That opening photo is a very poor choice.
You should show the misting of the roof units
first and then the apparatus afterward because
the appearance of the unit does not convey
the purpose of the device in any way.
The choice of opening words are vague too.
The first sentence should talk about how it attaches to an existing roof
airconditioner and works by spraying water
near the air intake fins.
definitionofis 2 years ago
That opening photo is a very poor choice.
You should show the misting of the roof units
first and then the apparatus afterward because
the appearance of the unit does not convey
the purpose of the device in any way.
The choice of opening words are vague too.
The first sentence should talk about how it attaches to an existing roof
airconditioner and works by spraying water
near the air intake fins.
definitionofis 2 years ago