Great film. well edited it all seemed to flow. Ending was great! Nice! Check out some of my videos. Been working on short horrors like this for a while. they're tough to do without being cliche.
yeah, good film. u really need something for audio. u dont have to get a boom mic. just get a shotgun mic. or a rode mic. but great video. my little bro was picked on for bein fat...but now hes buff. lol
Dude YOur Movies are epic and creative i make movies my self and i like different camera shots and transitions you make! Now some pointers, use a tripod it will improve the Movie really good and watch out for your audio use a boom Mic but other than that Brilliant'!
@YourTubes9323 Thanks man its funny you say that because I'm hopefully get a tripod today :) Stay tuned to my vids I've got a great film coming up - Outbreak. Going to be awesome :)
Cool. Luuv This but maybe a more dramatic ending. if it showed u him cycling away, etc.... and the guy running, then they were lookin 4 each other in the wee forest that was behind the pervy murderer! thnx. plz make more
brilliant film, im your age and i make short films by the way to stop wind blowing into your camera just get a peice of card and hold it about 1 foot away from the cameras mic and it stops all that wind noise ruining the audio
great video, well crafted, but don't be surprised if it gets pulled because of the few seconds of music at the end. I just had one pulled because of a few seconds of "The Entertainer" from the
Well directed - although you need to mute out the wind blowing - you should have a few ambient background tracks - just record a minute of outside, when there is no wind, and loop this over your footage when no dialogue is playing. Should do that inside too - called room tone. More important outside. This was good though; some good shots and direction. Keep it up.
hey do you need some scores for your film or maybe youll be interested in my manuscript its a scary true story
erickody347 7 months ago
Hahaha at the very end...You used the beginning of "Hand of Blood" by B4MV?
deathlyfruitloops 11 months ago
@deathlyfruitloops he definately did, exactly what i was thinking haha
INLproductions 6 months ago
NICE BRITISH ACCENTS ANNOYING AS HELL
TheCLNetwork1 1 year ago
Love the way he just said " screw him"
12621footyledgend 1 year ago
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That must have taken alot of effort to make, really cool video. Check out my own videos if you have time friend.
Subscribed btw. =)
doghogo 1 year ago
IIIIII.....Dont get the ending....what happened ?
sesamestreetsquad 1 year ago
Great movie and concept! I'm actually doing one similar about an emo boy. Great actor.
yournotrandom 1 year ago
Great film. well edited it all seemed to flow. Ending was great! Nice! Check out some of my videos. Been working on short horrors like this for a while. they're tough to do without being cliche.
DPKFineArts 1 year ago
Great idea... nicely edited. flowed really well and the ending was done great. good job! Kudos to ya!
DPKFineArts 1 year ago
moral: fat boy are lucky?
TALENTOSOYELMEJOR 1 year ago
omg this is bad
dargo9506 1 year ago
Awesome! With better production quality (which you probably have no control over) you could be making some great movies.
YellowTurtle13 1 year ago
Nice, but get a new camera man.
KidVlogger317 1 year ago
yeah, good film. u really need something for audio. u dont have to get a boom mic. just get a shotgun mic. or a rode mic. but great video. my little bro was picked on for bein fat...but now hes buff. lol
shapman87 1 year ago
poor kid
shapman87 1 year ago
those accents are vile. cum oooorrrrnn cum oorrrnn. WOW I hate lodoners
MEareCAT 1 year ago
Nine inch nails :)
Pillysrule 1 year ago
for your age, very good
ScarsOfTheCrucifix 1 year ago
Dude YOur Movies are epic and creative i make movies my self and i like different camera shots and transitions you make! Now some pointers, use a tripod it will improve the Movie really good and watch out for your audio use a boom Mic but other than that Brilliant'!
YourTubes9323 1 year ago
@YourTubes9323 Thanks man its funny you say that because I'm hopefully get a tripod today :) Stay tuned to my vids I've got a great film coming up - Outbreak. Going to be awesome :)
belrock1 1 year ago
fucking gay
thizzleman2011 11 months ago
Cool. Luuv This but maybe a more dramatic ending. if it showed u him cycling away, etc.... and the guy running, then they were lookin 4 each other in the wee forest that was behind the pervy murderer! thnx. plz make more
AshleyIsMyName100 2 years ago
i was teased for being big
lynnwinchester 2 years ago
5 stars
SmogFish 2 years ago
brilliant film, im your age and i make short films by the way to stop wind blowing into your camera just get a peice of card and hold it about 1 foot away from the cameras mic and it stops all that wind noise ruining the audio
joelgallagher12 2 years ago
Thanks man I'll keep that in mind in my next film :)
belrock1 2 years ago
award winner!
floyd500 2 years ago
Another good short
slashville 2 years ago
Well actually this can be true,if someone is being bullied their whole life,they tend to be dangerous :S
GlobberThree000 2 years ago
nice!
GameCity123 2 years ago
cmon cmon cmon its gr8 how he says it
k4in1zere 2 years ago
great video, well crafted, but don't be surprised if it gets pulled because of the few seconds of music at the end. I just had one pulled because of a few seconds of "The Entertainer" from the
30's.
audionautix 2 years ago
Keep on making Mattt!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
BikerBoyBell 2 years ago
What was the track used during the film and at the credits? Btw, excellent short story film. 5/5
sgtzero1337 2 years ago
Hey what was the track used during the film and at the credits? By the way, excellent short film I loved the story.
sgtzero1337 2 years ago
thanks man :D i think its Nne Inch Nails - Everyday Is Exactly The Same
belrock1 2 years ago
i wouldve punched the bully in the face if he started talkin shit to me like that
HurricAnesHOCKey4 2 years ago
good thing he gets what he deserves
sgtzero1337 2 years ago
Well directed - although you need to mute out the wind blowing - you should have a few ambient background tracks - just record a minute of outside, when there is no wind, and loop this over your footage when no dialogue is playing. Should do that inside too - called room tone. More important outside. This was good though; some good shots and direction. Keep it up.
AnthonyJFrame 2 years ago
lol, amazing work guys!!!
IkyTV 2 years ago
thanks man :D
belrock1 2 years ago
great job
bman332211 2 years ago
thanks for the comment!
belrock1 2 years ago
nice job!
googlewackk 2 years ago
thanks man :D
belrock1 2 years ago
lol! loving the bully kid! great lil film really liked it
films4lifepro 2 years ago
awesome loved the music and everthing cant wait to do out next big vid with sony vegas gunna be awesome
jaybwen 2 years ago
Great stuff man!!!! 5 Stars
savini1979 2 years ago
yay first comment and view
ChickenboneQuinto9 2 years ago