CONGRATS...the idea of using elmo as the main sharacter is wonderful.pupils will love it thus motivate em to stay wit the video untill the end of it.the use of real images to show each process is good.however, i think the colour and size of the font isnt clear enough to look at.u may also narrate the video because kids are more into listening rather than reading.overall..GUD JOB!!
i like the last song.its very catchy for kids.i think you should look at the title becuase its frog but your video is about dragonfly. the idea is there but maybe narration will make it more effective.then you can improve on the font because in my opinion it is quite small unless there's narration included.overall it is a good piece of work.good job.
The content is there but the narration is the BIG par that is missing. However, you can still use this video w/o narration but the font should be clear and readabale by the children. Try to focus this video to children as your major viewer. Great effort!
It is informative in terms of the knowledge of life cycle.However you can enhance the quality and performance by changing the fonts, making the elmo be at only one particular place, so that children can focus on the descriptions, crop the pictures integrated well. Then your video will be much better, just a liltle drop of my thoughts, thank you.
attractive video....surely children will love this kind of video.....very creative....love your ideas in creating the video...children will learn better through your video...hopefully i can be as creative as yours....well done!
elmo elmo!! everyone lurve elmo.. even i love elmo.. the font however is quite small for those delicate lil eyes,, mayb u should bold it and enlarge it bcoz i know u wan to keep the elmo colour!! overall i love it!
ayu, how can you miss that Elmo's epic voice? i guarantee you that the children will get attracted and pay more attention to it... the rest is fine...just the font(like the others had commented) and the elom's itself...anyway, you had done a good job!!!
do you want to be a director of Sesame Street? haha. NIce work girl. even though the text is not really "LARGE" enough, but the process of evolution of a draginfly is shown clearly starting from the egg. Well done Ayuni...:)
Very interesting video. Its manages to show what you intend., But the only problems is the font. It would have been much better if you could change the font size to something bigger. As a whole well-done.
the use of authentic video is quite good and appealing. however, the presentation of the video could be much better if narration is included as your captions are like telling something to the audience. also, the elmo is quite distracting when it always move around.
Thank you Viva1109. I do feel the same too. Maybe what I can do to improve this video is by changing the colour of the font. It is a dragonfly. I've stated that in my summary of the video. But technical problem occurs in title of the video(typing error). I'll try to improve on them.Thanks for the comments ya..
It is fun to watch and the song is very catchy. But there is a problem of the fonts. Cannot really see it since it is red in colour. Other than that, i think you need to credit where you took the video from in case of copyright unless you took the video yourself. And grammar mistakes like Its a dragonfly. It should be it's and that's all from me. You forgot to put int the apostrophe.
0:25 Do not make the flying entry. Have it big. Don't use red for the font. And can you get a clearer picture of the lake?
0:33 0:51 0:53 1:05 1:11 Don't use red for the font. Make the font size bigger. Elmo hanging from the top can be a distraction for the kids.
Starting from 1:26 please remove elmo from the process. He is just sitting there not helping with the explanation :)
eduvidum 2 years ago
CONGRATS...the idea of using elmo as the main sharacter is wonderful.pupils will love it thus motivate em to stay wit the video untill the end of it.the use of real images to show each process is good.however, i think the colour and size of the font isnt clear enough to look at.u may also narrate the video because kids are more into listening rather than reading.overall..GUD JOB!!
ituziffipunyer 2 years ago
For me, this is a good video. You efforts were clearly presented. The ideas and sound was clearly presented.
notakakidimuka:
1. The tile of the videos is a bit confusing.
2. Use larger font.
MrRadunk 2 years ago
i like the last song.its very catchy for kids.i think you should look at the title becuase its frog but your video is about dragonfly. the idea is there but maybe narration will make it more effective.then you can improve on the font because in my opinion it is quite small unless there's narration included.overall it is a good piece of work.good job.
ufetra7 2 years ago
The content is there but the narration is the BIG par that is missing. However, you can still use this video w/o narration but the font should be clear and readabale by the children. Try to focus this video to children as your major viewer. Great effort!
syahrezacesc 2 years ago
It is informative in terms of the knowledge of life cycle.However you can enhance the quality and performance by changing the fonts, making the elmo be at only one particular place, so that children can focus on the descriptions, crop the pictures integrated well. Then your video will be much better, just a liltle drop of my thoughts, thank you.
cheerlust 2 years ago
Good video although the font is not that big. The song is nice.
ahmadfaizruslee 2 years ago
attractive video....surely children will love this kind of video.....very creative....love your ideas in creating the video...children will learn better through your video...hopefully i can be as creative as yours....well done!
acikg13 2 years ago
elmo elmo!! everyone lurve elmo.. even i love elmo.. the font however is quite small for those delicate lil eyes,, mayb u should bold it and enlarge it bcoz i know u wan to keep the elmo colour!! overall i love it!
ermabutang 2 years ago
ayu, how can you miss that Elmo's epic voice? i guarantee you that the children will get attracted and pay more attention to it... the rest is fine...just the font(like the others had commented) and the elom's itself...anyway, you had done a good job!!!
nicholasliging 2 years ago
do you want to be a director of Sesame Street? haha. NIce work girl. even though the text is not really "LARGE" enough, but the process of evolution of a draginfly is shown clearly starting from the egg. Well done Ayuni...:)
Whitelucifer1 2 years ago
good..but the fonts are quite small. should have make it bigger. other than that, the song is fun.
kintang87 2 years ago
Very interesting video. Its manages to show what you intend., But the only problems is the font. It would have been much better if you could change the font size to something bigger. As a whole well-done.
dhaya0787 2 years ago
the use of authentic video is quite good and appealing. however, the presentation of the video could be much better if narration is included as your captions are like telling something to the audience. also, the elmo is quite distracting when it always move around.
sanzovenom 2 years ago
Thank you Viva1109. I do feel the same too. Maybe what I can do to improve this video is by changing the colour of the font. It is a dragonfly. I've stated that in my summary of the video. But technical problem occurs in title of the video(typing error). I'll try to improve on them.Thanks for the comments ya..
admiral31712 2 years ago
It is fun to watch and the song is very catchy. But there is a problem of the fonts. Cannot really see it since it is red in colour. Other than that, i think you need to credit where you took the video from in case of copyright unless you took the video yourself. And grammar mistakes like Its a dragonfly. It should be it's and that's all from me. You forgot to put int the apostrophe.
Viva1109 2 years ago