We Were Once Perfect... [Preview. Feedback Desperately Needed!]

[kairi31008]

okay, i love this one.

[PineappleGal246]

what is this called? the song?

by who?

[PureEnglishRose]

It's a bit of a pathetic idea, probably, but if you want the cookie cutter effects to look less "blunt", then try making them opaque or whatever the word is. XD Like, sort of half see through. Sorta.

I can tell I am making no sense... =P

[blackwolf999]

I really like the TV effects, they were really fitting to me. I loved the cookie cutters in the beginning and the middle then again I love the cookie effects in the first place so ^^" The only part I didn't like alot was at 0:46, I like the first two parts before that, but I don't like the third 'ahhh' part. Anyways I really like it so far, can't wait to see the finished version. Sorry about the late comment and nice tags for the video. Wow, long comment sorry ^^"

[TELDANNY]

Great.

[skittleferret]

this is awesome, and you need to get that!!

i actually think you SHOULD focus more on the eyes during 0:46-0:49. . . they r still a bit of a blue-ish hue. and the whole "inside out again" , maybe you could do a fade back into the original not-upside-down clip. Keep the cookie cutter, it is a really good touch with the song. Other than that, it is absolute awesome-ness.... 5 stars so far!!

Can't wait till you finish it!

[Layke55]

I just wanted to let you know that I really like the amvs you make. You're too hard on yourself, but I can understand since I too am a perfectionist.

Anyhow, about this particular video. I really like the cookie cutter effects in the beginning. I do believe the only thing I find a bit odd is the part at 0:57. But otherwise its good. ^.^

[dreamer2123]

youre welcome!

[dreamer2123]

omg i love it you must finish it but don't hurt yourself 'cause we all love you =^.^=

whats the name of the song btw?

[sorakingdomhearts18]

I LOVE THIS VIDEO finish it, its sooo good, and i love the effects and everything dont worry so much about ur videos!! they all r awesome :)

[MeianNoHimex]

All of them? Really? I'm glad to hear it! I'm still not happy with this, but all of you who are sweet enough to leave me comments are making me feel better about them. :D

I really appreciate it. :D

And heh, thank you. I'm glad you like them!

[StrawberryPenelo]

omg!! this is great and so lovely!! i love the song!! but hun don't be so hard to urself!! ^__^

[MeianNoHimex]

Heh. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

But okay. I can try, but I can't make any promises...xD

Thank you, though.

[kliz3343]

This is very pretty. However, I have one or two suggestions. On the line "we were once perfect, me and you", try switching the scenes. Put the cave scene (we were once perfect) and then the layered one (me and you). The part you are worried about with the beats matching at the beginning, with the tv simulator, is there any way to turn down the opacity of the effect? Like, make it less obvious? You could try that on those last two beats. Other than that, this video is very good! n.n

[MeianNoHimex]

Ohh... You know, I didn't even think of that, but you've got a point. I think it would look better that way!

As for the opacity, I'm not sure that's on effects... But there's settings I can play with, so maybe I could make it weaker if I messed around with them. I'll have to try that.

Thanks so much for your suggestions! :D

And I'm glad you liked it anyway.

[FallingxGold]

Beautiful song and I love how you made the clips fit.

00:42-00:47 seemed...I'm not sure. I thought the zoom into her mouth seemed too abrupt and it didn't flow well for me.

I loved how you made her red though. It seemed to go well and you pulled it off.

That's really all I can find to pick at. I didn't like 00:57 at first but I watched the video again and it fit. So I'm not sure about that part.

[MeianNoHimex]

Aughh... I had a intelligent reply written out and Youtube didn't post it, and it's not letting me now! *tries twice*

[MeianNoHimex]

AUGH. It's doing that thing where it makes me post in parts for no reason!

Sorry for the upcoming spam. ._.;;

[MeianNoHimex]

To keep it short to it actually posts...

-Thanks so much for the specifics!

-You're so right about the zoom. I knew something was wrong with that but couldn't place it, but that's totally it. Thanks for pointing it out! :D

-I feel the same about :57. I'll have to play with it more...

-YOUTUBE IS STUPID. Sorry. D:

[FallingxGold]

Haha, that's alright and I'm glad I could help. =]

[Sinyeta]

I think it's AWESOME....BTW...what song is this?

[RyuujiDiceBoy]

Yeah...your being too hard yourself! I LOVE it! I think most creative people think everything they make sucks. I hate own writing but everyone says is wonderful. My best friend thinks her drawing sucks most of the time and I envy her drawing skills (plus it's her major in college!). Plus when it's your own work, you can nitpick it to death (I know I do!). Keep it up cause I wanna see the rest of this please^^!

[MeianNoHimex]

Hah, aww, thanks. xD

And, well, I don't think I'm creative at all! But... I do pretty much hate EVERYTHING I make. xD

All I can ever see is the flaws...xD;

*is a prefectionist to INSANE LEVELS*

I used to write all the time and even really harsh critics liked it a lot, but I quit because all I saw when I looked at it was a pile of messy crap. XD

Thanks for taking the time to comment, though. :D

Means a lot to me. x3

And okay! Hope you still like it when I finally finish...xD

[xxakikuxx]

:O this is soooo good! please finish it :]

[MeianNoHimex]

Heh, thank you...

I don't think so, but I'm glad someone does. :D

And yeah, I will.

[2kairi11]

AWESOME!!!

I LOVE IT!!!

[MeianNoHimex]

Aww, thank you so much. :D

I'm glad you do. x3

[Kobanya]

Mei-chaaaaaaaaan! -glomps- You have to finish. It was just so abrupt when it ended, I gotta little sad inside!

I don't even like that pairing (coughmoreyaoiplzkthnxcough) and I wanted to see more. So you gotta, gotta finish! We're all counting on you.

And if you don't then I will make an AMV of your least favorite pairing as torture! MUAHAHAHAHAHA!

...Eh...what IS your least favorite pairing anyway?

[MeianNoHimex]

*falls from glomp* Aww, I'm sorry. xD

But oh, don't worry. I don't care for that pairing at all, either. The only reason it's there is because of my selfish subtext, heh.

It's not a SoKai video. It's a video with Sora and Kairi representing something else...

(And it's not too hard to figure out what if you look at my only other Sora/Kairi-like video...)

But I'm glad you liked ittt. I'm still unsure, but it's good to know you guys do.

And... Hm... You know what?

I don't really know! XD

[Kobanya]

Hmm...then I shall just have to make something up. -grins devilishly- It will most likely involve a Nobody as part of the pairing.

XD

[CarnivorousCOW]

This is awesome possum and a monkey! (wich is insanely awesome if you dont know how to convert small furry animals into awesomeness)

I will send my possum army after you if you dont finish this >=D

[MeianNoHimex]

Thehe, thanks! xD

And no, I never did know how to convert animals into awesome...

I so lack skills. D;

BUT OMGONOZ.

I should probably stop being so lazy, then...:O

[0Sejxs0]

Ooooh, I loved this. Especially that red color thingie effect. :O That was some coolness right there. And that part at :41, too. Annnnnnd, the TV thing was really good timing, too. I can never seem to work that right. ^^''

So, basically, you're being too hard on yourself. xDD You better finish this, like soon. Or, I might havfa come after you. >D

[MeianNoHimex]

Heh. I guess messing around randomly is a good thing, then? xD

And ohhh, yay, you liked that? That's good. I was thinking it stuck out too much or something... I still think that, heh. But you better-than-me people like it, so...:O

And yay! Thank you. Making that preset was a bit of a bitch...xD

But pfft, if you say so...xD

And ONOZ!

That's a new kind of threat over my bad videos. ;O

LANDMARK! xD

...I don't think that's the word, but I'm tired, so it's good enough. XD

[SugarandSpicepuppies]

wow.. its amazing.. u gotta finish it! plz plz plz plz

[MeianNoHimex]

Heh. You think? Thanks. I'm glad to know you like it more than I do.

And I will.

[Adalia133]

man thats reaally good keep goin at it

[MeianNoHimex]

Thank you; I'm glad you think so.

[soramylove]

It's so beautiful! :D It looks awesome so far! Please finish if you have time! :)

[MeianNoHimex]

Aww, you're too kind. But thank you.

And thank you for watching and letting me know.

[soramylove]

You're welcome :D Good luck on the video! :)

[Hazzlie]

I like it, please finish it soon. ^^ It has a nice feel to it.

[MeianNoHimex]

Wow, you really think so? That means a lot! I'm so glad you do! And glad to know it's not a total mess, heh...

But okay. I'll make sure to keep working on it.

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment! :D

[LillaYlet]

It's so beautiful! It's so sad! It's so amazing! I rly love it! You've got to finish it! I especially loved the begining and  0:40-0:41!

5/5 :3

[MeianNoHimex]

Aww, wow! Thanks so much, heh.

You're too sweet. Totally just made me smile. xD

But oh, you liked that part? That's good to know; I wasn't too sure of it...

[potchammy]

This is pretty good, but I c what u mean with u thinking there r 2 many effects.

[MeianNoHimex]

Umm... Thank you?

I'm not sure if that's good or bad, heh. xD;;

[potchammy]

Oh it's not bad if it sounds like that.