I found this film because it was on the similar videos list for my film "The Butcher." I watched it, and I have to be completely honest... it scared the shit out of me! I really enjoyed it, and the use of the girl from The Ring was particularly scary. I'm pretty much going to spend the day looking over my shoulder now! hahah Great job, though, seriously.
**Check out our new short film THE BUTCHER, based on true events.**
It Reminds me of Fatal Frame more than anything else, not only the camera angles but the effects and the ghosts as well. The way things kinda popped out of nowhere. Japanese things are scary. Nice work!
I wasn't too fond of the close up camera from behind shots as it made it feel too much as if there truly was someone filming within the film itself, like a documentary, which obviously clashed with the narrative. Apart from that it was nice.
The 2 things I would criticise are, firstly, as someone has already mentioned, there was a lack of a proper storyline and the whole dream thing always seems so cheesey and a cheap way out. I always prefer it when people stick to their story and don't 'bail out'. The other thing was the stair sequence at the beginning.
I comment you on your work. However, there was no apparent storyline. Even if it is a short film, it should still have a storyline. But you did well on the scary scenes. The stairs thing was kinda long...
i shouldnt be watching this...but i luv and h8 scary movies and stuff...its also night time rite now...o well i cant resist stuff like dis...bwhahaha!
Very good short; really creepy and atmospheric. One question, though: did the "actor" know the camera was rolling? Because he walks through this like it's a blocking rehearsal.
That was pretty good. It could have used some more camera coverage though. Like when he's standing in the doorway pushing the elevator button? It would have made it a bit more tense with maybe a close-up or super there. The actor, not much expression on his face. I'd be fucking scared shitless if that happened to me! Also, I know it's a short, but a little character bonding/building would've have made it better too. But it was still good.
the onli reeson tht tht wa scaryy is coz itss menna b the grudge n enii fink thts t duu wid the grudge shits ee up its the scarii ist fillm evvahh - but the personn hu wa the gruge dint lukk gd x
Digging your work dude. Was shot nice. Have you done anything else. Im heavily into horror too and shot my first piece for a uni project last year. Its called murderpoem (check it out) Take care dude
Thank you, I'll watch it and leave my comment. Right now I'm doing a comedy, gore short film. You can watch a teaser, just go to my videos. Is the one titled "Ana - Teaser 1". See ya!
Hi Evilprson, thank you for your comment. I know I'm a really bad actor :) and you can watch more of it in "Fichines". But, hey, good news: I'm not perfoming any character in my new film, "Ana"! Just directing. =P See ya and thanks again.
Brilliant -- it sucked that I couldn't really experience the whole film because I couldn't see anything..my stupid monitor wouldn't go brighter. But damn, you put your own twist on the whole Ju on / Ring thing...I mean I thought the croaking/meowing noises were scary. But she was full out screaming bloody murder. =O Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
What Ishigaki said. This is a brilliant short film. I've gotta say, the title is horrible, but the actual film itself is simply amazing. Lol if you just change the title, this could come close to or actually win a film competition.
that was very good. if i heard noises like that comming from the end of the hallway, i would say "Oh hell no! i'm taking the window!" But when the girl is crawling, it woulda been cool if a trail of blood was left as she was dragging her body on the ground. but this was awsome none the less!
0.0 awsome film!! its accually realy realy cool and frightening!! i wish this would be a real horror movie!! i would love to go see it in the theatres!!!
I haven't watched your inspirations' films but I got a really good sense of what their films are like. You actually had me on edge when the real scary stuff happened. The camerawork during those frightening parts was wonderful. That setting (mostly the cool swinging door) was also excellent. All I'd really say is... get a tripod for some stuff? Otherwise thrilling.
i luved it!!! it could be a movie!
SuperHappyface1234 1 year ago
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I loved every minute of this. <3
GhostlyAlien 1 year ago
angry ex-girlfriends?you naughty guy!
blackcusedlady 1 year ago
*applauds*
590275502 1 year ago
here i thought this was gonna b a bunk video...but i was good....great job
MrCanadianwarrior 2 years ago
Nice Ring/Grudge hommage
DrakeduKane82 2 years ago
I actually jumped!!! I never bloody jump at horror. Brilliant!!!
BigBadgers2001 2 years ago
I found this film because it was on the similar videos list for my film "The Butcher." I watched it, and I have to be completely honest... it scared the shit out of me! I really enjoyed it, and the use of the girl from The Ring was particularly scary. I'm pretty much going to spend the day looking over my shoulder now! hahah Great job, though, seriously.
**Check out our new short film THE BUTCHER, based on true events.**
StinkyBurger 2 years ago
Grosisimo a favoritos
lovedStarbucks 2 years ago
¿Por qué no grita o se caga en su puta descendencia? No sé, yo me encuentro fantasmas así y lo último que hago es quedarme callado.
4kur1u 3 years ago 2
that was pretty cool
BritishTellly 3 years ago
La parte que aparece la mano me hizo cagar en los pantalones!!!! Un Abrazo Lufito!!!!
joserusca 3 years ago
i think the camera person is really good, how she / he adjust the camera,. nice!!!
JuneLis 3 years ago
Ok not goin there im goin up.... never mind goin down.
dumbpain 3 years ago
It Reminds me of Fatal Frame more than anything else, not only the camera angles but the effects and the ghosts as well. The way things kinda popped out of nowhere. Japanese things are scary. Nice work!
YuusukeLoveless 3 years ago
I remember seeing this movie like 2 years ago, im glad I found it again, is a piece of art man, a really damm good scary movie, love it!!
masterchief8127 3 years ago
nice dude
lovewhitsnikkers 3 years ago
dude that was awesome!!!
i almost shyt ma pants...lol
mzperlz 3 years ago
nice try!i enjoyed that!!!!!hehe!!!!
larisaies 3 years ago
The best Ringu girl EVER!!!
And the actor too!
Luli!
Luli079 3 years ago
I wasn't too fond of the close up camera from behind shots as it made it feel too much as if there truly was someone filming within the film itself, like a documentary, which obviously clashed with the narrative. Apart from that it was nice.
theholyorange 3 years ago
The 2 things I would criticise are, firstly, as someone has already mentioned, there was a lack of a proper storyline and the whole dream thing always seems so cheesey and a cheap way out. I always prefer it when people stick to their story and don't 'bail out'. The other thing was the stair sequence at the beginning.
theholyorange 3 years ago
I liked a lot of parts of this, most notably the majority of the scary bits, where you pulled off quick bursts of tension excellently.
theholyorange 3 years ago
it is very very very scary...........
kasadjah03 3 years ago
Story could be more invative, but what really matters: It´s enthralling!
Shim999 4 years ago
I comment you on your work. However, there was no apparent storyline. Even if it is a short film, it should still have a storyline. But you did well on the scary scenes. The stairs thing was kinda long...
NineTailedFoxDemones 4 years ago
wow that was actually scary
eclecticbuni 4 years ago 2
RANDOMNESS!!!!!!!
But a tad scary, all the same. :P
kooldice 4 years ago
ZAJEFAJNE
Boję się klątwy strasznie, ale to było fajne. Aż piszczałam ze strachu
VickyVampiree 4 years ago
i watched the movie while itv was paused lol, so i woodnt jump out me skin lol
bugbandit22 4 years ago
ohh my got
aronisantana2000 4 years ago
hoy dugay baana oizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
wendy08ofj 4 years ago
omg that part on the sairs made me cover my eyes! sad i know but its great!
xdragondemonxx 4 years ago
holy *bleep* that part around 1:45 made me jump!! omg lol!!
ThuedeeVang 4 years ago
i shouldnt be watching this...but i luv and h8 scary movies and stuff...its also night time rite now...o well i cant resist stuff like dis...bwhahaha!
ThuedeeVang 4 years ago
that was scary i coulnt even see the whole thing
1kenia1 4 years ago
HaHa I Did Have Some Fun Watchin This Video An Omg When The Hand Came From The Stairs That Scared Me And My Mate Enoughhh !!!
hayleeox 4 years ago
bad quality
cookiesisdead890 4 years ago
Why the fuck do I watch these things? I can't help it,I love it and I'll watch it again. I'll definitly have nightmares now.
lughnut 4 years ago
its grate i love this movie lol
its short but still grate!
lol if i was thre idbe in hysterics lol, the grudge like charictor is really funny lol ^^
im gonna fave it lol ^^ xx
tormentedsoul666 4 years ago
o0okayo0o,i couldn't understand your message!!
greendayluver9 4 years ago
Very good short; really creepy and atmospheric. One question, though: did the "actor" know the camera was rolling? Because he walks through this like it's a blocking rehearsal.
dompy1 4 years ago
if your goal was to make me really need to change my underware u sucseded. great job
CELTICGAL 4 years ago
That was pretty good. It could have used some more camera coverage though. Like when he's standing in the doorway pushing the elevator button? It would have made it a bit more tense with maybe a close-up or super there. The actor, not much expression on his face. I'd be fucking scared shitless if that happened to me! Also, I know it's a short, but a little character bonding/building would've have made it better too. But it was still good.
playmopaintball 4 years ago
pretty cool... sounds like at one point you use some audio from Darkness Falls. Awesome.
gabzcorey16 4 years ago
awesome short! You did an awesome job!
Kindergoth 4 years ago
the onli reeson tht tht wa scaryy is coz itss menna b the grudge n enii fink thts t duu wid the grudge shits ee up its the scarii ist fillm evvahh - but the personn hu wa the gruge dint lukk gd x
o0okayo0o 4 years ago
not scary ώ
metroidfan 4 years ago
The actor is not good. The first part is boring
ejkapuso07 4 years ago
the actor is not good. the first part is boring
wayafterthispinished 4 years ago
so scary gosh!
bubblesNahmed 4 years ago
bubblesnahmed you are the most sarcastic ass ive ever seen keep it up you should land yourself a formidable mauling muhahahahahahahahaha
wayafterthispinished 4 years ago
great job making remake :-)
babyjuicy2 4 years ago
bahaha
emochick956 4 years ago
bahaha
wayafterthispinished 4 years ago
that was scary!!5/5
greendayluver9 4 years ago
ohh freaky, i am shakin in my space boots!!!
ricque18 4 years ago
Inspired by true events?... tells plx :O
Meck8 4 years ago
Im 8 and that wasnt scary
randomboy007 4 years ago
im 8 and that wasnt scary
wayafterthispinished 4 years ago
you are not 8 if you are you need to get out more since u act smart
me0dont0know0why 4 years ago
WHERE THE FUCK IS THE ORGY PART?
JUNEORJUNE 4 years ago
ITS NOT SCARY!!ITS SO CORNY
MARIA1307 4 years ago
fuk!d stairs part was scary!!!
pikakiko 4 years ago
oh god; creepy! awesomely done! really good!!!
vampireserena 4 years ago
thts gid!u shuld make mre films
mandiieexxx 4 years ago
that was great.
hippiefreak66 4 years ago
great I love horror and homemade video 5/5 !
I make some videos check them out
David5201 5 years ago
Very nice job.Keep up the good work.
Sithmaster519 5 years ago
awsome
Demonpheonix 5 years ago
made me me jump on more that one occasion, well done
myrkeyjones 5 years ago
Good Job!! I luved it..Real creepy....Keep up tha good wrk.
Mzn0t0ri0us 5 years ago
very well done congrads
nivsha 5 years ago
That does eem a problem if random girls are haunting your staircase and groping you XD Ah, but I did enjoy it a lot. It was cool ^^
SuiFong12 5 years ago
that was actually pretty good... I really liked it
barcaliini 5 years ago
Creepy...I liked it ;)
Toulina 5 years ago
I thought it was funny... I liked that it was simple but creepy and of course had classic horror movie referances... Nice job...
StarofDavid 5 years ago
Digging your work dude. Was shot nice. Have you done anything else. Im heavily into horror too and shot my first piece for a uni project last year. Its called murderpoem (check it out) Take care dude
deadite02 5 years ago
Thank you, I'll watch it and leave my comment. Right now I'm doing a comedy, gore short film. You can watch a teaser, just go to my videos. Is the one titled "Ana - Teaser 1". See ya!
magnusfilms 5 years ago
nice job look 4ward 2 cing mre of ur films
JAY4KURT 5 years ago
Thank you! You can watch a teaser of my next film, "Ana".
magnusfilms 5 years ago
the guy got no expressions....still i like the plot good try
Tanisha1994 5 years ago
Thanks Tanisha. The main actor is me, and you're right, I'm not talented at all. :) Next time I'll try to get better actors.
magnusfilms 5 years ago
be more selective in choosing your actors
EvIlprson69 5 years ago
Hi Evilprson, thank you for your comment. I know I'm a really bad actor :) and you can watch more of it in "Fichines". But, hey, good news: I'm not perfoming any character in my new film, "Ana"! Just directing. =P See ya and thanks again.
magnusfilms 5 years ago
it was realy good i want to see more of your work.
RecklessMC 5 years ago
very impressive!
importfanatik 5 years ago
this is a serious filmmaker, surprisingly good work. light and cam are excellent
ducksinthewind 5 years ago
realy good! I like it!
thejameskiller 5 years ago
NICE VIDEO!!!
this is actually very good
this is the best homemade videos i have ever watched!
XR0N4LDX 5 years ago
really? girls with their hair in their face is scary?
hmm... I liked the reveal in the bathroom there... nice tight little scene.
420stud 5 years ago
yah, okay, that wasn't scary in the lest *hyperventilates*
hellopoppet06 5 years ago
nice video making...glad to see it...good job!!
heartstring08 5 years ago
Thank you for your kind comments! It's nice to see you enjoyed it.
magnusfilms 5 years ago
awesome. Good job!
forgottenmaz 5 years ago
Well done guys, it rules!
rodrigoaltamirano 5 years ago
Brilliant.
Absofuckinglutely BRILLIANT.
DerMetzgermeister 5 years ago
Brilliant -- it sucked that I couldn't really experience the whole film because I couldn't see anything..my stupid monitor wouldn't go brighter. But damn, you put your own twist on the whole Ju on / Ring thing...I mean I thought the croaking/meowing noises were scary. But she was full out screaming bloody murder. =O Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
shewantsromancex 5 years ago
Hey wot was that stuff comin out of the wall? and how did u do that?
emmalouisejacqueline 5 years ago
Hi emma, what do you mean? Do you mean the ghost's arm?
magnusfilms 5 years ago
No the wierd mustard like goo that came out the wall after the guy went past
emmalouisejacqueline 5 years ago
I'm really glad you like it, guys! It feels encouraging for a student and amateur like me! Please come back soon to watch new creepy and rare films!
magnusfilms 5 years ago
where did you get the darkness falls noises?
bboiz1 5 years ago
Hi bboiz, I ripped them from the movie dvd. Good ear you have! :) There's also noises from Ringu, Ju-On and Dark Water.
magnusfilms 5 years ago
Wow! nice work! loved it!
sergie 5 years ago
What Ishigaki said. This is a brilliant short film. I've gotta say, the title is horrible, but the actual film itself is simply amazing. Lol if you just change the title, this could come close to or actually win a film competition.
nikedmondson 5 years ago
this is teh usome. very scary O_O ^_^
thepoofball 5 years ago
WELL DONE! You ar an inspiration to future directors like myself. 2 thumbs up!! ^__^
MissIshigaki 5 years ago
Thank you for all your kind responses and critics. Slasher, about the trail of blood: that's a good one! ;)
magnusfilms 5 years ago
that was very good. if i heard noises like that comming from the end of the hallway, i would say "Oh hell no! i'm taking the window!" But when the girl is crawling, it woulda been cool if a trail of blood was left as she was dragging her body on the ground. but this was awsome none the less!
slasher345 5 years ago
wow.. this was amazing. and inspiration movies they are ;)
pulseofthemaggotgirl 5 years ago
This was more creepier than both the first ring and the grudge. It was very creepy and it actually had jump scenes. Nice work.
gambilljen 5 years ago
You made this look pretty creepy! Nice angles and shots. 5 stars!
shardak 5 years ago
Wow! This film is very excelent! ö.öb The light is good and the camera, too. The ghosts are on the right places to surprise the eyes!
Spinni 5 years ago
0.0 awsome film!! its accually realy realy cool and frightening!! i wish this would be a real horror movie!! i would love to go see it in the theatres!!!
AnnaMustang 5 years ago
Hi Anna, thank you for your nice comments! Glad you liked it, and hope you visit again for new films.
magnusfilms 5 years ago
I haven't watched your inspirations' films but I got a really good sense of what their films are like. You actually had me on edge when the real scary stuff happened. The camerawork during those frightening parts was wonderful. That setting (mostly the cool swinging door) was also excellent. All I'd really say is... get a tripod for some stuff? Otherwise thrilling.
bhfilms 5 years ago
Thank you for your comments, as always :D Yeap, I've to agree with you about the tripod. It's becoming a MUST. I'll get one for next productions!
magnusfilms 5 years ago