Despite some of the negative comments, I feel that your voice has a very pleasing tone. Yes, you need more practice but you also have some promise in your voice. Good for you for trying and posting.
The tempo was too fast, you need to get very involved in the song, the text must feel as if its coming from your heart not your head. Ends of phrases are cut off and you need to spin out the line more, to caress the phrases. Keep singing!
on the parts near the triplet where there is a tenuto, hold the note a little more and give it some feeling. Also it seems to be a little too fast. But you are a beginner so I know it is hard
Despite some of the negative comments, I feel that your voice has a very pleasing tone. Yes, you need more practice but you also have some promise in your voice. Good for you for trying and posting.
tanto1948 2 years ago
Concentrate on keeping your tones forward.. you tend to swallow your vowels.
Vivaldicellist 2 years ago
The tempo was too fast, you need to get very involved in the song, the text must feel as if its coming from your heart not your head. Ends of phrases are cut off and you need to spin out the line more, to caress the phrases. Keep singing!
lornabegbie 2 years ago
on the parts near the triplet where there is a tenuto, hold the note a little more and give it some feeling. Also it seems to be a little too fast. But you are a beginner so I know it is hard
musiq7203 3 years ago
Not a bad baritone voice. Needs some work, but im sure if you work hard you'll be fine.
Good luck.
m1cknl 3 years ago
This was one of my first songs in school. nice work, jsut remember what and why you are singing the words then the sound will come naturally!
phoenixusa 3 years ago
Such a nice song and you sing it so well. You have a good voice, I wish I could have a so good voice like you. Applause....
biokemiker 3 years ago
OMG I love it. keep this up,bro!:D
Saikaru92 3 years ago