Bioshocked Episode 1

[DabroodThompson]

Not that great, didn't really feel like it was really happening to you EX: " I didnt think they had those back then"

[KunkoFilms2]

i want another!!!!!

[gordonfreeman112]

wheres episode 2

[DarkT00th91]

not bad, but mabey thats cus im comparing it to Bernies Mind. God Bernies mind is shit

[2000taletju]

Funny, but video is not really hq...

[MrBloggo]

but i like it! :D

[TomekTQ]

What is UP with these crappy "Freeman's Mind" copies?

[FalnComx]

lol funny, maybe the cigarette caused the crash! =)

also nice irish/british/scotish accent thing adds good affect

[mooniscol]

MAKE MORE

[rebeldragon1]

you weren't supposed to smoke in a plane IN THE FIRST PLACE YOU TURD!

[MrDivinehero]

wth this was a year ago and he still hasnt made another vidoe wth....hmmm did he quit or something or is it just that he is taking a while to make a new vid...

[Shadowkirby14]

My intro

Wha-.....what the hell happened?!? This is wrong! Why is there fire on water!?!? Let me just-oh-let me- forget it, I don't need a suitcase. This is ridonculious. Woah! Okay, better get outta here, this place is abo- is that a lighthouse? Where did that come from? Well, it's better being inside there than freezing my balls off out here, and there's goes the plane.

[Shadowkirby14]

THis is a nightmare! I would've been in Boston, but instead, the pilot went coocoo for f***ing cocoa puffs and attempts a suicide bombing act! AND IT WORKED!!!! Hope he burns in Hell....and eathot s**t out of the toilet. "coughing" Hey, I made it! Woohoo! I kinda feel bad for the people who didn't make it. Probably they went suicidl before the plane crashed. No wonder their are no lifeboats.

[Shadowkirby14]

Why is the door open? That is the reason why they- wha- NOO!! Open the door, dammit!! Huh? What is this? "No gods or kings only man"? That's impossible. It should say "There's one God and if they make a religious comment about him will be torched to death". That's what I would put. Woah, automatic lights! That's new in the 1960's. Wow! Whoever made this place is sure a genius, but why is this place so dark? It's like I'm in some kind of haunted house or something. Is that a submarine?

[Shadowkirby14]

I hope it takes me somewhere, I'm tired of wondering around not knowing what to do. Looks promising, and roomy too. What this do? I'm off!

AND scene! How do you like it?

[The7thSystem]

Reminds me of Ross Scott's kind of humor, I like it.

[adamkc0]

if you do go ahead and make this into a series,you might want to get it endorsed by ross scott,so you wont get bombarded with comments from pissed off people claiming its a rip off.i know this is an entirely different game,but still.....

[drSHADOWk9]

U SUCK!!!! even my 7 year old bro could have done it better i mean u are whispering all the time like the whole place it on fire and everyone is dying and youre like *whispering* oh my god plane* fire* spoof you're record sound give some EMOTIONS INTO IT LIKE YOU'RE THERE!! and try to do a more decided voice not like a frigthend 10 year old boy and you're got the show runing !

[Droxxin]

Good try, :D

[Dustjericho]

0:33 - 0:36 i wonder should YOU be on that plane, YOU too would scream like a kid that just reached his puberty?

[Spoonman8881]

Damn it you took my idea.

[xSurrealo]

... You cant make reference to the fact its 1960... or Starbucks its completely stupid.....

[JJMDude]

Ulgh...

Dude, do you even get that the idea behind Freeman's Mind is to narrate someone's thoughts, as if these things were ACTUALLY HAPPENING?

Here's a better intro...

"What the fuck happened? Jesus, is that the plane?? Okay, flotation devices, flotation devices...Fuck me it's cold...this is just like in Titanic! Ah, come on, I can't grab it, I'm shaking too much! I'm NOT going out like Leo! Wait...what the Hell? Is that a lighthouse? What are the odds of that? Well I'm sure not complaining.

[BKNimaruIchi]

@JJMDude seriously, that sound completely like something Ross Scott would say!

I and completely agree with you.

[PrivetCyan]

no emotion

[LinksFan]

Needs more emotion, dude.

[twostringguitar]

More emotion, dude. Whispering "ahhhh..." doesn't cut it.

[ToyTags]

listen i will make u a deal if you let me use your videos and name i will edit your videos and put all credit to you

[arthurdragon17]

hmm...

pretty good,

but you should talk a bit louder, that sounded too fake

you are like: oh my god, look at that...that sucks, no...

you should be more like: OMG!!!...OMGGGG!!!... LOOK at that, omg, THAT SUCKS.... NO!

and the camera should be better:)

but yeah, im looking forward to this, nice job;)

[Shikamaru524]

More EMOTION! REMAKE THIS THEN YOU CAN SEND TO MACHINIMA!

[ajle9550]

This was pretty good, need more emotion

[Gzus70]

HORRIBLE voice acting, if someone who wasnt a complete fcuktard did this it could probably be funny

[ichirootaniguchi]

agreeed

[Madness2bhere]

more emotion, but a good idea.

[themountinmonkey]

dude bad voice acting

[BlackMesaProgrammer]

This sucks compared to Freeman's Mind. What a complete ripoff.

[9082red]

it's okay seems like you kinda did voice acting half assed and i know about doing things half assed. other than that it was okay.

[linkassassin360]

Nice, reminds me of freedman's mind. more people should make this kind of video

[evanfire30]

YOU GOOD MAKE2 PLEZZZ

[Darkhope112]

They even gave me a pack of ciggerrets.

I don't even smoke

lifts ciggeret.

Lol i love this

[xxZapperxx42]

needs more emotion other then that sweet vid

[Charles11319]

I agree, more emotion. Plane crashed and your like "Oh well, guess I'll go this way."

Other than that, it was okay. :D

[LemonyFrwsh]

Very Good You Gotta Scream Some Time :D (Let It Out)

[JacobDyerMedia]

Where the hell is the emotion.

[isokessu]

that's so strange game :l i played the demo and it didn't make me feel to buy the game..

[BishopJones1992]

good but you need more emotion

[CoreyPyro]

pretty good.

Tip though, when you need to scream in your machinima don't try to scream and lower your voice, just scream. Sounds much more exiting.

[legoguy217]

awsome and funny a star bucks lol XD

[xXBoxRocksXx]

Hey..wheres my episode 2. this has potential!

[Nemesis0300]

u think im illertite lololol

[z0mbine]

I'll give you credit for trying but you just have a lack of emotion for this kinda thing 3/5

[AllmightySpode]

gee, maybe your right. there is a starbucks of 1,000 feet below sea level. on the way there you should stop at burger king you fucking idiotic illiterate unfunny son of a retarded bitch.

[Iwishihadicecream]

Dude,chill,you don't have to bitch at some one to make them realize something.

[duhastchris]

he was making a joke u dumbasss

[octonis]

youre too monotone'd and emotionless to be funny

[olac3lo]

Great start. You have a lot of potential, just put more emotion into your voice instead of being monotone. 4/5

[Cless012]

good start, but you need more emotion in your voice

[LieutenantOcho]

hmm... well it was good and i liked it, but you should have been louder, i could barely hear you... 4/5

[SuperCoolAxel]

u aint funny m8

[silverclawedwolf]

GREAT SERIES ^.^ ...does the guy have an accent?? and he could have acted better he sonunds tooo acter like he needs to act better other wise GREAT JOB 5stars

[bennyman5]

i think the storyline in bioshock was disturbing but very philisophical, it asks a lot of deep questions, like what is beauty? what are the limits of the human mind? and selfish vs selfless, etc. and the twist ending was great too!

[PokeChampion07]

yeah there's two ending depending on how many little sisters you kill or save

[canpsychu7]

decent start...can do better...have some fun with it !

[BuzzSaw11]

bet they could hide a gun in here lol...

[DuDaX]

can someone explain the bioshock story to me please? I want to buy it, but also want to know the story

[Bioshocked678]

Awesome man, I loved bioshock and this was awesome

(my name is also the same as the show lol)

[armyman527]

no offence but the voice isnt the best for the movie no offence dude its still funny though

[AllmightySpode]

not funny

[AllmightySpode]

oh oh ahhhhhh....... yelling is supposed to be loud

[Fatkiller22]

u can do better but this was funny

[sage513]

very funny!

[joejoe8151]

one point of advice if your gonna yell just do it dont try and mix yelling with talking low it just sounds bad like where the plane crashed

[John420JP]

Fuck you buddy!

[Nemesis0300]

u have to right it that big u think im iliterite lol

[BoomDowg]

but i think, that you can do better!

[BoomDowg]

this episode was funny as hell :), i hope that your gana make more!

[robertghouston]

It is a pretty fine video, and the cough you let as you come out of the water was a nice touch. I look forward to the next one!

[robertghouston]

This is definitely worth watching. My only criticisms is your 'Ahhh!' when the plane goes down didn't sound at all urgent, and you could have more funny things in there, like Gordan saying about his sex offender cousin Jesse and "if the EPA find out about this" and during the Resonance Cascade, the exclamation, "What the fuck?" Having similar funny little bits of useless information and exclamations would go a long way to bringing this up to the caliber of Freeman's Mind. All in all,well done

[Hazard1556]

Thanks! Glad you liked it an I will defiantly try to include your pointers.

[zack6220]

@robertghouston youre right on the "ahhh" thing, but i think it also kind of makes funny,in a sorta weird way.

[Hazard1556]

Thanks for all the great responses so far you guys! I was worried this series was going to suck..... haha.

[AllmightySpode]

ya, it is almost funny.

[Nemesis0300]

lol

[FEELGOODINCAREO]

more ^_^