Short film indie thriller, 3 from Coffee Films

[cscdigitalgraphics]

Slow build up only to end in a frenzy at the end. Good film.

[edv11nas]

blah blah blah bang bang. useless...

[NEVERENDINGROADFILMS]

you should watch this short film trailer its exelent "short film-un 6 de enero"

[dirtynuke]

Jesus how could some of you ppl be so mean? It's a short independent film. Someone took the effort to make the film, and post it on the Internet with the hopes that people would like it. The least you could do is be nice about it, even if you think it sucks. I happen to think it wasn't too bad.

[afewbravemenfilms]

i really thought this was absolutely crap... it's a disgrace to the word film making.... the script was good but wasted on a lazy diretor... who in turn did not do the actors any favours. the acting was of a good enough standard though. this director should not be let any near a camera or actors or an editing suite for the rest of his life time.

is hot my own trailers on a smaller budget and there's nothing lazy about my films. click on my link and compare..

[Lacybrown]

Um, I'm sorry, but I have to say I disagree with everyone who commented on this. I thought this was poorly executed (and acted) and predictable.

[Filmtiki]

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[funkmonkey1000]

Fantastic concept but it needed some diferent shots. Definitely could have used some dollying towards the subject as the plot thickened to add some suspense.

[ArdentFilmer]

I think this film was spectacular in it's simplicity and complexity. I will say, though, that is was almost too long. Things grow dull quickly when the camera isn't moving. Also, I thought there was far too much language. It's so overused these days. You will be a truly skilled writer when you can write something without any foul language at all. That is true imagination. Try it and see how hard it is.

[walk888]

cool

[acepeeter]

nice idea, well executed, the only problem was the sound quality of the dialogue, and yeh maybe you could've had a bit of fake blood too, but still decent

[Seaartist]

needed afx blood splatter..

[society86]

no blood?

[DwayneMiller]

Pretty straightforward, decent acting, effective, sort of comedic but nice short film.

[sevenyearsago]

not bad, but not a fan of the acting. could have benefited from better sound design. 5/10.

[artyflap]

a really good short film from start to finish - enjoyed it....check mine out..

[taylorMFilms]

Great short, well done. Very tight storytelling and smartly written. Check out my 1 minute film, you might like the editing on it, there's some similarities as to how to build a narrative in such a short time.

[TadhgCulley]

Excellent short!!

Keep up the great work!

=)

Tadhg x

[TwoBitProductions]

Nicely done...

[galentrine]

awesome-nicely done man

[sneakermzp]

damn finaly a good short film! and the name of it is the best part!

[sbj07]

Now that was cool. Simple,effective and nicely wrapped up!! Good stuff :)

[Sparkart]

The woman shouting startled me!

[Tuber228756]

wow, pretty good...4/5 stars. You did this without loosing my interest which is hard to do in this type of film because it's a type that builds everything up and lets it all out in the end. Greatly done, check mine out.

[straker2]

Nice fixed perspective with the locked camera shot and good use of body language to create mood.

Ade.

[ottproductionsuk]

Nice little film; albeit a fucked up! Can't everyone just get along???

[big11jit]

This a sweet short...but i have a quick question about another short film, that I believ was a British film but I'm not sure. It was this guy who was walking on the side of a street and a hand came out of the ground and grabbed his foot. It slowly pulled him underground while people walked right past him. Can anyone tell me the name of the film please?!

[coffeefilms]

SOrry, don't know it, I saw a really old one (like 1980's) where a hiker got his foot caught in a rabbit hole, couldn't get out, no cars would stop for him, then he started getting pulled down and the hole opened up and ate him, really cool little idea especially way back then.

[AuthenticProductions]

Wow.. Good job man..

Very well written..

Just wish you had more angles and different shots of it all.. Could include him shooting her as well.. ;D

in all great job.. 5 stars.. ;D

[xSpringfieldx]

that was really good, but the ending could have been a bit better (acting wise) but the rest was brilliant!

also the chick was a bit loud.. hurts my hears many.

[shawnk00]

nice jobs guys

[iggy35]

Well written, Well acted,..you have a new fan!

[madwebb]

This shit happens all the time . Good short film keep them coming, give you 5 stars

[JOGO]

Chick was hot but scared me to death how mean she was!

[sheltorx]

Good stuff... I did see it coming though. Check out another film '3' by clicking on my ID

[cyborlite]

Sorry folks. I don't see what's so brillliant, etc. about this film. Personally, I found it dull and predictable.

[chellbie]

brilliant

[musiqe1]

that was good man well put together

[ekweetnie1]

I don't agree - this is original and well made

[OliverSnippit]

I liked how it kept building, and I loved the flashback to the gf screaming, but the ending was too predictable and a bit of a cop-out.

[filmchap]

A fantasticly simple idea, 'executed' perfectly by the cast. Creative, inspiring and original, I loved it.

[theinspiredmickeyd]

Twisted, but very good fun! :D

[sethdonut]

I admit it: I expected all of this video. This is because, however, when I think about how realistic of a scenario it is with the people in this world.

Simple, concise, generally thoughtful attention to acting detail: a worthy watch.

[mastercontrol200]

Powerful and thought provoking. I am impressed.

[MEOSHABEAN1]

That was good and very unexpected

[TheCrasher]

wow... good job indeed good story, great acting, and good directing

[destinee85]

see you don't need a 1000 visually pleasing shots to tell a story...good job.

[yt4dummies]

Wow ... unbelievable .. In 3 minutes you made me jump 3 times and left me with sitting open-mouthed for a good 10 seconds after the video. Excellent film.

[MediocreFilms]

I hate when that happens.

[Kirki86]

Excellant...Sarah scared me, lol

[iseealavalamp]

Bloody sick. But brilliant. It reminds me of the deceptive and idiotic nature of mankind.