I don't know much about your assignment, but it bugs me that you deviated from the story in such an avoidable way by having the murder weopen be a knife instead of a pistol. You could get a toy one for less than $3.
P.S. I don't mean to rag on you. I'm fairly tired, just read the short story and it bugged me.
I don't know much about your assignment, but it bugs me that you deviated from the story in such an avoidable way by having the murder weopen be a knife instead of a pistol. You could get a toy one for less than $3.
P.S. I don't mean to rag on you. I'm fairly tired, just read the short story and it bugged me.
amorphusensanity 4 years ago