Smash Bash Episode 1 Their Adventures Begin

[RadiantFire25]

Bring me to life is a good song, but it's used WAY to much

[Zernet10]

bouncy bouncy Link.

[Zernet10]

Wow, your theme/intro was 3:50 long O_O

[Zernet10]

How do you record like that?

[Alan1One]

Samus was so cute I love her she's Cute:)

[basssim92]

GOD link voice XD

[dudebladeX]

too long an intro and bad VA that's it im deleting it from history

[2200Firestar]

a shorter intro would be good. did you stop making it??

[argmon1]

let me gess you stop makeing it if not well you shoulld be done wiht the next epsod its beeen 2 years

[Carebear1luv]

i wouldve skipped the intro if the song wasnt so good!

[Valentina9849]

what program do you use and can i have a link plesae?

[banjokazooieplush]

i would like to voice for a character please

[killerhos]

episode 2?

[janinemcevoy]

i dont like links voice acting srry but i love the episode

[rosie97ful]

Good actors by the way!

[LunaFall1]

Are you doing more of it??? It's awsome, I like the actor of ganandorf the best :D

[PrincessZelda128]

Good job! I love it!

[toasterfox]

toon link: well excuuuse me princess

zelda: shut up!

LOVE IT!! XD

[andrey91pireu]

snic sucks this cartoons are for retads

[emmeg516]

well excuuse me princes-

SHUT UP

lol

[SolegRoblox]

some things in the intro weren't so great but others were AMAZING!

I LOVE THE CAMERA EFFECTS!

[Phenderz]

Cool intro (too long however), but the rest is a bit lame. Get some good voice actors and some scenes seem to go on long enough to make them look awkward. Alot of machimas has been doing that lately.

[hyrulezeldafan]

omg i soooooooooooooo LOVE THE OPENING

[numbody1711]

This video= awesome= 5 STARS!!!

Nice vid, I like it very much!

[xXxEP1CN3SSxXx]

Awesome! I would make the intro WAY shorter though, no-one wants to spend 4 minutes waiting for the video.

[jzc33]

ya I know, I just wanted to use the full intro for the first episode.

[hyrulezeldafan]

go zelda

[Rouge182]

Link's voice needs more 'maturity' to it.. D8

Sounds like an 8 year old trynna sound 18.

[Dragonfly77films]

this is nice work. even the intro. cool!

[Krusherr720]

Great video. I think you should put a shorter version of the theme song at the beginning of future episodes. Four minutes is a long time for every episode. And you should probably make credits or put what songs you used in the description. I think that's what stops the audio from being banned, because with no sources I guess you are supposedly claiming that you own the music. Oh, and some of the voices were hard to hear at parts. But these are just minor things, great video overall!

[jzc33]

Thank you, ans youtube doesn't care about what the people say, you can say that the song is yours they only get mad when you use one of WMG's songs lol

[TheKinglonnie]

@jzc33 no episode 2

[OceausPhoenix]

DUDE, AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! 5 STARS!

[jzc33]

Thanks : D

[jzc33]

once again you don't have to worry about the intro

[MaruKazeryu]

not bad, there was a little too long of a delay between some of the lines though, and some of the scenes took a little longer to end than necessary, like at 4:40. but overall it was pretty good! can't wait for my lines :D

[jzc33]

That Delay was added in because it looked wierd when it went right away.

[boy5freak]

only a five minute pilot?

could of been longer

[jzc33]

I know but other episodes will be very long.

[Robobrawler]

oh hey i did great this time

[jzc33]

see your not bad

[Robobrawler]

who sai i was bad

[jzc33]

you said you were when I had the second preview, but you've improved :)

[Robobrawler]

you sure i said that and not that i was super delicous?

[OceausPhoenix]

You were bad?

I was crap. You were great!

[marshtomp8]

the only problem I noticed that hasnt been mentioned so far was the volume. sometimes the charicters are too quiet and the music too loud. I'd keep the music quieter then it is and maybe increase character dialoug volume.

otherwise Excellent man, good job =D

[jzc33]

It was as loud as it could go, so I did what I could.

[littlebigplanetwow]

really cool. i liked it but intro is like 1/3 of the video more or less. the only intros that r that long r like 4 anime movies. most r about 1:30 but even that might be a bit to long for a 10min video. other than that well done

[jzc33]

I explained it in the description that I am most likely not going to have room for even a 1 minute theme, so I think I will go without a theme song. This one was too short without one though.

[123babyfreeze]

I actually agree with kooky665, some of the character responses and all should go a bit faster, otherwise I'm happy you got it uploaded. Also, the intro should be way shorter. An intro should at most be 1:30 to me, and even that's pretty long for a machinima. Otherwise, I'm looking forward for more. :3

[jzc33]

I explained it in the description

[kooky665]

That was very good, although i thought some parts were really slow..

zelda"shut up toon link"

(about a 15 second pause)

toonlink"well exuse me"....

yea..

im sorry but it just seemed rlly slow, mostly all the parts with

zelda and link were slow, please fix that :/

[jzc33]

can't fix it. but I can work on stuff like that, I just didn't want it to go to fast. sorry