these are two very great contrasting monologues. I liked seeing the two different characters. The first one your eyes were closed or you were looking up so much that I felt a little disconnected from you at times. The Cressida monologue was fun! I am currently working on it & this confirmed some choices I was making & showed me some I hadn't thought of! I think Cressida CAN be played a little ditzy, but I think it comes from her confusion within herself. Keep it up, my friend!
Why not? I think Cressida could definitely be a bit ditzy in this moment - she loses complete control of herself here, she doesn't know how to act. I think it was a sound monologue.
Take your time, you know what you're doing so trust yourself
catherinemariaharris 2 years ago
that was good!
twil9ght 2 years ago
these are two very great contrasting monologues. I liked seeing the two different characters. The first one your eyes were closed or you were looking up so much that I felt a little disconnected from you at times. The Cressida monologue was fun! I am currently working on it & this confirmed some choices I was making & showed me some I hadn't thought of! I think Cressida CAN be played a little ditzy, but I think it comes from her confusion within herself. Keep it up, my friend!
Cherryred2119 2 years ago
Fantastic monologues! I loved the contrast between the two. Brilliant choices, they really show what you're made of, if not more.
Might I ask what this was for? An audition? :D
Again, great work.
mowglibowgli 3 years ago
The first one was very good, but you got Cressida all wrong. She is not as ditzy as you make it out to be, and it kinda ruins the monolouge.
Horcrexhexer 3 years ago
Why not? I think Cressida could definitely be a bit ditzy in this moment - she loses complete control of herself here, she doesn't know how to act. I think it was a sound monologue.
fluffymugnaini 3 years ago
Lifeless!
goldorly 3 years ago
great job! very powerful! The only thing i would say to do is pause a bit longer between characters.
musicalmaniac26 3 years ago
"move the still piercing air" (i think)
I LOVED THAT!!!!
prettylilnetterz 3 years ago
Powerful. Good stuff. :)
contron 3 years ago