Try not to say "Um" so much, and try to speak with a more calm, at ease, arrogant tone, because the tone you have here, it doesn't seem like Bane at all. I understand Brev wants you to voice Bane as a kind've cultured type, but all the same, try to sound like somebeast who holds unquestioned authority in a horde of mercenaries. The 'script' is ok, but it needs more fluidness to it, like more... cockiness? Heh, I dunno... but anyway, hope this was helpful. God bless. :)
@Kelaiah01 I appreciate your advice, but please take note.
Brev told me specifically "In this particular script, try to make him seem nervous, rustle some paper to make it realistic, capture the feel of your first interview/application."
This isn't really supposed to be a part of the actual script, and he never said HOW I should portray my character in this. He was perfectly fine with what I did here. Just so it's clear. :) He and I have spoken plenty of times about these things I do.
@Felldohswrath OOOOOOOOOHHHHH, I see. XD Haha, sorry man. :) Maybe in the future, you should put down info like that in the summary box so that way I won't bug you so much. ;) XD Haha, but anyway... so acting nervous was your intent? In that case, you did a very good job, you sounded very natural. :) So anyway... yeah. XD
Try not to say "Um" so much, and try to speak with a more calm, at ease, arrogant tone, because the tone you have here, it doesn't seem like Bane at all. I understand Brev wants you to voice Bane as a kind've cultured type, but all the same, try to sound like somebeast who holds unquestioned authority in a horde of mercenaries. The 'script' is ok, but it needs more fluidness to it, like more... cockiness? Heh, I dunno... but anyway, hope this was helpful. God bless. :)
Kelaiah01 1 year ago
@Kelaiah01 I appreciate your advice, but please take note.
Brev told me specifically "In this particular script, try to make him seem nervous, rustle some paper to make it realistic, capture the feel of your first interview/application."
This isn't really supposed to be a part of the actual script, and he never said HOW I should portray my character in this. He was perfectly fine with what I did here. Just so it's clear. :) He and I have spoken plenty of times about these things I do.
Felldohswrath 1 year ago
@Felldohswrath OOOOOOOOOHHHHH, I see. XD Haha, sorry man. :) Maybe in the future, you should put down info like that in the summary box so that way I won't bug you so much. ;) XD Haha, but anyway... so acting nervous was your intent? In that case, you did a very good job, you sounded very natural. :) So anyway... yeah. XD
Kelaiah01 1 year ago
@Kelaiah01 Okay, it's my fault for not making it clear. I'll do so in the future.
Felldohswrath 1 year ago
@Felldohswrath Okay, good. :)
Kelaiah01 1 year ago
wait... why is Glenn beck in the suggestions?
liamloga 1 year ago
@liamloga I have no clue.
Felldohswrath 1 year ago
@liamloga Because Glenn Beck is good at killing things....like BANE. :P
Hethrin 1 year ago
@Hethrin like what... (resists making a comment about his blackboard use)
liamloga 1 year ago
What's this for? Is it an audition or something?
RighteousPsycho 1 year ago
@RighteousPsycho No, it's actually a thing that I had to record for the director of the group I'm in.
Felldohswrath 1 year ago
Lol, nice job dude.
Hethrin 1 year ago