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From: lox3csimiami22
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  • That is really really AWESOME! I'm writing this almost everytime when I comment your ff but this is definitely REALLY AWESOME. I think that's one of my fav. chapters. The way you describe their relationship, with all the emotiones, with this passion of love, just the way this is written... AWESOME!! And the little bit of sexiness fits so well in this scene and chapter! I'm speechless... really really good!!! 5*****************************­*** + fav. ♥

  • the story is wonderful, I enjoy reading it, the love parts are beautiful, chapter 19, where is it?

  • Its coming up soon.

    I gotta post it. :D:D

  • aww...really cute

    and i loved the sexiness at the beginning of the chapter =P

    sensibly censored :P

    can't wait til the next one to see what drama u have planned next!!

    <333 LY!!

  • hehe, :P:P

    tons of drama planned. hehe, I think that's should be my middle name

  • terrible 2's here it somes..but i think that if it would ever happen in real life(csi miami) then they would get through it

  • ;) :)

    xx

    Haha, I know they would get through it. xDD

    haha. x]

  • were's part 1?

  • Its on the video response.

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