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  • Wow this story is sooo amazing you are very talented

  • so.... awesome, omg imma puke for this awesomness. PLEASE POST SOON!

  • Post soon!

  • i cant wait for your next episodee! please make it soon!

  • there are over 80 comments!!! YAYYY! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!

  • Please continue! 

  • 1.idk what he want , maybe he wants her back

    2. I love this!!!!!!! U have to make more episode please

  • What Editing System Do You Usee !?

  • wait, u dont speak english? then what do u speak?

  • omgomgomgomgomg I LOVE THISSS! PLEASE MAKE A NEW ONE SOOOON!

  • 1. he was in the beginning right? where was into rose, i think. but i think he wants to try and help her

    2. i love the story. i just started watching it today, and i love it! but im soo scared for rose. canty wait for the next one! (:

  • i love this story :) can't wait for the next one!

  • I hope I'm not asking much but if you have time could you let it be available for mobile? I read/seen both might as well say amazing work :D please respond

  • 1. Nooo clue

    2. yes and no. i want her to let him help her!!!

  • Oh darn I wish it was for mobile it's so good

  • there is over 80 comments so there should be one coming soon

  • I absolutely love this story!! it's great!!

    1. I have no idea :D

    2. I love everything about the story.. the plot.. LOLENA <3 <3 just everything. GREAT!!! =)

  • I am loving this story so far!

    1) To help her or to get her away from Mike maybe?

    2) Yes, because it's different from alot of stories on here. It's nice to see. It's relly interesting as well.

    The intro is lovely by the way. Can't wait for episode 4!

    (:

  • OHHH Yay. I came at the right time1 Congrats this is now ur 80th comment[=...Soo u have 80 comments now. Plz make/post the next one!

  • omgoshhh loved it!!!

  • Cool(: This was a real good eppy! So when are you posting a new episode for this and prophecy of a shattered heart?

  • Wow this series just to super dastic awsome and amazing I don't know what words can rlly describe how awsome it is. I can tell you put so much work in them. Can't wait for the next. this is soooo good! Consider me ur #1 fan<3

  • *To help her? or to rescue her? take her away?...i'm not sure :/

    *Yea totally. becuz the dtory can be related to so many people. whether its child wife abuse or children abuse

  • You are an amazing writer.

    1. Maybe he is there to try to help her but it will only make things worse.

    2. I absolutely love it. I like that it deals with a powerful and serious topic. It's hard to explain why I love it but I just do.

  • 1)Umm i don't know but whatever hes gonna do I hope its gonna be a good thing..or something rlly dramatic or interesting

    2)Yupy duppy I do! Im sorry I cant rlly..well I don't rlly know how to explain...All I can say is yes I love the series. I just love the plot and characters and I don't want it to ever stop. Well that and I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hunger for more!!!!!!!!!!!

  • When or where is the next one??? You didn't make it yet?...cuz I rlly wanna see what happens next

  • NICEEEEEEEEEE! But man why did u have to stop it there! It was just getting good.lol. I hope u get 80 comments soon[= I'm just dying to watch the rest of this series<3

  • Ahhh I loved it!!!!! Plz make the next one now plz. Ughh I can't wait any longer<3 Plz post the next one already. pretty pretty pretty plz

  • Subbed you Great Series

    -1. Yeah I;m not so sure but maybe here's there to help?

    -2. Well yes duh! Umm well the most reason why I like it is becuz of how greatfully imagination was used Like I rlly like how it's old times and the characters and just everything. It's all just going great ecuz of ur development to the story through rose's beating probelms and feelings for Mike

  • EEEEEP When's the next one? I must know what's gonna happen! Plz post soon...like rlly soon Becuz if u don't I will be a very very sad camper ]=

  • Awsome! I usually hate reading but your series is just too awsome for me to just go miss out on<3 Can't wait for the next I have no idea what Liam wants 0.o

  • ooohhhhh mmmmmyyyyyy ggggoooooossssshhhhh!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!! first of all i hate mike, he is a douche and i hope he dies because he deserves it!!!!! >:( and i have no idea what liam wants... maybe william called him to have him talk to rose about the situation. i don't know! and I LOVE how the story is going.... KEEP IT UP :)

  • Omg...I wait for this for a WEEK!!

    cuz I cant go on youtube on the weekdays cuz of school..

    U MADE MY DAY!!

    AMAZING VIDEO!

  • 1. Ahh i HAVE no idea

    2. I love how the story is going its so amazing and how protective William is to Rose

  • write more please (:

  • 1. noooo clue.....

    2.I love it!!!! It's sooooo good and logan is so protective of her!!!!!

    I think this story is soooo good!!!

    PS... please post prophecy of a shattered heart soooon!!!!

  • 1. I have no idea...

    2. Yes! Because Logan is getting so protective and I am in suspense on what Liam wants and if Mike will show up! :D

    This story is amazing! I hope you upload soon! I'm already addicted! :D

  • 1)Idk. Surpise me<3

    2)It's so hard to explain on why I just love this series so much and why I like how it's going. There aren't words I possibly think off that can describe the awsomeness of this story

  • 1. not sure!

    2. THE STORY IS AMAZING. NOTHING LIKE WHAT I'VE BEEN READING :D

    the plot of the story is very nice and you know it's always the usual. the girl is always hard to get. but still, it's AMAZING.

  • -He wants to help her?

    -Totally! It's like a real series!

    Sorry for short answers I have school tomorrow so I have to sleep early. Thx for this awsome series<3 Ur amazing

  • * He wants Rose back for himself

    *Yup everything is fitting together perfectly! Plz post the next one soon even though we are so far away from 80 comments ]=

  • 1. I think he knows about Mike.

    2. Yeah, but I think you should ease up on the abuse. This story is brilliant and, without sounding too harsh because I love this story, I don't want it to turn into a cliche. Other than that, the story is great!

  • awsome just awsome! Can't wait for the next. Sorry I can't answer the questions I got a book report to do :/

  • Amazing episode as always but too bad were 30 comments away from 80 ]= It might take a while for some ppl to see this becuz everyone is at school now so not much people have time to log on to youtube now a days but thank god it's almost friday!

  • 1. Hopefully agreeing with Will, that she has to leave Mike

    2. YES! I LOVE THIS STORY! Feels so realistic

  • 1. OHMYGOSH! i don't knoww S:

    2. like it..NO!! i LOVEEE ITT, this and all your stories are like the best of youtube your such and amazing writter the way you describe the story it feels like i'm actually living it!! your just amazing and the story is WOOOOWW!! : D

  • at the very end i thought it was mike not liam so i was oh shit its mike! run rose run and will beat mikes ass for her!!

  • this series is amazing (: <3 can't wait for the next one.

  • Woah! To e truthful I thought u quitted writing again]= Like how u took a long break from writing POASH! I was about to cry. But then I saw this and sighed in relief!

    ---I'm thinking....ummmm....yeah I have no idea. so sorry :/

    ----Yes ofcourse and becuz women, I feel like this series is so real. Even though it's just picture and text it's just the writing touches you. Making u feel how rose feels making u feel like ur really in the story watching everything go down.

  • Awwww 80 comments? I guess that means I'll have to comment 32 morex XP Just kidding I don't need to do that I mean this series is amazing and so I know you'll reach your goal {X (Max and Logan are yummy)

  • FINALLY! YESS! I've been waiting for u to post another eppy! Thx so much for doing so[= And wow I see drama abt to happen! Plz go make the next episode already I rlly am dying to know what happens next! Plz do it before my stupid school starts on THURSDAY! I'll try my best to tell my friends abt this so they can help u get 80 comments<3

  • OMFG Max T+Logan Lerman in the same series=SEXY OVERLOAD! HAHAHA! Thx so much for uploading another episode. I've waited weeks ]= And man u left us with a cliff hanger! Well kinda I just rlly wanna know what he wants to talk abt and if Mike will see them?

  • 1.) I rlly do think that's it's either he's gonna apologize or try to get her back again...Max<3

    2)I love it<3 This story in unique beauitfully written and unique!

    UPLOAD SOON PLZ

  • im so in love with this <3

    1. no idea what so ever.

    2. i love ittttttttt<3 its so different from most crap people write.

  • Oh phew. It's Liam, not Mike. Oh wait, Mike's gonna come home and see Liam! God, this is not going to end up well no matter who shows up.

  • 1.liam i think he either wants to get rose back or he wants to apoligize or something like that

    2. i love how the story is but i kinda think rose needs to let william in and help

    this story is amazing and i cant wait fro the next eppy!!!!!!<3

  • perfect <3

  • I LOVE IT. I am so glad you are doing this story.

    1) Maybe he is Julian's dad?

    2) I love it, cause it is different to other stories.

  • 1. Maybe to talk about how he thinks Julian is his son?

    2. It is absolutely perfect, even if you dont speak perfect English I love this story:)

  • 1. idk

    2.i love it! i just started reading it today and fell in love with it

  • AAAAAAAH MAX THIERIOT. :DDDDDDD .

    1. Rose...? He wants her back?

    2. Yes, it's very interesting! I love how you leave cliff hangers and even though Rose won't let William help her he won't give up.

  • 1. I don't know. Is that Max Thieriot as Liam? XD Hehehe

    2. Yes, cuz your writing is flawless. Although Will can be over dramatic at times. lol I just realized, Logan's character in 3:10 to Yuma was also William. XD

    Mike is so cruel. :( I wish Rose could be more independent and just leave Mike.

  • 1. why do i feel like liam is mike's friend?

    2. YES I LOVE IT because the plot is completely different from others. it's set in the 1900s, not present day, so that's cool. and i think this is an interesting topic to write about: abusive relationships. but yeah i love it<3

  • hi um can i comment 50 more times and you can post the new one?

  • can i just say that i just want to jump into my computer and punch mike in the face...HIS CHARACTER IS TERRIBLE! lol. [:

    1.GAHHH I HAVE NO IDEA!

    2.YES! LIKE SHOOOSHH YEAHH! i just love how different it is from so many other stories like it's reality, harsh reality, you are just such an amazing writter Lin!!

  • this is amazing!!!! <3

  • i love!

    

  • i love your stories!!! they're just so amazing!! you're a awesome writtor, and you have sooooooooo much imagination!!! i admire you so much!! can i ask wich is your real language? because you said in the discription box that you're not english, so im just curious :) and where do you get these ideas for your stories?!?---its just SO AMAZING :)

  • pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease­pleasepleaseplease uploaduploaduploaduploadupload­uploaduploadupload thethethethethe 44444 episodeepisodeepisodeepisodeep­isode soonsoonsoon!!!!!

  • Wow! There's only been 3 episodes of this series out and I'm already hooked and in love with it<3 Plz post soon like on Tuesday Wensday Thursday JUST MAKE IT SOON

  • Can't wait for the next. Are you working on the next one already? Becuz this series is uber good.(hehehe I said uber) Plz reply saying that your at least almost done or you are working on the next episode. I can only wait so long

  • Ahhh just amazing. I hope more ppl see this soon! I rlly want to see the next eppy. I just wanna marry this series. lol.

  • Wait, who is Liam again???

  • Omygod. I am in love with this story.

  • yay thanks for posting a new eppy<3

    1. Maybe he's trying to get her back again...Idk

    2. Well duhh<3 This story is so greatly written. It's doesn't ever get boring it's just so entertaining to watch. Not once have I skipped a part in your eppys, I usually skip a lot when I read a series but everything in this series is so entertaining to watch. I just can't get enough. And so sorry for the long comment you probably won't/ didn't read all this

  • YESSS! Finally! Man this series is my drug, I hope you already are working on the next one, or better I hope your done with it! Both your series are my top favorite Lolena stories<3 Don't ever stop cause I'll kill myself if u do(just kidding but seriously don't stop)

  • write more

  • so awesomel

  • love this series

  • I love this series so much that I would make 80 comments for you to continue

  • Omg when I opened my youtube and saw this I gasped and started screaming!! My mom got so pissed, but oh well XP Good EPPY<3 Love Liam,he's so hot but of-course Logan is hotter. And wow 80 comments?...No worries I'm pretty sure you'll get it, this series is amazing plz tell me that as soon as u get 80 comments you'll upload the next eppy asap, becuz waiting is my pet peeve..just saying. (: <--------- hehehehehe

  • 1) ...Ummm I don't wanna sound lazy or anything I honestly have no clue, sorry ]=

    2)OMG YES! It just feels so real. And I'm not just kissing up to you, it's just your writing makes. Plz make the next one soon I waited forever for this one and if I wait the same long time for the next one I will seriously die, u have no idea how long I waited for this episode..actually I think u did but still u know what I mean. POST THE NEXT ONE PLZ PLZ PLZ I CAN'T WAIT THAT LONG]= PLEASE

  • huh, whos Liam? anyways i love the series!! it's so thrilling and it's making me feel real emotions, e.g. i feel soooo sorry for rose and I'm so mad at mike:D can't wait for the next!

  • omigoodness! this is a really really really good series! mike needs to go away before rose ends up dead!

  • 1. Um, maybe William told him about the situation? Or to set things straight between him and Rose. :)

    2. Um HELL YEAH! It's already my favorite story! Prophecy of a Shattered Heart, and Saving Rose are in a tie. :D

    I hope school it treating you well! :)

  • this was reallly good! next one soon!

  • 1. Maybe he knows whats going on!

    2. I love this story because you write it so well and it keeps me wanting to read more!

  • 1. hmm, no idea. to help her maybe?

    2. I LOVE IT. it's really unique, i like the style.

    amazing story, keep it up <3

  • 1) I have no idea. Maybe trying to get her for himself? I gotta say, I thought it was Mike coming and I was screaming at my computer. Holy shit I was scared.

    2) Yeah. It's very suspenseful. Even though Rose is being dumb, and Mike is a dickface, I think Rose will come to her senses, and Mike will die (Hopefully.)

  • 1. maybe something happened to mike.

    2. I do, it just strikes my interest I guess :)

  • omg this is really good story!

  • I love you this looks professional very well done more more more :D

  • 1. He overheard the conversation and wants to help rose. Maybe?

    2. Yes because it is so well written and heartbreaking. You just want to help the person.

    Love the story!!!!!

  • so good, this story is amazing!

    1) i don't know..maybe to help rose?

    2) yes, because the story is so relatble...not to me personally but to people who have been in that situation.

  • who is liam. need to know. cant wait 4 the next 1.

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