Devil May...Demolish Brilliant Architecture

[jules10109]

Pretty good. ^.^

But erm, where was your bro.?? I didn't see him? ;p You should make a clay mation food fight! That'd be sweet.

[Jackdabomb1]

Animation: 8/10 A wee bit choppy but alright

Detail: 9/10 Not too picky on this but the characters were fine

Entertainment/Plot: 5/10 A little short to be entertaining but it was ok

Sound/FX: 7/10 Needs some sound but the camera angle and stuff was ok

Originality/Effort/Point: 7/10 It was original , the effort seemed lacking, but the point was experimental or improv which it executed ok

Overall: 36/50= 4/5 72% D+

~Da Bomb Productions~

P.S. If you need tips message me.

[JackKuchiki]

thanks for the feedback =D

i shall remember what you've said when making my next video

you're right - i didnt put a lot of effort into making this, but hopefully I'm going to have time to work on something properly ^^

[Jackdabomb1]

Your welcome.

=D

[ichigoisahollow]

Wicked vid jackkkkk

XD

joe at the end XD

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