Yeah the pitch is way too high, this audition sounds closer to Princess Peach or Cream the Rabbit than Rarity. You really don't put enough emphasis on the whining aspect. I think it would be better if you did your lines A LOT slower so you could greater emphasize the various emotions Rarity conveys.
0:18 gets closer to what Rarity should actually sound-like, but it really lacks emotion. The context of that line was that Rarity was fed-up with Prince Blueblood's mannerisms.
Hearing your real voice against the Rarity voice you put on, I can tell that you could definitely get it right if you didn't strain it so high and kept more to your natural tone :) The accent is pretty good, so all you have to do is lower the pitch and take some of the breath out of it. I think you could be a really good Rarity with some practice! ^^
Your pitch is a little too high for Rarity, but it's heading in the right direction. Make her accent a little thicker, and the pitch a little lower, and viola (: best of luck!
Yeah the pitch is way too high, this audition sounds closer to Princess Peach or Cream the Rabbit than Rarity. You really don't put enough emphasis on the whining aspect. I think it would be better if you did your lines A LOT slower so you could greater emphasize the various emotions Rarity conveys.
0:18 gets closer to what Rarity should actually sound-like, but it really lacks emotion. The context of that line was that Rarity was fed-up with Prince Blueblood's mannerisms.
Slashyx 1 month ago
@Slashyx I agree! Around that area is the most like her voice.
bluebox72 1 month ago
Hearing your real voice against the Rarity voice you put on, I can tell that you could definitely get it right if you didn't strain it so high and kept more to your natural tone :) The accent is pretty good, so all you have to do is lower the pitch and take some of the breath out of it. I think you could be a really good Rarity with some practice! ^^
Emichwan88 1 month ago
Pretty good effort! Considering how hard it is to do a genuine Rarity impression.
arcturusliz 1 month ago
Your pitch is a little too high for Rarity, but it's heading in the right direction. Make her accent a little thicker, and the pitch a little lower, and viola (: best of luck!
teffysayshi 1 month ago