my fault cuz it was my decision i shoulda never put my heart in my minds position but i couldnt shake him he was like a bad habit & all this for a nigga that was just average doin average nigga shit" ooo i love that part
janinewow805 5 months ago 4
I Was To Busy Bitch Jumpn Nd Cryn Like I Was Goin Hit Him
Kute4u09 6 months ago
I think you just told my story girl.
InternetRock 6 months ago
"And all that time i spent mad at him, hell, i shoulda been mad at ME"
PREACH
bkempress718 6 months ago
damn straight
lilithmack 6 months ago
Killed it!!!!!!!
BigyounginJackson09 6 months ago
LOVED this !
becca1699 7 months ago
You go Girl (Martin voice) haha
ParisEntertainment1 7 months ago
"I SHOULD HAVE NEVER PUT MY HEART IN MY MINDS POSITION !" GIRRRLLL YOU BETTA SAY THAT !
MrsSouldiva1 7 months ago
lol shes cold
melonynaytt 7 months ago in playlist nice***
She went hard!!
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mslsc28 9 months ago
Go Headd Girl !!! .
iamkinahfresh 9 months ago
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!
kellogs305 10 months ago
Wow....beautiful.
Itpours 10 months ago
PREEEEEAAACCCCHHHHH! omg. definitely been there
jadoreparisss 10 months ago
OMG This is bad ass!!!!!
janeil84 10 months ago
man i agree with her, sometimes we give ourselves and our closest keepsakes to a man thats not ours, we get so caught up in the fantasy and the fake image that this man is now apart of your life and belongs to you, but in reality...stray dogs dont belong to me nor you!! lol smh in every relationship its important to know in the beginning where you stand, so you never get your feelings hurt in the end!!
jaygorgeous1 11 months ago 2
ah shoulda bin mad at me.............hype shid
MsKayrose 1 year ago
wow!! this really inspired me i feel so lifted :)
LOVELYB7 1 year ago
THIS SO TRUE AND REAL SHE IS A SMART WOMAN WHO SEE THING IN A NEW LIGHT AFTER HIM. SHE LIVED AND LEARNED, I LOVE THIS POEM
wisewordss 1 year ago 2
I feel this so much. Now I have a boyfriend who treats me like a queen.
slenderlatina 1 year ago 3
"And All This For A Nigga That Was Average Doin Average Nigga Shit. Like Talkin Out The Side Of His Neck And Thinkin Wit His Dick. But I Must Admit He's The One I Wanted To Commit. So Either I Wasnt Livin Up To My Full Potential Or I Was Just An Average Chick"
ShortyRedd10 1 year ago 20
I love this soooo much, its amazing!
CGrand88 1 year ago
I love this shit...
Ariiscut3 1 year ago
how can this poem be disliked?
MsHIPHOPaintDEAD 1 year ago 5
this is part one
WildPassion19 1 year ago 2
beautiful poem
melbingkoy 1 year ago
mos def is stupid lmao "sit yo asses down...sit yo asses down." lol
lalafab2011 1 year ago 3
i know some of y'all can relate to this....
tami1mac 1 year ago 3
this is part one.........
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mznonchalant08 1 year ago
even though his name is not on the lease he's got sh!t in my house that's off limits to me like "his side of My bed" and "His stash of weed".
Crazitude 1 year ago 3
that man who got a main chick freeloading off her in her house and aint married...probably disliked this
maryamcfeb93 1 year ago 2
every woman living with a man (not married) needs this advice.
mynevaehbaby 1 year ago 2
LOVE IT!!!!!
monee81 1 year ago
"Never put your heart in your minds position..." best advice in the poem
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triplefent29 1 year ago
true stuff feel u
forribidden 1 year ago
where is the damn love button lol
Zaafirathebeautiful 1 year ago 20
all females need to listen to this
2003123456 1 year ago
man i feel her im going thru the same thing
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p8anut 1 year ago
this iznt part 3....itz dah 1st one
princessmom2010 1 year ago
I love her poetry and she is fine as hell
arockystart 1 year ago
This issss my shiiiiiiiiiit!! I used to slap this back in '08 when I was going through hard times wit my (EX)NIGGA!! No lieeee this made me think so very different!! DANA WHERE U AT? U NEED TO COME OUT THE CAVE WIT MORE DEEP SHIT!! I'M FEELIN YO STYLE!! U GOT FLOWS FAHREAL!!!
jackylicous 1 year ago 3
there is no part 3 this is part 1
AhLaJuicee 1 year ago 6
mh, girl tell it like it is! Fa real!
monpathomp 1 year ago
WOW
franciso7 1 year ago
seriously WHERE is part 1??
winklesnorf 1 year ago
@winklesnorf there is no aprt 3 this is part 1
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p8anut 1 year ago
that was good, i almost started clappin in the library...;^)
1yungjmoney 1 year ago
Love the part where she says she was a friend, not a wife, and should have acted in that capacity. That's wisdom!
redeemed2bfree 1 year ago
Anybody know where to find part 1?
leeleefromthed 1 year ago
there out of order this is part 1. the one where she is wearing black has longer hair is part 2
Floetry30 1 year ago
reminds me of somethin...
bluedragon610 1 year ago
Dana it has been a few years ago when we met in screenwriting class, but I always come back to this poem it is so relevant to my life. Love it girl.
jameelahbf 1 year ago
"All y'all sit your asses down, sit your asses down, sit your asses down".
This was so good,people did not want to stop the standing ovation :).
Troublesome2008 1 year ago
She always does her thing...Part 2 is the shit also!!!
Toekieyo 1 year ago
I love it!
KAhenley 1 year ago
DAMN SHE IZ SO TIGHT I LUV THIZ PEOM
aunjel100 1 year ago
she kept 100 on this poem!
777brownie 1 year ago
too real!
rip81106 2 years ago 2
She did her thing on that one. You can see the pain that she took control of. LORD HAVE MERCY girl. You did the damn thang! Great performance!
KountrySyde516 2 years ago 4
I see a lot of black women give their teenage years and their entire 20s to "average niggas" who do not put a ring on their finger. They end up unmarrieda t 30 years old and pointing the finger at everyone but themselves. This sista actually did something that a lot of women can't do and that take responsibility for her own actions. She actually did some major self reflection and corrected her mistakes. She went hard on this one! Big ups to this sista. She gets much respect.
norcalnupe 2 years ago 8
@norcalnupe I couldnt agree with you more, I'm going thru the same thing in her poem and Im just 21. I'm glad I seen this cuz Lord knows if I didnt I could be 30years old 4 kids and not married
ModelNHoney 1 year ago
I can't get enough of this, even after all these years. I love the feedback from the crowd, especially from the women. The way they all say "hmmmm" when something nice is said... :)
Troublesome2008 2 years ago 3
DAMN! couldn't even wait for it to finish...had to login to add this to my favorites. This woman is the Truth...
seeingreen 2 years ago 5
isnt this part 1
kyssyss 2 years ago 4
Wow thats what I'm talking about.
okdeedee 2 years ago 7
Funny how a piece I wrote 5 years ago sound like this. The girl is good.
Tempestuouswoman 2 years ago
That's an example of good self reflection right there. She blamed herself for the time she wasted & now she know better. BEAUTIFUL!!! I love this. I'm gonna show this to everybody!! lol
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at least she realized what happened, all the bitches clappin are the dumb one they aint know what was going on tell she told them, listen to the ooos and auhhhs. bitches are stupid, but she broke some of these niggaz down
natahalaboi 2 years ago
this is what happens when we get blinded by our own attraction and ego, and we fail to see how the other person is feeling....
tg343441 2 years ago 4
She left a nigga speechless, thats how real this poetry is. NO Retort for this one.
brotherminister1930 2 years ago 9
YES!
babygurl59033 2 years ago 2
oooh my fuckin god
she aint neva said it no better
this shit deep and real ass fuck
lk3k3 2 years ago 2
AND All this for an average N***a doing average N***a s%@t....Either I wasn't living up to my potential or I was just the average chick...
Music4always 2 years ago 154
That IS whats up KUDOS To her!!!!
HollyGOrtega1 2 years ago 7
YOU an average woman? Wow. They talk about hypersexuality...this is hyperintellectuality
thefriqueisin 2 years ago 2
dat was hard
Moehow 2 years ago
oh hell naw! shit that was off limits like his side of my bed, AND my stash of my weed111
hazeliceeyes 2 years ago 6
...'he hit me with the forehead kiss.'
Lawlz808 2 years ago 3
soo qood but yeah its the 1st part
HTSCourtz 2 years ago
love this poem but it's not prt 3
mztifah 2 years ago 2
this isnt pt 3...
duckytreasure 2 years ago
"..even tho his name is not on my lease, got shit in my house thats off limits to me; like his side of MY bed.."
sophiasongz 2 years ago 7
so dope...
msbrownexclusivetv 2 years ago 2
Yea this was one of my favorites from that season of Def Poetry. I miss that show so much. I liked Def Poetry even more than I like Brave New Voices.
Natashalulu 2 years ago
I LOVE THIS POEM..NOTHIN BUT THE TRUTH
lovethoug 2 years ago 7
This isnt part 3.. its part 1.. its only 2 parts to it
mcalways 2 years ago 2
dis a real good poem
shawtygotteeth 2 years ago 2
love her
miztosky 2 years ago 3
wellll......
for2netsis 2 years ago 3
omg... i love this poem. she tight!
nylajacobs17 2 years ago 6
Damn.. that was nothing but the truth. Alot of us women do this..
only1tonya 2 years ago 11
Best URBAN POEM!
Real Talk indeed!!!
thickblkpa 2 years ago 8
She is beautiful! YOu go girl!
mikimiki1010 2 years ago
Word!
Real Talk!
CYaya88 2 years ago
I LOVE THIS SPOKEN WORD!!! Its so sad I know it wrd for wrd she is all that!!
shiradelayed 2 years ago
this is just RIGHT!!!
kpandobabe 2 years ago
this is the shit!!....great job. i can relate
macaronipie 2 years ago
this is actually Prt.1
not prt.3
ElonnaMack 2 years ago
loved it!
Viixen89 2 years ago
she is the TRUTH, i love this piece
odamae86 3 years ago
"although in my world i was his girl, so i would pretend 2 be his wife"
most mistakes us women do..
great piece of poetry
souzieq17 3 years ago 3
Word!
tribulations101 3 years ago
i remember this....I know this girl, matter fact i know 2 girls like this. This 1 girl i know look like and kinda talk like Dana too....Both of the girls i know got prenent by the niggas tho.
CertifiedGwopBoy 3 years ago
i can definitely relate to this, but we live and learn!! and like she says, i will difinitely do it, but for my husband!!!
luly1975 3 years ago
That was so pertinent right now...wow! @ pry3i the two words are Raw Dogged
misspoetry1 3 years ago
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fattymarley 3 years ago
AMEN!!!!
sojustcallmejane 3 years ago
amazing piece of lyrical art.
1:20 - 1:23
... for the times that we
(something)
cause he lost all the rubbers...
damn. im sure those two words are poignant. just cant make 'em out.
pry3i 3 years ago
"for the time that we'd raw dog cause he lost all the rubbers."
haha my ex hit me with that donnell jones shit too. daggerrrr
balanoff 3 years ago
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no for all the times we rawed off cause he lost all the rubbers. poetry blends sometimes. but im a poet and i have an ear
nequa19902006 3 years ago
nah its raw dog. you can check urban dictionary if youd like. i can understand why you would hear that though it does run together.
balanoff 3 years ago
I feel you on this one...she's tellin tha truth on this one
Purplestorm009 3 years ago
Hell Yeah....need I say more?
CayGem 3 years ago
this is the first part of this poem not the
3rd
tweetie35 3 years ago
I LIKE :]
oneluv4musiq 3 years ago
This poem is empowering on so many levels i really love this show and think that it was a stupid idea to cancel it.
oh yeah, this poem is on FIRE.
yordana19 3 years ago
innooo wat she talkin bout goin thrroo diss shitt noww kmttt
ashatay 3 years ago 2
rate my naked poem
MI88YRISSAPOOH 3 years ago 2
i love this 4real
rate
MI88YRISSAPOOH 3 years ago
go head girll
yahgirlsofresh12 3 years ago
this is part one dammit!
lyrical18 3 years ago
this is tight as shit!
wetwetmutoni 3 years ago
wow
so speaking to my situation right now
i think there are alot of us give all our heart so we can receive someone's back, but it does not work like that
walkamileinmine 3 years ago 3
my fav!!
YoMoMsB1989 3 years ago
SHE BAD
bigg216will 3 years ago 3
I did a project on this woman!!! She is wonderful...
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raquelpauline 3 years ago
this is part ONE not THREE
LadyPhoenix5 3 years ago 3
speak girl!
thepinkdva 3 years ago
This is poetry!!! That is something that almost every woman can relate to. Just last week I was saying the same thing "I'll do it all again just next time for my husband and not for some nigga i call my friend"
triniOrchid 3 years ago 3
this is part 1 there is no pt 3
coolncrazy2 3 years ago
I love her.
crazysexycoolmami 3 years ago 3
Right.
sistalinda 3 years ago
does anybody know where you can download this to your ipod or something???
keev1989 3 years ago 5
You know this!!! Thats why we need the husband first...
This poem & Tisha Benson's He Called It A Blessing, speak truth... commit first all the rest come beautifully after...
Love thiss
NatSimTho 3 years ago
... "I would do it all again, just next time for my husband and not that nigga I call my friend." Love that line. ;)
slenderlatina 3 years ago 2
Dam! I'm feelin' this!She spoke the words I've been knowing but not saying. Amazing!
slenderlatina 3 years ago
she is so amazing, chills through my body. i can relate. does anyone else have any other videos of her besides this one and the other wife woman friend poems?
crystalhenderson927 3 years ago
she has one called sweet sixteeen
Zambria17 3 years ago
i love that poem very moving
2quiet88 3 years ago
damn. very truthful for me.
ushtenme 3 years ago
danas words are so powerful
mrzjones 3 years ago 4
Preach girl Preach i feel everything u sayin....
bronxchick162 3 years ago 6
oooooooooooooooooooo son dat was hot
njiri51293 3 years ago 4
oh man does this woman preach....CHURCH!!!!
boomswsh 3 years ago 5
I have just gone through this - and believe - the healing starts when we ask ourselves that fantastic question 'am I reaching my potential'? Change happens after that! She is amazing!
Frantigal 3 years ago 2
I am loving this and living it...
1ofgdsangels 3 years ago 5
you are not alone....
boomswsh 3 years ago 3
the punchline is AMAZING. Hits you, BAM!
MiaPiaTyralla 3 years ago 4
damn i know exactly how she feels too,damn this shit is the tops!!!
SexPlayyer07 3 years ago 2
I've watched this sooo many times damn Dana Gilmore speaks truth! Im feeling this!
islandbeauty4 3 years ago 5
DANA!!!!! bitch! everytime i hear this shit i get chills!
DanisKrazy 3 years ago 5
love this
reduellc 3 years ago 2
That was so tight, snaps sista!
poetress77 3 years ago 2
You spoke to my heart and of my heart. Thank you girl for the inspiration!!!
Mariestls 3 years ago 8
this was some real talk. it's amazing how no matter what background, nationality,sex or upbringing, we can all say we've played the fool at some point. ? is have we learned.
TOKENSMOM 3 years ago 5
Amazing!
LGzonedout 3 years ago 3
That is so f**king true..You go girl
QTbabygurl 3 years ago 3
girl i hear that
regrat005 3 years ago 3