LOVED IT! I was so diggin' on the names of all the guys that banged her. Awesome! And the ending? Perfect!
JustGina1 4 years ago
nice 'stylization', but honestly, I need a beginning, middle, and end. But thank you for stating the genre, prop, character, dialog....too open ended..no sense of finalization.
carpenns 4 years ago
"She liked it rough." HAWT!
sjalden 4 years ago
OMG, Rebecca and Michael are great!
joenoaa 4 years ago
"Leggy broad..." LOL!
blakeedwards1015 4 years ago
"yo, what is up with this light?"... so funny.
skates1222 4 years ago
I really like the "that's a damn shame" line. What amazing writing...this guy must be a professional.
wabtanker 4 years ago
LOVE, love, love, love. Laughed out loud a few times watching this. Hilarious!
burkinaboy 4 years ago
LOVED IT! I was so diggin' on the names of all the guys that banged her. Awesome! And the ending? Perfect!
JustGina1 4 years ago
nice 'stylization', but honestly, I need a beginning, middle, and end. But thank you for stating the genre, prop, character, dialog....too open ended..no sense of finalization.
carpenns 4 years ago
"She liked it rough." HAWT!
sjalden 4 years ago
OMG, Rebecca and Michael are great!
joenoaa 4 years ago
"Leggy broad..." LOL!
blakeedwards1015 4 years ago
"yo, what is up with this light?"... so funny.
skates1222 4 years ago
I really like the "that's a damn shame" line. What amazing writing...this guy must be a professional.
wabtanker 4 years ago
LOVE, love, love, love. Laughed out loud a few times watching this. Hilarious!
burkinaboy 4 years ago