BATTLE 12 (net plot 2) The fight in the pedestrian bridge.

[robertorocky]

That was some very nice fighting! :D

It is a good scene, (I like the choreography :) Love it when the guy gets kicked in the elevator :) ) but you can improve on the editing. Some things are edited a bit slow. But don't get me wrong: the location, the fight... Great stuff!! Keep it up! :D

[TOSHIHIKAJAPAN]

Thank you for comment! :)

I edited it again to coordinate the speed that uploaded this video in "youtube" more. A result came to have very good this scene!! I'm glad to come to like my choreography to you!! :)

I make an action scene from this spring.

Yoroshiku onegaishimasu!! :)

[SonGokuJr]

awesome, sound effects abit cartoonish, but the rest is just peachy, love the camera angle, and some nifty moves, very entertaining.

[walkerwoon]

Man you know I'm a fan of your work. Dope video.

[CrewKC87]

Hey!

Good job on the video. Its really good I like it although the one area that would make it even better is sometimes the movements aren't smooth and continuous enough and it makes it look more choreographed. But other than that I like the change of angles and the actual choreographing. GOOD JOB GUYS!

[NiGHTWALKERF]

ooo...very good...

[TOSHIHIKAJAPAN]

Thank you for comment!! :)

[SefDem]

hheeey niiiiiiice

like it very much

location is nice,and camera positions too...respect!

maybe try to look more aggressive while youre fighting ...more expression ...THEN ITS PERFECT!!!

keep on!

[TOSHIHIKAJAPAN]

Thank you for comment!!

I like a place and a camera angle of this video, too.

This video edited it again and became better. lol

The next work please comment, too. :)

[spidermexican]

good job yas! i enjoyed the choreography and the way it was filmed. just pick up a more active rhythm, so that the opponents are constantly moving, but otherwise it is very good! I really enjoyed how it came out. very nice use of location and good overall editing and angles. keep it up! =D

[TOSHIHIKAJAPAN]

Thank you for comment. I'm glad to have you like my choreography. I like this camera angle, too. I will make it in rhythm carefully in future. :)

[sobukaidojo]

Good video again:)

[theportlykicker]

Hey Yas! I didn't think it was too slow, but you definitely have to work on making sure both of your opponents look busy at all times. They can't look like they're standing around doing nothing. Your choreography has some nice variety in it though.

[TOSHIHIKAJAPAN]

Two persons of the villain's part of this scene were first performances in this time.

It was not performed although I said "Continue stopping and moving before photography."　lol

Although it was a regrettable result, it is believed that there is hope nature in their motion.

[HumpskiProductions]

Not too bad! Some nice moves in there. Just needs to be a bit faster.

[TOSHIHIKAJAPAN]

Thanks Matt!!

[naikanomtom]

You did a lot of good parrying of strikes here, and the break dancing was good. I agreee it is a little slow, but the effort and variety is still good!  Especially when both of you fell down together! Not bad!

[Kickslover]

beautiful choreography, beautiful fight!

awesome and beautiful kicks, knees and punches!

and great sounds effects!

[shaunthebrown]

some nice creativity in this one with the choreography using the wall there and the elevator door. also the part where you both were on the ground fighting. gotta love the LP music u put in there. at some parts the guy in the grey hoodie just kinda stood there waiting but other that that it was good.

[dardrex777]

a bit slow... some nice combos.... it was stationary at times.. it was alright... didn't care for the music choice really

[evanhuntergale484]

make one for new years eve with your son with you slaping the guy you've steped on try for 5 mins

[chinashima]

Nice! it was kinda slow and the sfx were off on a few hits BUT it was pretty realistic so great job! 4/5

[IkuZoKidd]

Hontouni kandoushita!

[TOSHIHIKAJAPAN]

Arigatou gozaimasu!!

Motto Ganbarimasu! :)