i dont know if you'd want feedback. but... i'm going to hand it down to you in evegreen-style. :D here is the feedback.
nice!! i laughed so hard when the cat hissed at the horse. great expression. you're right some of signs were unclear BUT... i think you did great! nice poem!
haha!
i dont know if you'd want feedback. but... i'm going to hand it down to you in evegreen-style. :D here is the feedback.
nice!! i laughed so hard when the cat hissed at the horse. great expression. you're right some of signs were unclear BUT... i think you did great! nice poem!
ohmyronii 2 years ago