Amesome choreo, but next time make sure you don't "wait" for the next move. In a few parts I can see both of you anticipating the next move in the choreo. Also make sure the camera man uses zoom or a telephoto lens so his shadow doesn't come into frame. Other than that it was pretty damn sweet bro.
This is very nicely done. Fight Choreography, sound effects and cinematography are very Good. I wish you ended this video with a closeup. I hope this video gets lot more views. Good Job.
Pretty nice man. The little shit we filmed sucked so much ass. Only one part looks weird, when u jump off his knee and he dodges it. It like slows the fight down to much you should of just hit him. Hah, did you take his wallet at the end? Very nice fighting skrills.
I guarentee your going to be a director in the future.... or at least a karate master. ;) I know I said this in so many other comments, but I'm Sean. You know, from Habitat '07... :)
not bad, but too much hand work, you should really only use hand work like that as a filler, if almost the whole fight consists of it you get a kinda jumbled style...but i still liked it...and im impressed with the fat guy..**keepin it real on the flabbier end of things:)**
haha i would of died
unknownguy967 5 days ago in playlist Fight scene
Looks like your a pretty good actor too, Jon. The hand lock sequence at 1:50 to 1:58 was cool.
colterknebel 10 months ago
This is one of my best fight scenes. I like watching it to bad the movie was never done. It would've been a good one you guys done.
VIDEORECORDERMIKE814 11 months ago
:42 was an epic camera angle! I like da fight, it's coool
Peztrumentals 1 year ago
i never knew fatman can jump
lance1236451 1 year ago
Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice
FightMaik 1 year ago
great! well done job ^_^
Madgirl1511 2 years ago
nice dude
skater234512 2 years ago
nicely done :D
silksylvenstein 2 years ago
do you want to finish this movie or is it canceled?
Justicemaker 2 years ago
There is another version which is finished, but mine was scrapped years ago. I've completed other, better martial arts shorts since, hahaha.
masterkiller67 2 years ago
not bad but the sound effects should be more subtle
poolboyinla 2 years ago
Hahaha this is OLDDDDD, buddy.
masterkiller67 2 years ago
yeah not bad
Brain665 2 years ago
that was really cool ^^ You should check out my stuff? ^^
dragonhalfchao 3 years ago
That was really cool.
Tekkena 3 years ago
Thanks. X).
masterkiller67 3 years ago
great fighting, too bad the bald guy didn't have a deeper voice :/
xzc426 3 years ago
I love how the gunman uses more traditional gung fu against the key-guy's kickboxing, and the choreography is quite good. Great work.
gobo0m 3 years ago
bad ass guys. ^^
lovewillneverbeme 3 years ago
you did alot of really really excellent stuff here, Im very impressed, All the best with your movie ^^
alexbaxthedarkside 3 years ago
Kick at the 00:55, awesome angle. Great fight guys : )
Vaaratekija 3 years ago
this fight is fucking awsome
wildchildGil 3 years ago
Amesome choreo, but next time make sure you don't "wait" for the next move. In a few parts I can see both of you anticipating the next move in the choreo. Also make sure the camera man uses zoom or a telephoto lens so his shadow doesn't come into frame. Other than that it was pretty damn sweet bro.
SupremeJudge 3 years ago
u da man!
KidZiDx 3 years ago
Sweet fight i love your style esp the way you did those joint locks-keep it up!
Ballowall 3 years ago
dam, this is actually pretty good. especially for an amateur film. nice work
crazyjames1233 3 years ago
This is very nicely done. Fight Choreography, sound effects and cinematography are very Good. I wish you ended this video with a closeup. I hope this video gets lot more views. Good Job.
lightandsound 4 years ago
nice fight scene ...good cherographe elements
tarekyeerum2006 4 years ago
alwayz nice i watch all ur clipz can i ask what kind of camera do u use to film?
yomomz31 4 years ago
what song is this ?
Justicemaker 4 years ago
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Justicemaker 4 years ago
Master killer67 you are gay go slit your wrist Lmao I can't get over that line but this was a good job.
NagaChamp04 4 years ago
You guys are good, nice video.
Jojobi 4 years ago
cool
sk8erboy305 4 years ago
Pretty nice man. The little shit we filmed sucked so much ass. Only one part looks weird, when u jump off his knee and he dodges it. It like slows the fight down to much you should of just hit him. Hah, did you take his wallet at the end? Very nice fighting skrills.
MartellArts 4 years ago
nice short film
osheen18 4 years ago
thank you, i found it
btw great movie ;)
Justicemaker 4 years ago
where did you get those soundeffects ?
Justicemaker 4 years ago
Not bad.
fistjedi 4 years ago
Some absolutely fantastic choreography, but perhaps more aggresion.
sevenswordsrory 4 years ago
Well done! :)
Tetsukenjin 4 years ago
Very good, the only thing thats a tad wrong is the speed. But otherwise, great choreography.
NateinSuwan360 4 years ago
I guarentee your going to be a director in the future.... or at least a karate master. ;) I know I said this in so many other comments, but I'm Sean. You know, from Habitat '07... :)
Seanathome 4 years ago
masterkiller, that was fucking amazing!! Excellent hand work and trade offs...I hope I can do that stuff with my fight choreography!
naikanomtom 4 years ago
not bad, but too much hand work, you should really only use hand work like that as a filler, if almost the whole fight consists of it you get a kinda jumbled style...but i still liked it...and im impressed with the fat guy..**keepin it real on the flabbier end of things:)**
xxc3lld4m4gexx 4 years ago
Really good work, if you guys are interested in joining up with a fight choreography team which I'll be starting in 2008 let me know.
Also if you guys are from the Tri-State area PA,NJ, NYC.
Come to my event in August in Philly which will bring my coach Hong Kong film legend Lo Mang co-star of
the "Five Deadly Venoms" and many other famous Shaw Bros films to Philly.
Contact me
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director4ever 4 years ago
Intense fighting. Speed is also good. I feel that fighting the upper half of the body was conspicuous. But the result good on the whole.
TOSHIHIKAJAPAN 4 years ago
not bad... it was very entertaining... 5 stars
dardrex777 4 years ago
heyy.... look awesome dude. quite pro>
Raghav91 4 years ago
ye it was good but the bit at the begining were u pulled himout of the way and run looked a lil fake other than that it was awesome
thustisbob 4 years ago
nice fight!! but you guys got to learn to run properly!
jossgower 4 years ago
well someone got impatient =P
the music is ok. im not a big fan of the same repeat riffs. but either way, good job on getting original.
Other than that, lookin pretty good. I do enjoy it with less slo mo though.
spidermexican 4 years ago
This is the shit. I like how joe says "come with me asshole." awesome
jabroniepictures 4 years ago
Nice. I liked all the hand locks.
JesseSpohn 4 years ago
Good fight - loved the one double jump kick followed by the superman. Good use of the fisheye too. What camera you shoot this on?
TSDT 4 years ago
nice one man
you werent kidding
the gun kick was cool
lefrogofthefire 4 years ago
whoah, freakin nice
GrapplerCM 4 years ago