Poems of Al Karam - The Desert of Loneliness - Abul Hasan

[brunolimamaia]

Late at night, sky smiling The stillness is almost a dream The moonlight falls on the forest which a silver rain of rare splendor Only you sleep, no eavesdropping your singer revealing the graceful moon the painful history this love Moon, send your light silver awaken my beloved I want to kill my desires Choke her with my kisses Singing and the woman I love so much do not listen to me, is sleeping Singing and finally nor the moon have pity on me For you to see who called me the mist hid

[outlaw763]

Umm well everfins much bettr since I left ;)

[karaaziz]

id try to build a house out or concrete

[outlaw763]

OMG u replied lol jk yeah everyfins ite here was better last yr though so howz ur new skewl :)

[4bv1]

@outlaw763 yeh its okay.. boarding was tough.. so hows everywun?

[1millionlovesongs]

mashallah what a lovely poem, it will all be worth it in the end insahllah. i am thinking of sending my son to this school - what is it really like there?

[4bv1]

@1millionlovesongs its great.. education wise its briiliant... envioroment brilliant... people are great there.... buh if your son cant live witowt his parents lyk me den its gna b hard...

[outlaw763]

Yaw abul wasup it's me yusaf

[4bv1]

@outlaw763 Yusaf... u okai? hws jamia? do u still go there.. hope your havin fun.. im okay.. tc

[dooperly]

good poem

Kashif here andI still go to Jamia DO u remember me?

^_^- Eyebrows

[4bv1]

@dooperly kashif.. u was in year 7 ryt. wen i was there. the talll one yh.. i still remember u.. hws jamia? i shud b bk afta yr11 inshAllah... salam

[4bv1]

i havnt read this for months... readin it again brought me to tears...

[bradfordman1]

salam... this is to the writer of the poem...

I am an ex Jamia-al-karam student and one of the first. i went to the school when it just started up for the public.. i was in Room 248. at the time it was called Hamza House.. but it changed since then...

believe me when i truly say to you... i know exactly wot u mean.... i was there in 1995

[maimunasultana]

woa dat is deep

[KdmhLuver]

Srry ii Acciidentlii Rated 1..

Buhb YUU Knw ii Rate Yuu 5...

Bless Yuur Liil Poem...

Luviin Da Metaphors iin Yuur Poem...

Ne-Huz tc,

xx

[Sparxgirl17]

Really good poem..Good use of metaphors n things..:]

buh it's really touching..

keep it up !

NiiMa././.

[majedrulz]

very nice poem. You have talent,keep it up and make sure you go back there once again so that you can achieve success ! But you have the talent to be successful wherever u r if u try ur best all the time!