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  • Wonderful.

  • @MultiVerseUniVerse Thanks for that !!

  • Goodness! Such wonderful work and substance - you have truely amazing mind and eyes Xxx

  • @EmyNicolai Belated thanks for comment..Emy !!

  • This will haunt me for quite some time.

  • @WyldeAbandyn Belayed reply Wylde...hope it did not haunt you !!...for too long..

  • Oh god! This was incredible. I'm so sorry I didn't see it much sooner.

    You are a brilliant poet and story teller and your video editing is superb!

    I'm going to PM you at your other name.

  • @Perroquet51 Thank you very much for that.

  • How can someone not identify with this ?

  • @tanx2u2 I s'pose so...thanks

  • Excellent. Your perspective is enlightening, and your presentation is as always excellent.

  • @sonofwalt Thanks so much son of walt...is walt your pa ?

  • No, my pa is named Raymond. :) It's a reference to Walt Whitman. A professor of mine once argued that Walt was the father of modern American poetry. I was looking for a screen name at the time, and it seemed to follow.

  • Lovely lovely Walt. What a sweet man he was...no better person to be a son of..

  • Great video and poem. I must say this piece has impact.

  • @tinySpectacle I did thank you for your comment...but just see now it did not post...so BELATED THANKS...!

  • Yes.

  • @ThePigstrotter Thank you

  • Like this very much. Excellent treatment and tone is just right. Well done.

  • @Caspar33 thanks for your nice comment...and for watching..

  • For me, the solitary life is the most desirable and comfortable state of all but I know many people are lonely and adrift by themselves -- your piece illustrates this very well and I like the scolding image at the end -- there are worse conditions than solitude and far worse companions than oneself!

  • @liz1060 I like your description of the piece...I could not have put it better myself...perfect..I am especially interested in what you say about the end...ie the child's companion...I had not seen the vulture as thus... interesting...Boas Festas.

  • This is an amazing peiece...I so love it...everything about it - the words are strong with visuals to give it further depth. I could go on & on...but time right now is shorter than I am & I've a road to travel later tonight.

  • @NiteBlogger Thanks Nite...Boas Festas..

  • I like Ferlinghetti's poem. Good work. 5*

  • @vinegarwine thanks for watching and for your comment.

  • This is your poem I assume. Great work. And your voice... OMG... usually I don't care for background music when one recites a poem, but your delivery is so good I don't even really notice it... actually, why even put music in the back ground when one is gifted with a voice like yours? Love it! 5*/faved (again ;P )

  • Yes... all my poems apart from the Sexton and the Blake.. Music..? Well, there are always sounds in our lives...it is my muddy way of doing it...I guess... Whereas yr 50's Gangster delivery is tremendously cool without sound..!

  • Touching poem here. I love the visual metaphor and the look of the film. I think you speak of universal experiences. But however much we are surrounded by friends there are simply some experiences that we cannot share, yet the expression of them has us all nodding, knowingly.

  • Thanks...for watching...and the comments...

  • I love this poem. Dedicating myself to children most of my life, your words resonate in my heart and spirit. Superb!

    Your friend, Hunter

  • Thank you Hunter...thanks..

  • I relate 100% Great vid - music, visual.

    amazing words!

  • Thank you very much for that. ppreciated.

  • This was beyond resonant — so much of what's in this poem has been floating with me for months. Mm.

  • Thanks you very much for watching...strange you should have been feeling some of this stuff...

  • Thanks for watching...and for your interesting comment.

  • With the wind howling, the rain pouring and the sky a grey grey, that last picture has gripped my mind. I have seen it before. Good words from you. Our moods are trivial compared to this.

  • Thanks for watching...enjoy Amsterdam...

  • very well done, as a person who enjoys to write herself I took much pleasure in this piece of art;)

    **bravo**

  • Thanks Blueclouds...and thanks for the sub...I have you subbed on xyzllii...

  • That was masterful!!!

    I was reading about the guy who took that last picture, a few days ago. I think that he just recently died.

  • Thanks Bob . Yes , the guy took his life I believe. Apparently he left the child to her fate after taking the photo...tho that is what I read rather than what I know.

  • That's right, he did take his own life. And he did leave her to her fate. Anyway, that's what the article that I read, said.

  • mymoosejaw sent me. Made me subscribe. Cheers.

  • Oops...I hope were not straight-jacketed into this...lol...thanks anyway.

  • OMG!

    When I think you've done your best; you show me I'm wrong!

    Such talent needs a Stage!

  • Thank you so much Tinkerlove. I appreciate your words.

  • Sigh.

  • Sorry to be so cheerless. As I said to Longhaired , I must try harder to write happy stuff...lol.

  • *goosebumps*

  • Really ?....yes...well I am prone to being dark and creepy. I keep trying to write nice happy things...but somehow...I fail...must try harder.

  • sheer poetry & beautiful intimate area. thnks !

  • Thank you very much for taking the time to look.

  • i like this. *******

    thanx for the share dave.

    in my favs

  • Thank you very much for stopping by bugsme10. Appreciated.

  • Its not actually snow but warped effects to give it an ephemeral/dream feel. Thanks...

  • We are all alone - all the more so in the end.

  • Thanks for your comment.

  • Power packed work here, friend!! 5+stars. I worked in North Africa three times and witnessed dying children too many times; sometimes i could do something, sometimes not. Cheers, Hunter.

  • Thanks so much Hunter...thanks..

  • This poem is the best.

  • Wow...you were quick...thanks so much...I mean it.

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