also, sorrry dude, i hate sayin anything to anyone else like this, but try Balance. To your vocab, short and long rhythms (which u already do), ect. and ya, PROJECTION! remember, u "had charisma before it was regarded as swag" (nice) but i just dont believe you, know what i mean? U do, your smart, ur very good, and this is also old, but it carries, keep up the work man, ur refreshing from most "youtube" utilizers.
on that note this was weak as fuck. the lyrics were ight but your delivery is unwatchable. skinny ass dude with a shaky voice like u just seen a ghost.
lol, I admit this was weak, but I was sick when I recorded it (which is why my voice is shaky/choppy) and I rushed it, but that's besides the point..you make an insulting comment and the take offense to me defending myself?? even you should realize how absurd that is...in any case, grow up
read the description, I was sick when I recorded this and had trouble controlling my breath and I was trying to prevent myself from coughing as I was recording it, so it came out a bit choppy...in any case, thanks for the comment!!
Your style reminds of kweli mos def and artists as that ayo dude Im down with the temple of hip hop. In a group with BEAST1333 ayo if you want to help get your name out in the underground hit me up.
Damn dude you can definitely write about intelligent Hip Hop I respect that. School these people about the Elite and how they control and dumb down our culture. Definitely dope written shit. But as for your flow/delivery/vocal presence it doesn't really capture my attention....not very memorable or stand out in my mind...you have to SCARE ME with your flow...I have to say, "HOLY SHIT THIS GUY WILL BEAT ME" but honestly....I was rapping over your entry out of boredom. No hate just REALNESS!
I don't necessarily HAVE to scare you, because as you said, I haven't really captured YOUR attention...there's really no standard as to how ones flow/delivery should be, so at the end of the day some people will like my flow/delivery and some won't, so the only I WILL do is present my material how I want, and hope that people will typically enjoy it...no hate just being real lol...
I respect you lypse no doubt I checked out your other videos you seem to be a good kid and your goal of hitting 1000 subs on your youtube account is definitely something you will attain. You are right there really is no standard we all have different tastes in flow. I'm just saying this though, I have fuckin INSANELY great taste in Hip Hop and rappers with IMPECCABLE stylistic flow, so when others don't compare I complain, like I said maybe I'm spoiled!
lol, ye man I feel you too...we have different tastes and we're all a little spoiled, but that's a good thing because it keeps our hip hop culture diverse :)...lol
damn you had me wanting you to continue...im a female and i kinda messed up some of my reading that i wrote my rap on but i tried haha and thats all that matters lypse u should come see it and lemme know what u think....i hope its not terrible i have a few rhymes written but im still a beginner haha but ur awesome!
i heard a few they're 3 people that i want to win is Sleepy Ming (even if he is disqualified) and lypse all three should win but i no they all cant win
wow. a flow of words that has currents that are undeniable in strength like a river carrying one into thoughts that are real and pointing in a direction that allows us to see whats ahead and all you can do from there is take action and b 5'd, fav'd, & subscribed!
Im Co-Signin this nigga right here. Anyone whos hatin can go hang themselves in their closet. Lypse, you always keep it real man. Stay up Mayne. Intellectual lyricism is always well appreciated in my book.
Peace & Love
~Passionate.
BTW : What do you use to record your vids? My quality is ok but my MIC sucks ass and is too Low
hey thanks for the comment (and sub)...I use a digital camera for the video and just use my mic for the audio..I have no idea what brand the digicam is though lol, but my mic is an apex 181 usb condenser mic
lyricism, lyricism, lyricism wat keeps real hip hop alive is wat we as artist speak to the people through the sound of music great message keep ya hand to the pen i give you and this one a perfect ten nice
Yoooooooooo Lypse!!! You offically killed it! Heated spit, you should win this! Thanks for checking out my entry, my shit feel elementary compared to this...lol
thnx for the feed on my own drop. checked this one out earlier and i thought it was one of the illest verses i'd heard frm a YouTube rapper. second time round it still is!
Yo thanks for checkin mine out, Id actually already taken a look at yours... sick lyrics, very intelligent... One of the only entries Ive seen that I consider to be actual competition - best of luck man 5/5
''Excercise your cognitive process''....Very good...
This was superb. Dopeness. The only thing that sort of stood out for me, was that, (at times) it seemed to me that you were using intricate vocabulary soley for the purpose of highlighting your (obvious) intelligence, rather than using a less ''big'' word, if you will, which might have fit better.
that's what the industry needs more of my dude im all about positive hip hop rather than talking about the usual stereotypical songs that a rapper is expected to make which is why I consider myself and MC and your deff and MC as well keep doing what you do man!
Check my shit out at livelifetorap
livelifetorap 4 weeks ago
Black as night but whiter than me lol
sreinvention 1 month ago
@sreinvention ?
lypse14 1 month ago
the black bo burhnam C:
lHeavenlyAssassinl 2 months ago
you look like a little Eddie Murphy
22jimjim22 3 months ago
yo, this is crazy. you rap real shit neville
blindsk8er1995 4 months ago
LMFAO 3 AARON BROOKS COMMENTS
xSWaGGMarTiaN 5 months ago
Damn
So many big words
xSWaGGMarTiaN 8 months ago
@xSWaGGMarTiaN go get a dictionary bruh lol
lypse14 8 months ago
Fantastic style, flow, tone, lyrics and syllabic cuts mister. Keep going strong..the dream is just around the corner .Reality. :-)
sachmofranklin 9 months ago
see its black people like you we need more of
033boston 9 months ago
Word! Very awesome. xxx
TheBaByG 9 months ago
Lypse you're so fucking good :D
Forget the haters, you do this for the love of it and what you spit is so true!
I'm really not into hip hop, especially mainstream stuff but you are truly an enjoyment to listen to :)
hugy789 10 months ago
dude... ur awsome.!!
and i dont really listen to rap, but i really liked you.!!
konekochanluv 11 months ago
@konekochanluv my favorite comments are always ones from people who don't really like rap/hip hop...thanks for making my night!!
lypse14 11 months ago
@lypse14 yay.!!!
ur welcome lad. keep doing this... ima be with my eyes/ears open fer you now.
konekochanluv 11 months ago
also, sorrry dude, i hate sayin anything to anyone else like this, but try Balance. To your vocab, short and long rhythms (which u already do), ect. and ya, PROJECTION! remember, u "had charisma before it was regarded as swag" (nice) but i just dont believe you, know what i mean? U do, your smart, ur very good, and this is also old, but it carries, keep up the work man, ur refreshing from most "youtube" utilizers.
UnknownYNo 1 year ago
@UnknownYNo ye I hear you, thx for the feedback, this is lypse btw, I'm just on my other account
wisewun86 1 year ago
u have a stylistic resemblance to Shad (K) If u dont know him, get aquainted, do yourself a favour
UnknownYNo 1 year ago
Sick lyric
fromboy2killa 1 year ago
FIRE! this is something to awaken people with..but these words and topics tend to fall on deaf ears..Keep At It
psycheconveyor 1 year ago
you are fuckin amazing dude but uhmmm,....you really dont have tha "rapper look"
jus sayin
keep tha songs comin though
dEaThRoSeLoVeR 1 year ago
@dEaThRoSeLoVeR
lol maybe because I'm not going for a rapper look :P, i just do this for fun
lypse14 1 year ago
@dEaThRoSeLoVeR Define a rap look?
Clark977 1 year ago
@Clark977 ...yeah...you're right
its just like..idkay he doesnt seem like he would be a rapper
he doesnt have the swing, the groove, or tha swagger of a rapper..
dEaThRoSeLoVeR 1 year ago
@dEaThRoSeLoVeR people like you are killing the rap game. listen with your ears not ur eyes
MaxKirk21 1 year ago
nice
krazywu 1 year ago
Amazing lyrics and I don't find the delivery whack. Thumbs up!
MaxWidmerMusic 1 year ago
i didn't know aaron brooks rapped...
skillz61689 1 year ago
@skillz61689
neither did i, but what does that have to do with my video? lol, j/k, but i dont look like aaron brooks haha
lypse14 1 year ago
dope ass lyrics but lift some weights or put on a shirt
theclockstickin 2 years ago
or wear what I want, when I want, if I want to..I think I'll go with that
lypse14 2 years ago
on that note this was weak as fuck. the lyrics were ight but your delivery is unwatchable. skinny ass dude with a shaky voice like u just seen a ghost.
theclockstickin 2 years ago
lol, I admit this was weak, but I was sick when I recorded it (which is why my voice is shaky/choppy) and I rushed it, but that's besides the point..you make an insulting comment and the take offense to me defending myself?? even you should realize how absurd that is...in any case, grow up
lypse14 2 years ago 3
dont EVER dumb it down
ramathornification 2 years ago
Damn my nigga im pretty keyed right now and im listening to these lyrics like WHAT THE FUCK? Godamn your spitting fire my man godamn..............
InitialKV 2 years ago 2
This sum high quality! Underground For Life
mcthelight 2 years ago 2
good lyrics but u dont sound confident
KingKarl04 2 years ago 4
lol ye I know, working on that
peace
lypse14 2 years ago
Man is nice right now.....Damn brah
^_^Wasay
wasayez 2 years ago 2
sicccccck
dahfreshkid23 2 years ago
that is quality!!!! your lyrics are amazing, really made me think!
SarahReynolds01 2 years ago
you on the level of dead prez
MaxxBlazze 2 years ago
hey man nice work again... i posted up another video of myself on beat check it out if you get a minute it would be appreciated
-o dub
thesoundofgreen 2 years ago
lryics are hot..
your flow no offense..is ass, you need to work on it, as well as breathing and delivery time...
these will come with time, gl , your very talented
jcapo333 2 years ago
read the description, I was sick when I recorded this and had trouble controlling my breath and I was trying to prevent myself from coughing as I was recording it, so it came out a bit choppy...in any case, thanks for the comment!!
peace
lypse14 2 years ago
fuckin sick bruh,.. you killed it
OPTIMUStik 2 years ago
very nice... i love it...
SNEAKiCKz 2 years ago
Nice Freestyle man!!
I got a rap contest on atm..
I want ya to enter it!!
Check it out if ya have the time!
TheOfficialNasty 2 years ago
5 stars shoot back at me
MakingItRain87 2 years ago
Strait up good..5/5
lifebreelfun 2 years ago
but u should be gettin more views u got talent
xsmurfx159 2 years ago
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AbrahamFinkelstein 2 years ago
stunningly amazing !!!! real brilliliant !!
boxerstarrygurl 2 years ago
CHRIS ROCK + EDDIE MURPHY..
xsmurfx159 2 years ago
that's a new one lol..
lypse14 2 years ago
i just fealt like saying it...
xsmurfx159 2 years ago
I like this.. thats what hip-hop is suppost to be about! A form of poetic comunication..givin people somethin to think about!
lanessparks 2 years ago
I rly enjoyed 0:33 - 0:39, is sounded good and wit a beat it would be awesome.
5/5
jEaglesSUCK 2 years ago
You I like your lyrics like a mix of keith murray,talib kweli,lupe fiasco!
Metamophisis 2 years ago
Awesome! That was brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!
DWest174 2 years ago
this was awesome your a true lyrical envisonist
Chowdollas 2 years ago
O.o! do you read the dictionary?!
Awesome!
JC
joeyclaris7 2 years ago
lol I read a lot, but not the dictionary haha
lypse14 2 years ago
Sickwitit
willisdaillest 2 years ago
Your style reminds of kweli mos def and artists as that ayo dude Im down with the temple of hip hop. In a group with BEAST1333 ayo if you want to help get your name out in the underground hit me up.
therealsupermonk 2 years ago
i think i may of commented on this before, but fuck this is sick, one the sickest for sure
RapterSteeez 2 years ago
mixed it sounds beast
10soccerbeast10 2 years ago
shit was definetly ridiculous dude but i feel like the confidence isnt there
KillaQweb 2 years ago
Damn dude you can definitely write about intelligent Hip Hop I respect that. School these people about the Elite and how they control and dumb down our culture. Definitely dope written shit. But as for your flow/delivery/vocal presence it doesn't really capture my attention....not very memorable or stand out in my mind...you have to SCARE ME with your flow...I have to say, "HOLY SHIT THIS GUY WILL BEAT ME" but honestly....I was rapping over your entry out of boredom. No hate just REALNESS!
ICanRapBetterThanU 2 years ago
I don't necessarily HAVE to scare you, because as you said, I haven't really captured YOUR attention...there's really no standard as to how ones flow/delivery should be, so at the end of the day some people will like my flow/delivery and some won't, so the only I WILL do is present my material how I want, and hope that people will typically enjoy it...no hate just being real lol...
peace
lypse14 2 years ago
LOL at you biting my quote at the end.
I respect you lypse no doubt I checked out your other videos you seem to be a good kid and your goal of hitting 1000 subs on your youtube account is definitely something you will attain. You are right there really is no standard we all have different tastes in flow. I'm just saying this though, I have fuckin INSANELY great taste in Hip Hop and rappers with IMPECCABLE stylistic flow, so when others don't compare I complain, like I said maybe I'm spoiled!
ICanRapBetterThanU 2 years ago
lol, ye man I feel you too...we have different tastes and we're all a little spoiled, but that's a good thing because it keeps our hip hop culture diverse :)...lol
peace
lypse14 2 years ago
SIIICKKK!!
CareBearsthaname 2 years ago
maaaan. that shit was garbage. don't nobody wanna hear all that smart shit.
LMAO. i'm fuckin wit you. that shit sick and everybody know it... bet you can't get a fuckin record deal to save your life.
cot damn shame.
keep writin my nigga, here's hopin you find a way to eat off ya gift
610south 2 years ago
Thats hot shit
Ollieballer 2 years ago
lol real shyt bruh
pmdallday 2 years ago
good stuff bro keep it up!
TheEnigma999 2 years ago
Deep stuff. Respect.
Stay up,
Hengman
Hengman 2 years ago
really deep. mad respect.
DustinSilver 2 years ago
sik shyt aaron brooks lol jkz but nice real hip hop shyt ri here respect styll
~1~
RealHipHopAkromatik 2 years ago
Holy crap, that was sick
deadlynoodle 2 years ago
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flowing....lol check mine out
iKonsFlow 2 years ago
lol thats hot. big words. nice to see a great intelligent rapper
XxExtremeInfinityxX 2 years ago
dope as fuck.
Sweet00th 2 years ago
yo check my verse...it's a free so let me know what you all think.....go to millsmost page and check out metz....peace
kgb294 2 years ago
Aaron Brooks?
aznknitex 2 years ago 2
lol, naw man I'm not Aaron Brooks
lypse14 2 years ago
yo got lyrics real nice man
devon8trillionaire 2 years ago
lyrics is tight, but ya flow is kinda boring...try switching it up a lil and you got potential.
NiloGramz856 2 years ago
dooooooooooooope
TimothyDeLaGhetto2 2 years ago
great introduction.
ezes6zy 2 years ago
"i look back at your shit with irreverence" that was a funny line lolz. nice job man.
check out my video and comment y'all.
~ WaLiTo ~
CrypTiCCLenCh 2 years ago
damn you had me wanting you to continue...im a female and i kinda messed up some of my reading that i wrote my rap on but i tried haha and thats all that matters lypse u should come see it and lemme know what u think....i hope its not terrible i have a few rhymes written but im still a beginner haha but ur awesome!
UTuBeGuRL4u20 2 years ago
ho-lee-shit
how the hell you remember that
daaaaam
krunchyjay 2 years ago
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beautiful, let me know what u think about mine
lukushendrix 2 years ago
this iss good, :)
kaylaakapeanut 2 years ago
dope as shitttt
GGGiL00 2 years ago
i heard a few they're 3 people that i want to win is Sleepy Ming (even if he is disqualified) and lypse all three should win but i no they all cant win
lxINVISABLExl 2 years ago
damn do your thing man.. knowledge
iluddyproductions 2 years ago
5star general... dat wus nice. and i subd. Get @ tha kyd.
~eazy~
CaLLmeTHakYD 2 years ago
I had charisma before it was ever regarded as swag.
FIRE
3rdEYEbeHolder 2 years ago
shit is tuff
BIGGZMUSICTV 2 years ago
commercial rap is all garbage, this was the truth man keep doing ur thing shit u said i really felt
stand up for hip-hop, str8
goanenvy 2 years ago
sir.
i can follow your thoughts.
well done.
peaces
JO3MA 2 years ago
OMG That was so sick!lyrics with meaning i swear we need to hook up on a song man
TevSha 2 years ago
bbbleaver 2 years ago
that's deep...thank you for this comment and the sub!!!
peace
lypse14 2 years ago
Im Co-Signin this nigga right here. Anyone whos hatin can go hang themselves in their closet. Lypse, you always keep it real man. Stay up Mayne. Intellectual lyricism is always well appreciated in my book.
Peace & Love
~Passionate.
BTW : What do you use to record your vids? My quality is ok but my MIC sucks ass and is too Low
Passionate401 2 years ago
hey thanks for the comment (and sub)...I use a digital camera for the video and just use my mic for the audio..I have no idea what brand the digicam is though lol, but my mic is an apex 181 usb condenser mic
thanks for the love man
peace
lypse14 2 years ago
SICK bro. absolutely SICK. you like being diverse with your words too!
You autta check mine out
Phajpahee50 2 years ago
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Gud. . . Check mine out comment nd rate plz
LATXGA23 2 years ago
yo im thinking of redoing mine, just put like 1/3rd of it up
tell me what you think!
and how the fuck did you get over 1k views, lol
besides the fuck that you killed it
905NOBODY 2 years ago
thats like educational en shit lol good shit 5 stars
jbulger82 2 years ago
yo check mine out
youngkidrapking 2 years ago
nice man you got your own style...i like it...4 stars ****
ZanyDaChico 2 years ago
watch mine and give some feedback its my first rap and i'm seeing if i have a chance 5 ***** this is real and BEAST
FEARLESSFARLEY 2 years ago
lol homi this is raw ... yo u look like proof!!! but got ya own styles
youngkidrapking 2 years ago
i say chris tucker. LOL.
MU12DER 2 years ago
this is fucked.
vincenzopatz 2 years ago
lol, is that a good thing?
lypse14 2 years ago
really good man, keep it up!
vincenzopatz 2 years ago
listen to mine
shy5981 2 years ago
lyricism, lyricism, lyricism wat keeps real hip hop alive is wat we as artist speak to the people through the sound of music great message keep ya hand to the pen i give you and this one a perfect ten nice
Elmatador714 2 years ago
Yoooooooooo Lypse!!! You offically killed it! Heated spit, you should win this! Thanks for checking out my entry, my shit feel elementary compared to this...lol
OnidaAtsila 2 years ago
good shit yo
JingstaEntertainmnt 2 years ago
thnx for the feed on my own drop. checked this one out earlier and i thought it was one of the illest verses i'd heard frm a YouTube rapper. second time round it still is!
Corallis 2 years ago
that was sick man :) !
respect
lyriczel
LyriczelLyriczel 2 years ago
that was wow ! good job =D
plz check out mine if ya can =D
~lil Anya~
xoxlilxoxAnyaxox 2 years ago
this was raw
ibixthaprinze 2 years ago
Nice man.
MovieMicah 2 years ago
goddamn
LastHopeOmid 2 years ago
fave part
"Dont get caught in the nonsense
Think for yourself, exercise your cognitive process"
that was very good :)
JonasNewsTv 2 years ago
deeper than most shit...goos shit
check mine out
bbbob12345 2 years ago
I aint go lie foo. this is hott. like lupe fiasco flow. nuthin but lyrical lyrics
HITsquadENTtv 2 years ago
Peep Game on minez.
Yah vocab is crazy..nice
-Chaptaz-
DURANGGEO 2 years ago
thats some deep shit bro. nice job.
BillyBlitz90 2 years ago
Yo thanks for checkin mine out, Id actually already taken a look at yours... sick lyrics, very intelligent... One of the only entries Ive seen that I consider to be actual competition - best of luck man 5/5
thesoundofgreen 2 years ago
10/10. Real
brandonlink 2 years ago
AWESOME...DEEP,,,WORD SMITH
jairod88 2 years ago
This is dope alot of crazy words bro enjoyed this
5/5
-Ramzo
Ramzo16 2 years ago
HIP-HOP ! ! no doubt 5 stars HOMEBOY
2THEPPL READING CHECK OUT MY ENTRY . .
GODSCRAVE 2 years ago
''Excercise your cognitive process''....Very good...
This was superb. Dopeness. The only thing that sort of stood out for me, was that, (at times) it seemed to me that you were using intricate vocabulary soley for the purpose of highlighting your (obvious) intelligence, rather than using a less ''big'' word, if you will, which might have fit better.
But again...this was pure fire.
dcremixed 2 years ago
check it!
mohan3001 2 years ago
I fucks wit this joint keep doing you man real Hip-Hop
LuwieBaby001 2 years ago
ph my god no affense to anyone else in the contest but he just murdered everyone
rainbowsix35000 2 years ago
that was ridiculous bro. i'm actually glad you told me to look this up.
DeVinciRaps 2 years ago
thanks again for the love everyone
lypse14 2 years ago
jaw dropping
i never thaught id see the day wen i hear a talented rapper talk about wut rap actually is
Ethiokarate1 2 years ago
Why Arent You A Millionaire! Instead We Have Lameass OJ Saying AYE For A Couple Mill.
THlSlSSAL 2 years ago
that's what the industry needs more of my dude im all about positive hip hop rather than talking about the usual stereotypical songs that a rapper is expected to make which is why I consider myself and MC and your deff and MC as well keep doing what you do man!
MrPerformer401 2 years ago
i likes it!
youngdeacon05 2 years ago
that was fire man!
lilpipps 2 years ago
MY DUDE GOT MAD WORD PLAY!! 5 STARS..
WalkinInvestmentz 2 years ago
chyts heat brahhh
PARKSIDELOKITA13 2 years ago
yo proper killed it!!!
That was i'll as fuck
5*
yo, check mine out when ya have the time
shnurganzola 2 years ago
this is by far the best entery i've heard
tm916 2 years ago
This was dope man... good job bro!
- DJ
P.S. 5 Starz
DjGoodyB 2 years ago
"while hip hops elite are unsigned, these other dudes hide behind beats and punch lines."
That is F***ING ILL!
TheDeciphers 2 years ago
these lyrics are solid...good job homie
alanmorrison1986 2 years ago
dude youre amazing, no homo
11shave 2 years ago
damn bruh.....articulate ass mind lol
pheezyphe 2 years ago
FINNALLY a rapper talking about something. killed it
deathtotubez 2 years ago
yo dat shit was on point props
Troyseph86 2 years ago
yo that was nice
lu
Lugaoka 2 years ago
Ayo you are a gifted and talented individual you killed that one love keep doing your thing.
philly2009unknown 2 years ago
shid cold flow lyrical beat
YoungZone502 2 years ago
good stuff, i like
TrustWordy 2 years ago
lyrics were good man
everything wus done rite
PreyeselRey 2 years ago
glad to know smart people can rap
eskaay 2 years ago
Oh shit! Nice
jimmyos 2 years ago
Oh my gosh lipse!!!!!! BEASTLY! IT SHALL BE PLAYLISTED!!!!! lol
bztvp 2 years ago
sikk sikk sikk!!!!!!!!!1111
ahaha proh vegas pro effect rite there
iraqi4ever1123back 2 years ago
nice bro really nice!!
nmunmnm 2 years ago
this is so fucking dope...
god damn lypse you are KILLING EM..
lemme know if you ever wanna hit a track man.
MetalMaskMilitia 2 years ago
thats whats up fam goooood shiit!!
LouDiamondzJr401 2 years ago