Nice..no intention to be mean spirited but it is read much too quickly..like a flash... and the hurried pace leaves the inner meaning of it's beauty behind...slower and with a more contemplative tone of voice would work well here.. because it is a nice poem otherwise..
Very beautiful. I study Shotokan Katate and so Zen philosophy is a large part of what I do. This means alot to me though it is hard for the Western mind to consider existence and everything as having no beginning and no end, just a series of moments.
a single point does not have width height or length.... but infinite numbers of points makes up a line and a curve line can make a circle which is basically made out of nothing.... !
Nice..no intention to be mean spirited but it is read much too quickly..like a flash... and the hurried pace leaves the inner meaning of it's beauty behind...slower and with a more contemplative tone of voice would work well here.. because it is a nice poem otherwise..
MrOhjok 3 weeks ago 3
Thanks! In gasshó
mokuho 4 weeks ago
Very beautiful. I study Shotokan Katate and so Zen philosophy is a large part of what I do. This means alot to me though it is hard for the Western mind to consider existence and everything as having no beginning and no end, just a series of moments.
PnutButter1986 2 months ago
@PnutButter1986 me too right on bro :)
iggymydog 1 month ago
Excellent rhythm, mate. Beautifully written.
IndigoDaruma 3 months ago
nice sound
Phonologie 3 months ago
Dude, if you read it faster you can get it under a minute... But you loose the beauty.
Please, slow down, it is not a political discourse.
I ended up just reading it, thanks for posting it with the video!
Ktulu789 4 months ago
Zen wwwwwwordsssssssssssssssss ?
ftgyuhy 4 months ago
Thank you for that passion.
MrFalckenhagen 6 months ago
a single point does not have width height or length.... but infinite numbers of points makes up a line and a curve line can make a circle which is basically made out of nothing.... !
imranbug81 9 months ago
@imranbug81
This point that you speak about can symbolize an atom, and the circle: infinite existence.
totesmagotes007 1 month ago
very beautiful
sickology187 1 year ago
I love when people are able to be poetic about this kind of stuff, lovely!
RisingSun6 1 year ago
beautyful (:
but someone missed the like button
rozsaakos 1 year ago
Awosome
shadowsman2007 2 years ago
Wonderful :)
mayaz00 3 years ago
SO BEAUTIFUL
junktxaman 3 years ago