The one thing that kind of bothered me was that your character, had the chance to mention he had the guy's wallet since he was walking in such close proximity.
I thought it was a real good idea for you not to film an actual fight scene, for it can sometimes take you of the film because it becomes the main focus.
I thought the shots were well composed, you had good sound, i thought your editing was good too although in some of the running shots I might've sped it up a little, but that's just me.
Awesome man. It would've been funny if at the end he looks in the wallet and either says "There's no money in here!" or "...this isn't my wallet...". XD But this was brilliant!
if the man in the gray sweater said ''there is no money in here'', THAT would have been funnier. One thing though... I seen the whole wallet thing coming a mile away. I was asking myself in the end ''why didn't he just say that in the firsty place? so you should have had him doing sign language in the end and speaking as a deaf person would speak.
The one thing that kind of bothered me was that your character, had the chance to mention he had the guy's wallet since he was walking in such close proximity.
I thought you really did an awesome film.
mrsubconscious 5 years ago
I thought it was a real good idea for you not to film an actual fight scene, for it can sometimes take you of the film because it becomes the main focus.
I thought the shots were well composed, you had good sound, i thought your editing was good too although in some of the running shots I might've sped it up a little, but that's just me.
mrsubconscious 5 years ago
Awesome man. It would've been funny if at the end he looks in the wallet and either says "There's no money in here!" or "...this isn't my wallet...". XD But this was brilliant!
HavocTT 5 years ago
if the man in the gray sweater said ''there is no money in here'', THAT would have been funnier. One thing though... I seen the whole wallet thing coming a mile away. I was asking myself in the end ''why didn't he just say that in the firsty place? so you should have had him doing sign language in the end and speaking as a deaf person would speak.
themaninblack44 5 years ago
Great camera work... LOL... wink wink
Neuralclone 6 years ago