You people who are leaving comments in the past few months are really stupid. This was uploaded 5 years ago! I'm sure that Kevin fighter 2 has improved in his skills by now and probably has better hardware AND software that was not yet available 5 years ago. Why are you people so ignorant?
sure itchycitizen , go to `animations point cz ` (if your brain enough to understand to link!!!)all jobs belong me ,I advice you ,beforeyou speak think twice ,let me see your jobs or you STF
u so funny, why you are aggrassive, because you dont have anything to show us as job ;) ,take it easy and do what you wrote to all :D haha i am just smiling your anger...so you dont have anything to show? so STF...hahaaa
I never said `i am greatest` but I put on the table what I have done and I think its enough to say about above animtion something...Show us WHO YOU ARE!? or YOU SCARE or YOU DONT HAVE ANYTHING!? you freaking funny guy STF plssss:D
well itchycitizen i can see your nature in your last couple message lets see ok? you said your ethic is not say `terrible` but it allow to call a person as `anal gape,flying fart,OTFT,Fucking Top,prick,suck dick` and you call all them as your nature...you need a doctor man!
I never said `i am greatest` but I put on the table what I have done and you said `if i dont have anything STF, and i showed what i have done by moral courage and I think its enough to say something about above animtion even i wrote just for fun not as professional eye!...so by your words, TIME TO SEE YOURS! SHOW US WHO YOU ARE!? WHAT IS YOUR ABILITY!? or by your word` STF` please ,you are being funny with your anger
wow really good, im getting maya in the next couple of days, ive been lookign for inspiration on what toi try out when i get it and looks like ive found something.
ps. can the people arguing please stop? wats the point? your never gunna meat in real life.
Its some haters out there, look maya is a very hard piece of software. this person is not an acclaimed professional (i hope) this is a good piece of work considering how complicated 3d animating is. how about giving constructive criticism instead of bad mouthing people you wont even meet or say it in there face if you ever meet them.
I can recomend you to use less that fade to white transition. Use cuts instead. Every transition has its own connotation and you're not using them properly.
hey r u mad....... u know how much time is taken for modeling when compared to the powerfull maya..........u really should try out maya...man...its cool...just once........
the models in any 3d program can look real, it depends on who's making them, what textures are used how well the uv mapping is and so on.... It has nothing to do with the software that's used
Maya is by far the best when it comes to animations 'simple example motionclips beeni n maya for over 4 years now cinema4d implemented it and 3ds is way behidn when it comes to that...)
lol no offence but this is pathetic. I am aware of how difficult it is, but maybe you shouldn't release anything until you are actually making something.. brilliant
crap camera movements and angle controls, your timeline is way too linear, crap storyline (if there's even supposed to be any story to this!), really bad character animation, crap music that doesn't even suit the video, crap use of sound FX, bad texturing and bad character modelling (we can even see the seams on that character!!). If you're gonna do something, do it well! You haven't paid attention to your models nor animation! This looks like something out of a primitive modelling software.
I know perfectly how hard it is, even the more reason to learn it properly. Just because its hard you DO NOT need to settle for second best just because "its hard", using its difficulty as an excuse. I am currently studying Maya using free online tutorials and I can make animations that are better than that in this video. I have not posted any videos yet because even though they're better than this, they're still not good enough to be posted online. i will only post when I cannot get any better.
we just want to see .Just post them videos online , we don't need a lecture on what is bets, good or average at best. Not everyone wants to work for Pixar and not everyone is using a combination of maya zbrush and motion capture to complete a scene.many people keep quiet about it because we can then mesure workflow and the quality of the output. Just post that "not so good" video of yours.
Obviously some people strive for perfection and it's those people who cares whether it's good or not. It's also those people who innovate because they need their videos to look exactly as it did in their imagination thus go through great lengths to bring to you something you haven't seen before. It involves technique and most importantly motivation. This video lacks so many things it will take ages for me to write them all down. "This is youtube, noone cares bla bla" is an understatement.
I already told you 'the point' - twice to be precise - but you missed it. I very much doubt you could write down an entire book of what's poorly animated in ice age based on the simple fact that your videos are worst than ice age itself. In fact you don't even understand how to render your frames so you don't end up with the random black dots that exists in your renders. Thus, again the point is to know how to refine techniques, even something as simple as to 'How to Render your scene properly'.
1 you haven't seen a single one of my finished movies so you can't judge them
2 i can't write down of what's poorly animated because mine are wore but you can while you don't have a single oen yp...
oh and for the black dots comment lol, they're not random, they're a reflection of a sheet of paper that's moving on the other side of the room wgen it blocks the lamp there ;)
maybe the word wip doesn't ring a bell to you but it does to everyone else ;)
And i hereby challenge you to enter the shortfilm festival of cannes next year because i want to see how your oh so perfect animation will match up with mine ;)
In contrary to you i don't have to spawn a lot fo crap i can rely on simple facts and achievements ;)
while you can't even show a single work you've made ;)
1 I can judge anything you post youtube so don't cry when you are rightfully criticized.
2 I can write about poor animation because I know what's right thus having the ability to judge my own work to realise where I'm going wrong as well as ensuring the videos are perfect before posting them to receive proper criticism for better and effective improvements.
You don't fool anyone by saying the black dots are "reflection of a sheet of paper that's moving..." that is absurd. You think everyone is as much a fool as you are and that they don't know how to troubleshoot. You are thus very wrong. You clearly don't know the concept of caching and retouching. Understand how to use Mental Ray and Raytrace so you don't receive such newbie problems before claiming you know what you are doing, because judging by your videos, you clearly don't.
baaahahaha!! When you claimed you won "14 short film festivals last year" I immediately laughed in disbelief knowing you've just dug your little self a hole. And I was right! short film festivals record last year all have different winners and I'm certain you're not one of them. Your stuff is so poor I'm quite enjoying ripping you apart here. It's not a question of whether i'm not worth your time but it's simply the fact that you're not as high as my level yet.
you clearly don't seem to know there are 4862 shortfilmfestivals a year and i'm pretty sure you don't even have a clue where they all are nor what the names of the winenrs are, nor what categories they're divided in nor which ones i won
so clearly all ya do is gloat and do nothing
i'm waiting for you to bring one single movie on youtube that proves you're anywhere descent ;)
but seriously mr know it all, yo'ure a 15 year old kiddo who thinks he knows everything but that's jsut an illusion
O right you're obviously the bitch who doesn't understand the concept of privacy. I don't understand how your little intelligence gave you the idea that a musician cannot also be an animation artist. Your brain clearly doesn't have the capacity to have multiple set of skills. You've said enough already when you stupidly claimed to have won 14 awards which made us all laugh. A 15 yrs with better spelling than a 26yrs belgian prick? Wow your inferiority knows no bound, insulting yourself twice ;)
I've produced way more than you have and your spelling is still very bad even in your own language. I don't put my music online because idiots like yourself steals them as it's happened before. You see, my stuff is so good, people feel the need to risk copyright lawsuits and steal my shit because they know they can't reach my level. I never said you had low IQ because you obviously have no IQ at all. You are the maggot at the bottom of the pit, scraping what perfectionists like me throw away.
I think it's great, since all ingredients are here: an interesting character, a casual landscape, a funny story... Most of the improvements should be concentrated on the animation: try to simply watch people walk, run, spring, fight in the reality or in movies, to better catch the what will make your character's moves more realistic. Also try to give it more weight, shown by a more efficient gravity. You'll be amazed how a few changes can power up your animation :)
All of this is ALOT of fucking work, that's for sure, but the only real issue here is the animation.
If you could work on it a lil more it would really help push the story.
the weight is non existent, you can tell things are off from the first jump over the wall.
But even though I'm an animator, I've never been able to do a 2 min film, so don't think I'm against you, just sharing some hopefully honest and helpfull advice.
guys chill! give this guy a break, haha i would like to see you make a movie instead of commenting :D this is very good, its funny :D of course you could work more, but its also very good who knows how much you been animating?:D:D keep it up dude
Icarcus, Maya does not have a horrible interface...I use both max and maya. Max is great because it has limitations and set rules. Maya is completely customizable. Max is better for game art, and maya is better for movies. I personally prefer max, but everyone is different.
Well, i know that isn't easy and to make things like this take a while, i'm also new at this and i have to say that i liked, good work and i'm sure that you will do things better as the way you get some experience. =]
im afraid i dont like it because of the animations and modeling and the sound.
most of it didnt flow good enough and the movement of them was quite strange. im sorry but i have to be honest to you so you can create better animations.
well BLENDER is free, google sketchup free version too, only sketchup has low-quality renders and you can't make animations with that. Than you can also download illegal...
there wuz a lil girl walking down a hallway of an old hotel when a man stabbed her in the back of the head. if u just read this comment, then her dead body will appear in ur bedroom doorway unless u post this comment on 3 other videos
Ignore all the ppl that are givin u negaitve comments, this is really good, and u made it urself!! the amount of time gone to modelling, texturing, rigging, animating etc... i salute u!!!
A little awkward I'll admit but the first part of being a 3d artist or any artist is that you CAN NOT be afraid to jump into something and learn, that being said I personally think you did a very good job, and you illustrated some good basic principles. So, just work on your keyframe animation(Which is easier said than done) and if you want, you can do some study on human motion, and that will REALLY help you hash out some more realistic, natural looking motion.
One can tell that you've been working hard on this reel,but a lot of things have been left out that are super important.You have a fairly good character that needs some tweaking in terms of modeling,it's hard to tell about the rigging since the animation is'nt working quite well in terms of timing/posing etc..aside from the animation I think that you have an enviroment that works well here,the animation part bothers me alot.
check out some books with preston blair, it helps alot/ cheers
I really liked the rendering. Your point in animation is great, but it to.... static so to speak.
More fluidity would be better, a little faster frame rate to. I really liked the facial expression during some parts. If you can use more bump mapping in the scene that would probably spice the entire scene up even more.
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the character model is pretty good. everything else is really horrible, sorry.
the animation is lifeless, and all the movements are the same speed (with the exception of the awkward 'slow-mo' part). study the principles of good animation a bit before you jump into actually keyframing anything.
the sound is also really bad. other than the music, it's mostly silent, and what sounds do play are cheap. learn more about audio, and do the sound over. quiet sounds are just as important as loud ones.
ur obviously no pro animator but i will give u credit because maya is a really hard program to use. dude, if ur that good at using it, just create something funny, then u'll get less people saying its boring. well done, good work. two thumbs up from me
4get the people hating on your video. i bet they cant do better. i'm an artist and video producer. i think it was creative, ambitious, and i loved it!! keep up the good work. maybe we'll do a movie 2gether one day!
Bullshit.... really, really bad... I will call the Maya Shaolin monks , so they can capture you and train you not to violate our eyes with crap like this.
LMF song at the end!
JackieJea 4 days ago
nice animation for a beginner!
TheGennaios 2 months ago
how the hell did u do this in 2006
ameennazeer12 4 months ago
what music? i like the animation hahaa
IxKairixI 10 months ago
You people who are leaving comments in the past few months are really stupid. This was uploaded 5 years ago! I'm sure that Kevin fighter 2 has improved in his skills by now and probably has better hardware AND software that was not yet available 5 years ago. Why are you people so ignorant?
bluedragon94 10 months ago
HAVE IS NICE
garavaZebra 10 months ago
0:54 look at her hand... LOL
Airenos1 10 months ago
Lol, what's up with her clones face after she smacks the real ones arse
DoubleDangerCo 11 months ago
i cant belive that this movie have credits xDD
cldmusica 1 year ago
This is just sad. Try again
MrLegorampage 1 year ago
"entre nubes uveritas" that is a real animation who people doesn´t know yet..can´t believe this shit has 112443 views....
sergio1201sk8 1 year ago
wow that animation was horrible
nameno1elsehas 1 year ago
@nameno1elsehas lets see you do better
yibster2008 8 months ago
@yibster2008 if you're serious I feel bad for you. If you're tolling, good job.
nameno1elsehas 8 months ago
looool
Suprem3Gamer 1 year ago
who noe do 3d..can teach me..I need do a project..
mayhj1 1 year ago
does anyone know of a fairly effective program that can put an image format onto youtube without it looking grainy or shot with a cell phone camera?
camera.I have clip samples on my page to show
orion5175 1 year ago
I fear you forgot to use the spline tool!!
DementedDolphin 1 year ago
Remember... Nintendo 64
gilbertoum 1 year ago
what the ...
owais72 1 year ago
fucking retard
Heklep 1 year ago
you have to learn more my friend bout it's fine
mohtagx 1 year ago
the texture is quite good but the animation (movements) is not smooth. good for beginner.
miguelanghelo007 1 year ago 13
Nothing special. I know though how much work it requires, but still - nothing special
ViperDoomer 1 year ago
ooouu nice animation, i liked XD i´ve started work with 3d but... i'm not very good... anyway... you do it really nice ;D
Orogita 1 year ago
Hey dude, i think the textures are pretty cool, but ya need to work on your animation bro
Galdor2000 1 year ago
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degemeny 1 year ago
aha :D not bad
cezdavid 2 years ago
wtf how is a girl kevin?
b2c2552 2 years ago
really terrible :)
degemeny 2 years ago
could you do better ? if not STF, if you can post
the link so we can all judge your work !
itchycitizen 1 year ago
sure
degemeny 1 year ago
sure itchycitizen , go to `animations point cz ` (if your brain enough to understand to link!!!)all jobs belong me ,I advice you ,beforeyou speak think twice ,let me see your jobs or you STF
degemeny 1 year ago
look anal gape, you could be the greatest
animator living, not that i would give a flying
fart the way you disrespect a persons work
because you feel yours is superior !
if your work matches your ego it will be OTFT !
OVER THE FUCKING TOP, prick !
itchycitizen 1 year ago
i have seen a lot better and a lot worse, but i
would never say that it's terrible, not in my
nature !
If you wasn't suck a dick i would check your
work, as you are, go stick ya link !!
itchycitizen 1 year ago
u so funny, why you are aggrassive, because you dont have anything to show us as job ;) ,take it easy and do what you wrote to all :D haha i am just smiling your anger...so you dont have anything to show? so STF...hahaaa
degemeny 1 year ago
I never said `i am greatest` but I put on the table what I have done and I think its enough to say about above animtion something...Show us WHO YOU ARE!? or YOU SCARE or YOU DONT HAVE ANYTHING!? you freaking funny guy STF plssss:D
degemeny 1 year ago
well itchycitizen i can see your nature in your last couple message lets see ok? you said your ethic is not say `terrible` but it allow to call a person as `anal gape,flying fart,OTFT,Fucking Top,prick,suck dick` and you call all them as your nature...you need a doctor man!
degemeny 1 year ago
This has been flagged as spam show
I never said `i am greatest` but I put on the table what I have done and you said `if i dont have anything STF, and i showed what i have done by moral courage and I think its enough to say something about above animtion even i wrote just for fun not as professional eye!...so by your words, TIME TO SEE YOURS! SHOW US WHO YOU ARE!? WHAT IS YOUR ABILITY!? or by your word` STF` please ,you are being funny with your anger
degemeny 1 year ago
Muppet's like you bring out the worst in me !
itchycitizen 1 year ago
STF. its bette..as your word if you dont have anything to show people as your job...enjoy your silence
degemeny 1 year ago
que mierda
robertochriqui 2 years ago
worst animations i have seen lol
iamhereforever 2 years ago
@iamhereforever so why you seeing it -.-
1231231231100 1 year ago
@1231231231100 i didnt watch this completely..
iamhereforever 1 year ago
@iamhereforever ......ok
1231231231100 1 year ago
You just use Maya ?
jpetrucci91 2 years ago
READ at the end , MENSO!!!!!!
TuCariesMeMata 2 years ago
5 for effort
4 for design
1 for animation (not smooth, i hate lag.) if the animation was smoother it would be five, also the sky was red...wtf
spikeymike07 2 years ago
one word, badass
Freodeo 2 years ago
sucks...
llss882 2 years ago
not bad not bad kinda strange with the char it self but ok
TheOrcganic 2 years ago 3
wow really good, im getting maya in the next couple of days, ive been lookign for inspiration on what toi try out when i get it and looks like ive found something.
ps. can the people arguing please stop? wats the point? your never gunna meat in real life.
MykeUntold13 2 years ago
its not bad son, u still have a long way to get there ;D, all the elements exist but need to work more to perfect the art of maya
mahyar77 2 years ago
That girl in the animation scared the shit out of me, felt like watching some doll possessed. BTW, nice video for an amateur.
ramir233 2 years ago
Its some haters out there, look maya is a very hard piece of software. this person is not an acclaimed professional (i hope) this is a good piece of work considering how complicated 3d animating is. how about giving constructive criticism instead of bad mouthing people you wont even meet or say it in there face if you ever meet them.
Popem757 2 years ago
I can recomend you to use less that fade to white transition. Use cuts instead. Every transition has its own connotation and you're not using them properly.
Nice try, though.
Picmeo 2 years ago
did everybody sleep on the wrong side of thier moms? why is everybody hav to be such jack asses when it comes to somthin they cant do better?
TheRetroZombie 2 years ago
pice of crap
FAIZCOOL2008 2 years ago
maya suck 3ds max is the best
iinadir 2 years ago
hey r u mad....... u know how much time is taken for modeling when compared to the powerfull maya..........u really should try out maya...man...its cool...just once........
surebreeze 2 years ago
3ds max models looks real !
iinadir 2 years ago
the models in any 3d program can look real, it depends on who's making them, what textures are used how well the uv mapping is and so on.... It has nothing to do with the software that's used
Maya is by far the best when it comes to animations 'simple example motionclips beeni n maya for over 4 years now cinema4d implemented it and 3ds is way behidn when it comes to that...)
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
lol no offence but this is pathetic. I am aware of how difficult it is, but maybe you shouldn't release anything until you are actually making something.. brilliant
DjKingzy 2 years ago
really nice. most of you dont know how hard 3D animation is. And i guess she used a free 3D Animation program called Anim8or.
KyleHarner101 2 years ago
I hope that's ur first animation, man
mvszao 2 years ago
crap camera movements and angle controls, your timeline is way too linear, crap storyline (if there's even supposed to be any story to this!), really bad character animation, crap music that doesn't even suit the video, crap use of sound FX, bad texturing and bad character modelling (we can even see the seams on that character!!). If you're gonna do something, do it well! You haven't paid attention to your models nor animation! This looks like something out of a primitive modelling software.
darkembassymusic 2 years ago
lets see if you can do better. you do not know how hard 3D animating is.
KyleHarner101 2 years ago 2
I know perfectly how hard it is, even the more reason to learn it properly. Just because its hard you DO NOT need to settle for second best just because "its hard", using its difficulty as an excuse. I am currently studying Maya using free online tutorials and I can make animations that are better than that in this video. I have not posted any videos yet because even though they're better than this, they're still not good enough to be posted online. i will only post when I cannot get any better.
darkembassymusic 2 years ago 2
we just want to see .Just post them videos online , we don't need a lecture on what is bets, good or average at best. Not everyone wants to work for Pixar and not everyone is using a combination of maya zbrush and motion capture to complete a scene.many people keep quiet about it because we can then mesure workflow and the quality of the output. Just post that "not so good" video of yours.
cannoir 2 years ago
this is youtube, noone cares whether it's good or not.
Claimign you'vre vetter as someone else is easy if ya hide behind "but i think i still can do better before i post"
I only post wips on youtube no finals because youtube does compress everything and screws up the quality anyway....
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
Obviously some people strive for perfection and it's those people who cares whether it's good or not. It's also those people who innovate because they need their videos to look exactly as it did in their imagination thus go through great lengths to bring to you something you haven't seen before. It involves technique and most importantly motivation. This video lacks so many things it will take ages for me to write them all down. "This is youtube, noone cares bla bla" is an understatement.
darkembassymusic 2 years ago
wow i can write down an entire book of what's poorly animated in ice age, so what's your point?
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
I already told you 'the point' - twice to be precise - but you missed it. I very much doubt you could write down an entire book of what's poorly animated in ice age based on the simple fact that your videos are worst than ice age itself. In fact you don't even understand how to render your frames so you don't end up with the random black dots that exists in your renders. Thus, again the point is to know how to refine techniques, even something as simple as to 'How to Render your scene properly'.
darkembassymusic 2 years ago
quite funny,
1 you haven't seen a single one of my finished movies so you can't judge them
2 i can't write down of what's poorly animated because mine are wore but you can while you don't have a single oen yp...
oh and for the black dots comment lol, they're not random, they're a reflection of a sheet of paper that's moving on the other side of the room wgen it blocks the lamp there ;)
maybe the word wip doesn't ring a bell to you but it does to everyone else ;)
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
And i hereby challenge you to enter the shortfilm festival of cannes next year because i want to see how your oh so perfect animation will match up with mine ;)
In contrary to you i don't have to spawn a lot fo crap i can rely on simple facts and achievements ;)
while you can't even show a single work you've made ;)
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
it is indeed very funny,
1 I can judge anything you post youtube so don't cry when you are rightfully criticized.
2 I can write about poor animation because I know what's right thus having the ability to judge my own work to realise where I'm going wrong as well as ensuring the videos are perfect before posting them to receive proper criticism for better and effective improvements.
darkembassymusic 2 years ago
You don't fool anyone by saying the black dots are "reflection of a sheet of paper that's moving..." that is absurd. You think everyone is as much a fool as you are and that they don't know how to troubleshoot. You are thus very wrong. You clearly don't know the concept of caching and retouching. Understand how to use Mental Ray and Raytrace so you don't receive such newbie problems before claiming you know what you are doing, because judging by your videos, you clearly don't.
darkembassymusic 2 years ago
Lolz idiot i know what's going on in my fiel while you don't. you're a pure hypocrit nothing more nothing less....
as i said i challenge you to enter the shortfilm festival of cannes lol
oh yeha i'm a true noob i only won 14 shortfilmfestivals last year :-p
and for what it's worth it's a straight 3 points lightsetup no gi no nothing it's a damned wip lol
The day you make something that even makes the theaters i'll reply to you, untill that day you're not worth my time
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
baaahahaha!! When you claimed you won "14 short film festivals last year" I immediately laughed in disbelief knowing you've just dug your little self a hole. And I was right! short film festivals record last year all have different winners and I'm certain you're not one of them. Your stuff is so poor I'm quite enjoying ripping you apart here. It's not a question of whether i'm not worth your time but it's simply the fact that you're not as high as my level yet.
darkembassymusic 2 years ago
you clearly don't seem to know there are 4862 shortfilmfestivals a year and i'm pretty sure you don't even have a clue where they all are nor what the names of the winenrs are, nor what categories they're divided in nor which ones i won
so clearly all ya do is gloat and do nothing
i'm waiting for you to bring one single movie on youtube that proves you're anywhere descent ;)
but seriously mr know it all, yo'ure a 15 year old kiddo who thinks he knows everything but that's jsut an illusion
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
Formation Date: December 31, 1901
Record Label: uncharted space territory
Label Type: Unsigned
Band Members: Nax, G, Mike, Sukhi, Fili & Dan
Influences: Weed
grats that's enough said, all you do on youtube is pretend to be someone you're not lol
nothing mroe to say to you
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
O right you're obviously the bitch who doesn't understand the concept of privacy. I don't understand how your little intelligence gave you the idea that a musician cannot also be an animation artist. Your brain clearly doesn't have the capacity to have multiple set of skills. You've said enough already when you stupidly claimed to have won 14 awards which made us all laugh. A 15 yrs with better spelling than a 26yrs belgian prick? Wow your inferiority knows no bound, insulting yourself twice ;)
darkembassymusic 2 years ago
where deos it say awards ? nowhere lol maybe snap out of your imaginary world and start reading lol
en vanaf nu praat ik enkel nog in het nederlands, eens zien hoe slim je nog zal zijn
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
Dus zoals ik zei ik hoop da ge genomineerd gaat worden voor een kortfilmfestival want ik wil maar al te graag tegen u uitkomen
You said i have a low iq well you better learn some foreign languages than
dus voor de rest houde best uwe bek toe
mr bigshot producer who hasn't produced a single track and mr bigshot 3d artist who can't show a single work
all you've doen so far is act like a kid and pretended to be the best lol
oh just so ya know we have our own awardshow
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
I've produced way more than you have and your spelling is still very bad even in your own language. I don't put my music online because idiots like yourself steals them as it's happened before. You see, my stuff is so good, people feel the need to risk copyright lawsuits and steal my shit because they know they can't reach my level. I never said you had low IQ because you obviously have no IQ at all. You are the maggot at the bottom of the pit, scraping what perfectionists like me throw away.
darkembassymusic 2 years ago
i am what you want and pretend to be....
that's the simple truth you're a wanan be i'm real ;)
have a nice life
tomvandersypen 2 years ago
So that's what you keep telling yourself to help you sleep at night? You're an embarassment to the belgian nation.
darkembassymusic 2 years ago
yea the animations kinda suck, but keep up the work!
Skwardj 2 years ago
very good 4/5
khanker123 2 years ago
with much better animations it would have been cooler, still, kinda nice
Galdor2000 2 years ago
Horrible video 1/5
FrostyMetroids 2 years ago
where do you guys get the money for maya.
sixpackwill1 2 years ago
they dont
illegal downloads my friend.
shadowpk08 2 years ago
didnt flow at all
sixpackwill1 2 years ago
kind of crappy...
TheMayor5000 2 years ago
Great work!
ZeforceTutorials 2 years ago
I think it's great, since all ingredients are here: an interesting character, a casual landscape, a funny story... Most of the improvements should be concentrated on the animation: try to simply watch people walk, run, spring, fight in the reality or in movies, to better catch the what will make your character's moves more realistic. Also try to give it more weight, shown by a more efficient gravity. You'll be amazed how a few changes can power up your animation :)
Keep on improving !
Nathanael3D 2 years ago
I'm guessing gravity doesn't exist.
Anyways, I respect that you dedicated yourself to one video though, I can't seem to do that.
II0o0II 2 years ago
All of this is ALOT of fucking work, that's for sure, but the only real issue here is the animation.
If you could work on it a lil more it would really help push the story.
the weight is non existent, you can tell things are off from the first jump over the wall.
But even though I'm an animator, I've never been able to do a 2 min film, so don't think I'm against you, just sharing some hopefully honest and helpfull advice.
JamilGali 2 years ago
A bir of constructive criticism, the animations weren't very organic. Try watching people and actually visualising the movements in your head.
Pwnzistor 2 years ago
You seem to have forgotten to look at the upload date...
toenninga 2 years ago
near the end of 2006, sure? Fluent animation has been around a while...
Pwnzistor 2 years ago
I really liked the sound, but you can use some more work on studying how the body moves, because it was not convincing at many parts.
maikeru1 2 years ago
ur animation is very "stopy" u need work on ur inbetweens and not so much on ur extremes!!
jonnyman21 2 years ago
If anything, I like the music!
incrediblexbox360 2 years ago
the girls upper body is big but her lower body is small making her look more like a guy but nice vid
swishbig 2 years ago
This chick kinda looks like Meg from Family guy xD
Denistiano 2 years ago 17
guys chill! give this guy a break, haha i would like to see you make a movie instead of commenting :D this is very good, its funny :D of course you could work more, but its also very good who knows how much you been animating?:D:D keep it up dude
lakristianla 2 years ago
how time you was make it?
zlati98 3 years ago
Well done, could be better. Very better, wangqingshui put it well.
fukincunts 3 years ago
theres no gravity!
19Qwasu20 3 years ago
I agree, you have to work on easing more.
Tippmann01 2 years ago
Yeah you got some issues here.
Not a bad start, but you need to study what's in front of you more.
Force yourself to see things differently.
thoughtcryme 3 years ago
Oh, my gosh!!
djslash20 2 years ago
Icarcus, Maya does not have a horrible interface...I use both max and maya. Max is great because it has limitations and set rules. Maya is completely customizable. Max is better for game art, and maya is better for movies. I personally prefer max, but everyone is different.
RavenShade83 3 years ago
maya is amazing
ziggyblenderprogress 3 years ago
maya has a horrible interface!!!!!!!!!!!11
its more for looks than work.
Maya has some great working tools, high end stuff.
BUT you can easaly make them yourself in MAX 9 using max script :P
i have both, max 08 , 09 and maya.
maya... not so good.
all of the tools for it u can get for max, and its impossoble oto use them in maya.
but again, its a pearsonal choice, lol
Icarcus 3 years ago
Loved it! It was like watching the gametrailer for an old PS1 game^^ great job!
Maniamads 3 years ago
Well, i know that isn't easy and to make things like this take a while, i'm also new at this and i have to say that i liked, good work and i'm sure that you will do things better as the way you get some experience. =]
sharpyne5 3 years ago
0:41 was hilarious
AniYouDown 3 years ago
that stuff u were usin wasnt cheap, good job
ecbfilms001 3 years ago
well I will say keep practicing.
you can do amazing things for sure :)
woody4n 3 years ago
wik ass music!
rosshildick 3 years ago
im afraid i dont like it because of the animations and modeling and the sound.
most of it didnt flow good enough and the movement of them was quite strange. im sorry but i have to be honest to you so you can create better animations.
138jgdjz 3 years ago
I agree.
1) The walking is quite weird.
2) When she was climbing the wall(0:14), her movement speed is not according to the gravity of 10.
3) Don't quite like your camera movement(0:26), not organic enough.
4) The paint weight(0:41) at the thigh is quite obvious.
5) movements too stiff.
The above are what I think can be improved. I do find your ending interesting. haha 1:11. that sound makes me feel very high, coz the pain is...
1:15 was cool! Apply some visual effects. =)
wangqingshui 3 years ago
I like it but I think 42 was weird, "I think I'll just touch it for no discernable reason." I like it though, 5 stars.
the5chronicles 3 years ago
Please use better sound design.
hygaradon 3 years ago
where are the chini songs from from a movie or what???
armenac92 3 years ago
es un asko eso muy robotica es aburrida o hay exageracion es muy mala esa animacion
cheorecitensianarko 3 years ago
can you eport to.mdl in maya?
airplaneman19 3 years ago
im afraid not. You can however use XSI (free) and export to .mdls from there.
You are a hl2 modder are you not?
SSeth1010 3 years ago
no i was just looking round for free 3d software do you know any?
PolaroidxPicture 3 years ago
3ds max is good
sasori598 3 years ago
u culd always hack maya its easy XD
mattcscz 3 years ago
no i was just looking round for free 3d software do you know any? sorry dont spam this i put that in my sisters account
airplaneman19 3 years ago
well BLENDER is free, google sketchup free version too, only sketchup has low-quality renders and you can't make animations with that. Than you can also download illegal...
slopedarmor 3 years ago
rofl, the sound effects suck
HedvigGrotesco 3 years ago
woow cool
armenac92 3 years ago
Bravo! C'est vraiment très bien ce que vous avez fais là!! C'est vraiment cool!
clarinettedu09 3 years ago
that was amazing but sound effects aqre but still amazing 5/5
animation7king 3 years ago
wow!very good
stivennoni77 3 years ago
nice work
younessama 3 years ago
not bad
GombratoProductions 3 years ago
thats so cool
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simonrunkar93 3 years ago
I like the texture on the pants. They look very real.
RizingAnimator 3 years ago
??????????????
frankets008 3 years ago
stranger, real stranger! Sorry!
patrixyz 3 years ago
Ignore all the ppl that are givin u negaitve comments, this is really good, and u made it urself!! the amount of time gone to modelling, texturing, rigging, animating etc... i salute u!!!
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joelstutz 3 years ago
A little awkward I'll admit but the first part of being a 3d artist or any artist is that you CAN NOT be afraid to jump into something and learn, that being said I personally think you did a very good job, and you illustrated some good basic principles. So, just work on your keyframe animation(Which is easier said than done) and if you want, you can do some study on human motion, and that will REALLY help you hash out some more realistic, natural looking motion.
madmodder 3 years ago
Nice job man :)
This is REALLY HARD TO DO by one person... it includes modeling, rigging, texturing, animation, shading, lightning ... OMG!!!
botonja 3 years ago
Modeling is kinda ok.. Motions and texturing is quite amateurish and the camerawork is appauling.
Janusha 3 years ago
i like the butt touch but HOLY CRAP UR ANIMATION IS FREEGIN SWEET!!!!
jheight2 3 years ago
dude u really gotta work hard on animation.....but i really liked the punch she gave to the other gal when she was hanging by her neck
Gunjanamoli 3 years ago
One can tell that you've been working hard on this reel,but a lot of things have been left out that are super important.You have a fairly good character that needs some tweaking in terms of modeling,it's hard to tell about the rigging since the animation is'nt working quite well in terms of timing/posing etc..aside from the animation I think that you have an enviroment that works well here,the animation part bothers me alot.
check out some books with preston blair, it helps alot/ cheers
muser4 3 years ago
I really liked the rendering. Your point in animation is great, but it to.... static so to speak.
More fluidity would be better, a little faster frame rate to. I really liked the facial expression during some parts. If you can use more bump mapping in the scene that would probably spice the entire scene up even more.
Hell I give it a 5.
SeleriaLOOM 3 years ago
You really need to work on all those 3D aspects : animation, modeling, rigging and texturing. Well everything.
And ur music just blew up my speakers.
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donrodman3 3 years ago
the character model is pretty good. everything else is really horrible, sorry.
the animation is lifeless, and all the movements are the same speed (with the exception of the awkward 'slow-mo' part). study the principles of good animation a bit before you jump into actually keyframing anything.
the sound is also really bad. other than the music, it's mostly silent, and what sounds do play are cheap. learn more about audio, and do the sound over. quiet sounds are just as important as loud ones.
vaundawg 3 years ago
is maya free
skank3456 3 years ago
it's a couple thousand dollars actually
vaundawg 3 years ago
terrible!!!!!!!!!!!!
webshowbettersweet 3 years ago 3
nice animating and models but sound effects and music :S well not so great.
am just downloading maya now so i don't know how hard it is to animate in 3d
actrol 3 years ago
how do i download maya
fullmoonfan13 3 years ago
Go to the site, and get the ple! Then if you get to this level, buy the full version
boyweed 3 years ago
ur obviously no pro animator but i will give u credit because maya is a really hard program to use. dude, if ur that good at using it, just create something funny, then u'll get less people saying its boring. well done, good work. two thumbs up from me
ericcartman365 3 years ago
i didnt really enjoy this although you do have talent. animating is no easy task my friend and i just started to use maya. either way good job.
bloc22 3 years ago
4get the people hating on your video. i bet they cant do better. i'm an artist and video producer. i think it was creative, ambitious, and i loved it!! keep up the good work. maybe we'll do a movie 2gether one day!
flawless70458 3 years ago
Nice work where did you leanr how to use maya ive been wanting to learn it.
ibanez549 4 years ago
Ahh, that was pretty interesting. :)
Nice work, my friend. :)
tjmixmasta 4 years ago
Wow good work but this movie is really boring.
4*
DavidVStudios 4 years ago
Bullshit.... really, really bad... I will call the Maya Shaolin monks , so they can capture you and train you not to violate our eyes with crap like this.
ArguZ69 4 years ago
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need more physics. and well if you cant make some scenes look good try to avoid them.
ohcrapusuck 4 years ago
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I totally agree, this is terrible!
xbon1 4 years ago
kewl
ZachLOVESAubrey 4 years ago
nice, did you have a skeleton made ?
dizdawg 4 years ago
Good job.
CartoonMusician 4 years ago
very cool, impressive stuff...would love it if ya checked out my lastest Animation 'The OtherSide' its on my profile =) thanks!
salbero3d 4 years ago