WHISPER MY NAME - POETRY READING # 22

[guzsaj]

that's funny

[kevphillips02]

" I turn 360 degrees and see no wildflower in sight just a huge great big train that hurts my brain and causes pain.

[kevphillips02]

Coult that be the longest train in the world? Happey new year jesse

[spokenwordable]

i do poetry too. but i find it so hard to write haikus can you do a video on how to write . haikus

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@Azraelbaxtalo

~Thanks :) Ya...I really liked this spot too! It s peaceful out there. I often go there to get away from people :)

Jess

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@DeleteMeOnline

~Haha lol. Nice comment :)

Jess

[davidm550]

Well done for keeping a fairly straight face, Jesse. Love your sense of humour. I have featured this video.

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@davidm550

~Ya sometimes keeping a straight face is hard. Thank you!! I really appreciate you doing that. Sorry it took so long for me to reply to your comment.

Jess

[lisasim]

I like the poem and like everyone else was impressed by the passing train.... Where are you? Long time no see...

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@lisasim

~Thank you! Ya it s been awhile . Haven t been on youtube much these days Nice to hear from you :D

Jess

[bretbryan]

WOW! Now that's quite some train....poem is pretty good too ;-)

You are one awesome character Jess!

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@bretbryan

~Thank you John :) Appreciate that!

Jess

[AkiiesThePoet]

Very well done. I would have never thought of this.

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@AkiiesThePoet

~Thanks :) By the way I boxed you again. I put you at the top of the list!

Jess

[MsRinaKate]

Love it =)

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@MsRinaKate

~Thanks Rina :)

Jess

[phfrankh]

Yes! " When one least expects it "!I needed to here that...again.

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@phfrankh

~Yep! Always seems like the greatest things come along when you least expect it. I get so frustrated sometimes. I need to take my own advice haha :)

Jess

[phfrankh]

@CreepyHermitPoet Your prose is very good and I like the medium you chose for the background,very effective! Thankh you again.

[AutomaticScotty]

I love how you incorporate the train into this. Very beautiful.

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@AutomaticScotty

~Thanks Scotty. The train coming was by coincidence. Never really planned it that way. Just got lucky!

Jess

[bowiehs]

nice video:)

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@bowiehs

~Thanks :)

Jess

[DJRC420]

those are some of the cleanest cars I've ever seen. Hardly a spec of graffiti! Great atmosphere and poetic words.

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@DJRC420

~Thanks :) and yes as I look back on this video I notice what you mean about cleanliness. I guess not that many kids around here who have nothing better to do haha

Jess

[powerpuff250387]

Lovely poem again though Jess :)

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@powerpuff250387

~Thanks. Glad you liked it :D

Jess

[powerpuff250387]

wow that train just keeps on going!

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@powerpuff250387

~Hey Julie :) Yes I thought this train would never end. I ve never seen such a long train EVER.

Jess

[alonealotta]

I'll never think of trains the same way again...you would make an awesome song writer Jesse...=)

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@alonealotta

~Aww thanks :) I do try and write songs on guitar actually! I ve written a few. I even have some older videos posted where I play these songs :)

Jess

[Maladay]

Hi hun,you have a lovely way with words,great video,wow Ive never seen a train sooooo long...and now its gone...along the line....distant like time ;-)

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@Maladay

~Hey Debbie :) Thanks! I love your little ryhme in your comment :) and YES it was a LONGGG train. Wow.

Jess

[b1p0l4rt]

I would whisper your name, but you wouldn't hear it over the train! LIKE!

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@b1p0l4rt

~Haha aww thanks Gail :) It s the thought that counts :D

Jess

[Jukeboxguy00]

Now who else but you would try to read a poem with the rumbling of a train behind them. Brilliant.

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@Jukeboxguy00

~Haha thanks :) Ya I came up with this idea. Wanted to try something different. Didn t expect the train to come though! Weird.

Jess

[AugustusLarch]

I have always wanted to jack some freight from a train. Especially the lumber. You would need six tucks to haul away the booty from one car. I's a losing propostion but doesn't stop me from being fixated on the booty.

Is this poem from your book?

What part of the country is this from?

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@AugustusLarch

~Haha I love your idea. Yes it would be tough to take freight from the train but it d be interesting to try. This is a poem from my book. I live in southeastern Alberta (Canada) on the prairies. This is shot from the coulees behind the suberbs of the city I live in.

Jess

[TheLApitfighter]

you sound like your getting sick dude

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@TheLApitfighter

~Hey Brian :) I think it was just my throat was dry out there. You have good ears though.

Jess

[spokenwordable]

its good

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@spokenwordable

~Thank you!

Jess

[Dadstime101]

Im not big on poetry but i do like that poem and what you got going on, so i subbed upl love from CALI

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@Dadstime101

~Thanks a lot :)

Jess

[misswatson2009]

That train made this poem just that little bit more powerful Lol

I bet that plant/flower loves you to bits ^_^

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@misswatson2009

~Ya! Wasn t even expecting to have the train come by when I was shooting this. Crazy coincidence! Haha ya that flower did love me cause I was so gentle with it.

Jess

[jerrydoubleu]

Cantopex--huge potash import/export--relates to theme on plants & life. Potash is third ingrediant to fertilizer. Fine CHPoet. Nice.

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@jerrydoubleu

~Thanks :)

Jess

[cbfall]

Excellent poem!! So remarkable!!!

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@cbfall

~Thanks CBFALL!!! :D

Jess

[spokenwordable]

is that yours

[gaskleronts]

@spokenwordable yeah dude of course it is

[marcell6464]

i like this

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@marcell6464

~Thanks Marcel :)

Jess

[indigoexpressions]

Incredible poetry as always, Jess. Hope you're doing well my brother.

Love And Blessings,

Jeremy

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@indigoexpressions

~Thanks Jeremy :) Yes many things in my life are better now but still got some issues to deal with. I m a lot happier now though.

Jess

[JerryCurl34]

Sheerly Awesome, I like the setting you chose

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@JerryCurl34

~Thank you :) Ya I like to find unique places around here to shoot vids. I get bored in the same spot

Jess

[kevphillips02]

That is some train.

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@kevphillips02

~Hey Kev :) Yes it was a very LONG train and very clean as other people have pointed out haha

Jess

[kevphillips02]

@CreepyHermitPoet I thought it was never going to end.

[kevphillips02]

@kevphillips02 You could have called the poem "whisper my train" . " I look around i see no wild flower girl in sight but the bloody great never ending train that rattles my brain"

[2020cheddarc]

great reading Jess - keep it up :)

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@2020cheddarc

~Thanks :)

Jess

[acooper37]

I'm glad I found your channel, Very good poem, I very much needed to hear that!!! Keep it UP!!!

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@acooper37

~Thank you. Glad you liked the poem :)

Jess

[vamparicW]

one of the first to view, nice. but yeah i always loved your poems and i am happy that you found a home :D, keep going strong!

[mmedefarge]

@vamparicW Ditto. Glad that you've got a home now.

[CreepyHermitPoet]

@vamparicW

~Thank you. I appreciate that :) Ya I ve been at my place for about 4 months now

Jess