@ipunchfish might have been a bit direct but you have to take note of what he has said. Too long, no real message. However, there is some good stuff in there. Echo comments about Audio & F1 cars. very nice. I would drop the games graphics stuff altogether untill you have some better content. Create a stronger opening titles that says what you do and a I think if your careful you could do something more interesting with your closing contact information. Dont worry. Keep going and keep improving.
I would have most likely thrown your demo reel out. This video isn't telling me what you want to do. It is too long, scattered, and showcases great and underwhelming work. Most of the stuff has no context and is confusing. The video is also WAY TOO LONG. The intro with the brick wall would be enough for me to say no.
Do this. Focus on your hardsurface. Show wireframes. And always front load your best stuff and your complete info. Throw out the crap.
@IPunchfish it has been my biggest criticism so far, that i included too much in the reel.. i guess you are right.. The video isnt telling you want i want to do, because i dont even know that, as i have interest in all areas.. and havent focused on one area yet.. i feel i still have alot to learn on each area so i dont focus just yet.. I wanted to show that i do try a little of everything..
There is some fantastic stuff on here, out of all of it the audi looks the best (the F1 car is appearing a bit glossy, but is fairly solid and could use a bit more screen time).
If you are showing this to potential employers show only your strongest stuff, shorter can be better, don't worry if it's just a minuet, you can always include jpegs on a website. The 3D integration looks to be a useful skill, but let employers know what you did if anyone else worked on it.
Thanks for the comment and advice.. i agree that it could have been shorter and more focused, but i wanted to show that i have some knowledge in various areas. About the 3D integration, yes i handled the 3D and the programing of all aplications.. even the plane game was built from nothing by me! :)
@ipunchfish might have been a bit direct but you have to take note of what he has said. Too long, no real message. However, there is some good stuff in there. Echo comments about Audio & F1 cars. very nice. I would drop the games graphics stuff altogether untill you have some better content. Create a stronger opening titles that says what you do and a I think if your careful you could do something more interesting with your closing contact information. Dont worry. Keep going and keep improving.
sousproductions 1 year ago
I would have most likely thrown your demo reel out. This video isn't telling me what you want to do. It is too long, scattered, and showcases great and underwhelming work. Most of the stuff has no context and is confusing. The video is also WAY TOO LONG. The intro with the brick wall would be enough for me to say no.
Do this. Focus on your hardsurface. Show wireframes. And always front load your best stuff and your complete info. Throw out the crap.
IPunchfish 1 year ago
@IPunchfish it has been my biggest criticism so far, that i included too much in the reel.. i guess you are right.. The video isnt telling you want i want to do, because i dont even know that, as i have interest in all areas.. and havent focused on one area yet.. i feel i still have alot to learn on each area so i dont focus just yet.. I wanted to show that i do try a little of everything..
M1KESPT 1 year ago
There is some fantastic stuff on here, out of all of it the audi looks the best (the F1 car is appearing a bit glossy, but is fairly solid and could use a bit more screen time).
If you are showing this to potential employers show only your strongest stuff, shorter can be better, don't worry if it's just a minuet, you can always include jpegs on a website. The 3D integration looks to be a useful skill, but let employers know what you did if anyone else worked on it.
Hope this helps.
oldoneeye 1 year ago
@oldoneeye
Thanks for the comment and advice.. i agree that it could have been shorter and more focused, but i wanted to show that i have some knowledge in various areas. About the 3D integration, yes i handled the 3D and the programing of all aplications.. even the plane game was built from nothing by me! :)
M1KESPT 1 year ago
Me Likes.
AceTrainerJason 1 year ago
@AceTrainerJason Glad you likes! :P
M1KESPT 1 year ago
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Shinzu92 1 year ago
@Shinzu92 Uh, thanks. lol
M1KESPT 1 year ago