YTP:Mario & Luigi: The Search for the Prince of Spaghetti

[WhatAboutTheLlama]

I always wondered. Where is the whole Mario thing from?

[genomallow]

Hey Spookers. It's me Kaboomie. It's a pretty ok poop. I gave it a 3/5

[OctavioTheWealthy]

Wassup, man! I have viewed this, and I find it rather well done for a first youtube poop! Keep up the good work!

[SpookerstheSpoo]

Thanks!

[SpookerstheSpoo]

Ok, thanks for the tip, Voxx! The part where Mario was jumping was just to put something unexpected in.

[Voxxdude]

The plot was pretty good in the beggining, but kind of lost it's way after a while. I had a list of great sound editer programs, but I lost it. :C

[Voxxdude]

There are certain parts that should not have been repeated because they have just been overused way too much. And the one part with the screen all messed up just wasted too much time. The sound editing could have been better, but seeing as this is your first video, nobody is the greatest on their first try.

Some things to improve:

•Don't use overused repeated parts. To know what is overused, watch other videos

•Don't take up so much time on one part unless it's worth it

•Better sound edits