I really liked it, specialy the start, that was really powerfull. i have no idea what can go next but my sure it will be great cause you guys are really talented.
Also, in the scene where he hears the radio, you should probably fade in the audio so it gets louder as he gets closer to it. It just kinda pops out of nowhere and hes in a completely different room. Doesn't sound right
I enjoyed this and I love the concept of creating a movie with the feedback of others. Only criticism I have is a lack of dialogue, (not necessarily from tania because obviously her lack of dialogue is part of the plot) but it's 10 minutes into the movie and I don't really know who anybody is (other than chirren) or what's going on. I think at some point in the movie the opening actor should be in the predicament he's in during the opening scene, so technically it'd be a premonition.
Perhaps Chiren is the dude he tried to call but he's not mentally challenged and the other guy is. They could run into each other on the way to the police station.
the shooting technique was not good in 3rd part as it was in first 2 episodes. The story was flowing at a certain speed but it suddenly slowed down in 3rd episode too. I think the space should change in the movie's next episodes. We have been watching them in their houses were it became usual to us by now. I dont mean changing the all background but you know what I mean. I liked the scene in the kitchen, as it was new to the audience.
seems perhaps there might be some natural communication between this 'alien' girl and Chiren. but because of the mental disablility he understands her and can predict her ...so he may or may not be the first to die.
OMFG SIDE BOOB HOUR!
xmattzax 3 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Sorry but this is amateur CRAP and boring
I do not like it
1 star
qwertdfsf 4 years ago
OMFG dude if you don't like it then stop watching it! So far you have posted a comment on each video they've made so heres a tip...STOP WATCHING.
orionblacksapostasy 4 years ago 10
I really liked it, specialy the start, that was really powerfull. i have no idea what can go next but my sure it will be great cause you guys are really talented.
guyraby 4 years ago
Nexy: Sex!!!xD
DAWARG 4 years ago
Also, in the scene where he hears the radio, you should probably fade in the audio so it gets louder as he gets closer to it. It just kinda pops out of nowhere and hes in a completely different room. Doesn't sound right
purleedef 4 years ago
I enjoyed this and I love the concept of creating a movie with the feedback of others. Only criticism I have is a lack of dialogue, (not necessarily from tania because obviously her lack of dialogue is part of the plot) but it's 10 minutes into the movie and I don't really know who anybody is (other than chirren) or what's going on. I think at some point in the movie the opening actor should be in the predicament he's in during the opening scene, so technically it'd be a premonition.
purleedef 4 years ago
Yeah- Giev some brocolli and PinkPally Action plixx!1
Jehuty79 4 years ago
put some brocolli in there
pikutronix 4 years ago 2
Awesome so far! Keep it up!
smw092 4 years ago
Perhaps Chiren is the dude he tried to call but he's not mentally challenged and the other guy is. They could run into each other on the way to the police station.
TheCentipede 4 years ago
but generally, i love the idea, and keep up the good work. honestly i am amazed by the professionalism that you guys have.
thanks
smellslikecarrot 4 years ago
the shooting technique was not good in 3rd part as it was in first 2 episodes. The story was flowing at a certain speed but it suddenly slowed down in 3rd episode too. I think the space should change in the movie's next episodes. We have been watching them in their houses were it became usual to us by now. I dont mean changing the all background but you know what I mean. I liked the scene in the kitchen, as it was new to the audience.
smellslikecarrot 4 years ago
>I think Tania should F-ck Chiren to death.
zorlak2006 4 years ago
I dunno, just keep doing what ur doing.. its intense..
joyinho 4 years ago
i enjoy the interactiveness
rockafeladave 4 years ago
amazing!
MiNiMaLsAnItY 4 years ago
or....not that he has to die but they end up reallllly not getting along because he can sense shes up to no good and she can sense that he knows
Alphacat 4 years ago
seems perhaps there might be some natural communication between this 'alien' girl and Chiren. but because of the mental disablility he understands her and can predict her ...so he may or may not be the first to die.
Alphacat 4 years ago
amazing! and wow tania- I was deinately pulled right into the scene :-P
Alphacat 4 years ago