What happened to the music? I like how you cut to the chase (literally) faster, it's still unclear where the living graffiti comes from initially. Cleaning up the red scribbles would definitely help that.
Lots of quick action shots work well for this, except when the graffiti disappears for a bit at the end. Yhe action should slow down here or have less cuts as the kids meet, then speed back up when the graffiti shows up again.
What happened to the music? I like how you cut to the chase (literally) faster, it's still unclear where the living graffiti comes from initially. Cleaning up the red scribbles would definitely help that.
Lots of quick action shots work well for this, except when the graffiti disappears for a bit at the end. Yhe action should slow down here or have less cuts as the kids meet, then speed back up when the graffiti shows up again.
eecaad 4 years ago