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  • Check my shit out at livelifetorap

  • Black as night but whiter than me lol

  • the black bo burhnam C:

  • you look like a little Eddie Murphy

  • yo, this is crazy. you rap real shit neville

  • LMFAO 3 AARON BROOKS COMMENTS

  • Damn

    So many big words

  • @xSWaGGMarTiaN go get a dictionary bruh lol

  • Fantastic style, flow, tone, lyrics and syllabic cuts mister. Keep going strong..the dream is just around the corner .Reality. :-)

  • see its black people like you we need more of

  • Word! Very awesome. xxx

  • Lypse you're so fucking good :D

    Forget the haters, you do this for the love of it and what you spit is so true!

    I'm really not into hip hop, especially mainstream stuff but you are truly an enjoyment to listen to :)

  • dude... ur awsome.!!

    and i dont really listen to rap, but i really liked you.!!

  • @konekochanluv my favorite comments are always ones from people who don't really like rap/hip hop...thanks for making my night!!

  • @lypse14 yay.!!!

    ur welcome lad. keep doing this... ima be with my eyes/ears open fer you now.

  • also, sorrry dude, i hate sayin anything to anyone else like this, but try Balance. To your vocab, short and long rhythms (which u already do), ect. and ya, PROJECTION! remember, u "had charisma before it was regarded as swag" (nice) but i just dont believe you, know what i mean? U do, your smart, ur very good, and this is also old, but it carries, keep up the work man, ur refreshing from most "youtube" utilizers.

  • @UnknownYNo ye I hear you, thx for the feedback, this is lypse btw, I'm just on my other account

  • u have a stylistic resemblance to Shad (K) If u dont know him, get aquainted, do yourself a favour

  • Sick lyric

  • FIRE! this is something to awaken people with..but these words and topics tend to fall on deaf ears..Keep At It

  • you are fuckin amazing dude but uhmmm,....you really dont have tha "rapper look"

    jus sayin

    keep tha songs comin though

  • @dEaThRoSeLoVeR

    lol maybe because I'm not going for a rapper look :P, i just do this for fun

  • @dEaThRoSeLoVeR Define a rap look?

  • @Clark977 ...yeah...you're right

    its just like..idkay he doesnt seem like he would be a rapper

    he doesnt have the swing, the groove, or tha swagger of a rapper..

  • @dEaThRoSeLoVeR people like you are killing the rap game. listen with your ears not ur eyes

  • nice

  • Amazing lyrics and I don't find the delivery whack. Thumbs up!

  • i didn't know aaron brooks rapped...

  • @skillz61689

    neither did i, but what does that have to do with my video? lol, j/k, but i dont look like aaron brooks haha

  • dope ass lyrics but lift some weights or put on a shirt

  • or wear what I want, when I want, if I want to..I think I'll go with that

  • on that note this was weak as fuck. the lyrics were ight but your delivery is unwatchable. skinny ass dude with a shaky voice like u just seen a ghost.

  • lol, I admit this was weak, but I was sick when I recorded it (which is why my voice is shaky/choppy) and I rushed it, but that's besides the point..you make an insulting comment and the take offense to me defending myself?? even you should realize how absurd that is...in any case, grow up

  • dont EVER dumb it down

  • Damn my nigga im pretty keyed right now and im listening to these lyrics like WHAT THE FUCK? Godamn your spitting fire my man godamn..............

  • This sum high quality! Underground For Life

  • good lyrics but u dont sound confident

  • lol ye I know, working on that

    peace

  • Man is nice right now.....Damn brah

    ^_^Wasay

  • sicccccck

  • that is quality!!!! your lyrics are amazing, really made me think!

  • you on the level of dead prez

  • hey man nice work again... i posted up another video of myself on beat check it out if you get a minute it would be appreciated

    -o dub

  • lryics are hot..

    your flow no offense..is ass, you need to work on it, as well as breathing and delivery time...

    these will come with time, gl , your very talented

  • read the description, I was sick when I recorded this and had trouble controlling my breath and I was trying to prevent myself from coughing as I was recording it, so it came out a bit choppy...in any case, thanks for the comment!!

    peace

  • fuckin sick bruh,.. you killed it

  • very nice... i love it...

  • Nice Freestyle man!!

    I got a rap contest on atm..

    I want ya to enter it!!

    Check it out if ya have the time!

  • 5  stars shoot back at me

  • Strait up good..5/5

  • but u should be gettin more views u got talent

  • stunningly amazing !!!! real brilliliant !!

  • CHRIS ROCK + EDDIE MURPHY..

  • that's a new one lol..

  • i just fealt like saying it...

  • I like this.. thats what hip-hop is suppost to be about! A form of poetic comunication..givin people somethin to think about!

  • I rly enjoyed 0:33 - 0:39, is sounded good and wit a beat it would be awesome.

    5/5

  • You I like your lyrics like a mix of keith murray,talib kweli,lupe fiasco!

  • Awesome! That was brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!

  • this was awesome your a true lyrical envisonist

  • O.o! do you read the dictionary?!

    Awesome!

    JC

  • lol I read a lot, but not the dictionary haha

  • Sickwitit

  • Your style reminds of kweli mos def and artists as that ayo dude Im down with the temple of hip hop. In a group with BEAST1333 ayo if you want to help get your name out in the underground hit me up.

  • i think i may of commented on this before, but fuck this is sick, one the sickest for sure

  • mixed it sounds beast

  • shit was definetly ridiculous dude but i feel like the confidence isnt there

  • Damn dude you can definitely write about intelligent Hip Hop I respect that. School these people about the Elite and how they control and dumb down our culture. Definitely dope written shit. But as for your flow/delivery/vocal presence it doesn't really capture my attention....not very memorable or stand out in my mind...you have to SCARE ME with your flow...I have to say, "HOLY SHIT THIS GUY WILL BEAT ME" but honestly....I was rapping over your entry out of boredom. No hate just REALNESS!

  • I don't necessarily HAVE to scare you, because as you said, I haven't really captured YOUR attention...there's really no standard as to how ones flow/delivery should be, so at the end of the day some people will like my flow/delivery and some won't, so the only I WILL do is present my material how I want, and hope that people will typically enjoy it...no hate just being real lol...

    peace

  • LOL at you biting my quote at the end.

    I respect you lypse no doubt I checked out your other videos you seem to be a good kid and your goal of hitting 1000 subs on your youtube account is definitely something you will attain. You are right there really is no standard we all have different tastes in flow. I'm just saying this though, I have fuckin INSANELY great taste in Hip Hop and rappers with IMPECCABLE stylistic flow, so when others don't compare I complain, like I said maybe I'm spoiled!

  • lol, ye man I feel you too...we have different tastes and we're all a little spoiled, but that's a good thing because it keeps our hip hop culture diverse :)...lol

    peace

  • SIIICKKK!!

  • maaaan. that shit was garbage. don't nobody wanna hear all that smart shit.

    LMAO. i'm fuckin wit you. that shit sick and everybody know it... bet you can't get a fuckin record deal to save your life.

    cot damn shame.

    keep writin my nigga, here's hopin you find a way to eat off ya gift

  • Thats hot shit

  • lol real shyt bruh

  • good stuff bro  keep it up!

  • Deep stuff. Respect.

    Stay up,

    Hengman

  • really deep. mad respect.

  • sik shyt aaron brooks lol jkz but nice real hip hop shyt ri here respect styll

    ~1~

  • Holy crap, that was sick

  • lol thats hot. big words. nice to see a great intelligent rapper

  • dope as fuck.

  • yo check my verse...it's a free so let me know what you all think.....go to millsmost page and check out metz....peace

  • Aaron Brooks?

  • lol, naw man I'm not Aaron Brooks

  • yo got lyrics real nice man

  • lyrics is tight, but ya flow is kinda boring...try switching it up a lil and you got potential.

  • dooooooooooooope

  • great introduction.

  • "i look back at your shit with irreverence" that was a funny line lolz. nice job man.

    check out my video and comment y'all.

    ~ WaLiTo ~

  • damn you had me wanting you to continue...im a female and i kinda messed up some of my reading that i wrote my rap on but i tried haha and thats all that matters lypse u should come see it and lemme know what u think....i hope its not terrible i have a few rhymes written but im still a beginner haha but ur awesome!

  • ho-lee-shit

    how the hell you remember that

    daaaaam

  • this iss good, :)

  • dope as shitttt

  • i heard a few they're 3 people that i want to win is Sleepy Ming (even if he is disqualified) and lypse all three should win but i no they all cant win

  • damn do your thing man.. knowledge

  • 5star general... dat wus nice. and i subd. Get @ tha kyd.

    ~eazy~

  • I had charisma before it was ever regarded as swag.

    FIRE

  • shit is tuff

  • commercial rap is all garbage, this was the truth man keep doing ur thing shit u said i really felt

    stand up for hip-hop, str8

  • sir.

    i can follow your thoughts.

    well done.

    peaces

  • OMG That was so sick!lyrics with meaning i swear we need to hook up on a song man

  • wow. a flow of words that has currents that are undeniable in strength like a river carrying one into thoughts that are real and pointing in a direction that allows us to see whats ahead and all you can do from there is take action and b 5'd, fav'd, & subscribed!
  • that's deep...thank you for this comment and the sub!!!

    peace

  • Im Co-Signin this nigga right here. Anyone whos hatin can go hang themselves in their closet. Lypse, you always keep it real man. Stay up Mayne. Intellectual lyricism is always well appreciated in my book.

    Peace & Love

    ~Passionate.

    BTW : What do you use to record your vids? My quality is ok but my MIC sucks ass and is too Low

  • hey thanks for the comment (and sub)...I use a digital camera for the video and just use my mic for the audio..I have no idea what brand the digicam is though lol, but my mic is an apex 181 usb condenser mic

    thanks for the love man

    peace

  • SICK bro. absolutely SICK. you like being diverse with your words too!

    You autta check mine out

  • yo im thinking of redoing mine, just put like 1/3rd of it up

    tell me what you think!

    and how the fuck did you get over 1k views, lol

    besides the fuck that you killed it

  • thats like educational en shit lol good shit 5 stars

  • yo check mine out

  • nice man you got your own style...i like it...4 stars ****

  • watch mine and give some feedback its my first rap and i'm seeing if i have a chance 5 ***** this is real and BEAST

  • lol homi this is raw ... yo u look like proof!!! but got ya own styles

  • i say chris tucker. LOL.

  • this is fucked.

  • lol, is that a good thing?

  • really good man, keep it up!

  • listen to mine

  • lyricism, lyricism, lyricism wat keeps real hip hop alive is wat we as artist speak to the people through the sound of music great message keep ya hand to the pen i give you and this one a perfect ten nice

  • Yoooooooooo Lypse!!! You offically killed it! Heated spit, you should win this! Thanks for checking out my entry, my shit feel elementary compared to this...lol

  • good shit yo

  • thnx for the feed on my own drop. checked this one out earlier and i thought it was one of the illest verses i'd heard frm a YouTube rapper. second time round it still is!

  • that was sick man :) !

    respect

    lyriczel

  • that was wow ! good job =D

    plz check out mine if ya can =D

    ~lil Anya~

  • this was raw

  • Nice man.

  • goddamn

  • fave part

    "Dont get caught in the nonsense

    Think for yourself, exercise your cognitive process"

    that was very good :)

  • deeper than most shit...goos shit

    check mine out

  • I aint go lie foo. this is hott. like lupe fiasco flow. nuthin but lyrical lyrics

  • Peep Game on minez.

    Yah vocab is crazy..nice

    -Chaptaz-

  • thats some deep shit bro. nice job.

  • Yo thanks for checkin mine out, Id actually already taken a look at yours... sick lyrics, very intelligent... One of the only entries Ive seen that I consider to be actual competition - best of luck man 5/5

  • 10/10. Real

  • AWESOME...DEEP,,,WORD SMITH

  • This is dope alot of crazy words bro enjoyed this

    5/5

    -Ramzo

  • HIP-HOP ! ! no doubt 5 stars HOMEBOY

    2THEPPL READING CHECK OUT MY ENTRY . .

  • ''Excercise your cognitive process''....Very good...

    This was superb. Dopeness. The only thing that sort of stood out for me, was that, (at times) it seemed to me that you were using intricate vocabulary soley for the purpose of highlighting your (obvious) intelligence, rather than using a less ''big'' word, if you will, which might have fit better.

    But again...this was pure fire.

  • check it!

  • I fucks wit this joint keep doing you man real Hip-Hop

  • ph my god no affense to anyone else in the contest but he just murdered everyone

  • that was ridiculous bro. i'm actually glad you told me to look this up.

  • thanks again for the love everyone

  • jaw dropping

    i never thaught id see the day wen i hear a talented rapper talk about wut rap actually is

  • Why Arent You A Millionaire! Instead We Have Lameass OJ Saying AYE For A Couple Mill.

  • that's what the industry needs more of my dude im all about positive hip hop rather than talking about the usual stereotypical songs that a rapper is expected to make which is why I consider myself and MC and your deff and MC as well keep doing what you do man!

  • i likes it!

  • that was fire man!

  • MY DUDE GOT MAD WORD PLAY!! 5 STARS..

  • chyts heat brahhh

  • yo proper killed it!!!

    That was i'll as fuck

    5*

    yo, check mine out when ya have the time

  • this is by far the best entery i've heard

  • This was dope man... good job bro!

    - DJ

    P.S. 5 Starz

  • "while hip hops elite are unsigned, these other dudes hide behind beats and punch lines."

    That is F***ING ILL!

  • these lyrics are solid...good job homie

  • dude youre amazing, no homo

  • damn bruh.....articulate ass mind lol

  • FINNALLY a rapper talking about something. killed it

  • yo dat shit was on point props

  • yo that was nice

    lu

  • Ayo you are a gifted and talented individual you killed that one love keep doing your thing.

  • shid cold flow lyrical beat

  • good stuff, i like

  • lyrics were good man

    everything wus done rite

  • glad to know smart people can rap

  • Oh shit! Nice

  • Oh my gosh lipse!!!!!! BEASTLY! IT SHALL BE PLAYLISTED!!!!! lol

  • sikk sikk sikk!!!!!!!!!1111

    ahaha proh vegas pro effect rite there

  • nice bro really nice!!

  • this is so fucking dope...

    god damn lypse you are KILLING EM..

    lemme know if you ever wanna hit a track man.

  • thats whats up fam goooood shiit!!