Emily pt. 5 Emily's Reunion with Gabrielle and Gabriella

[BirdOfParadise777]

The suspense in this part is great! Sometimes it's a bit too long between their "lines" but that's just timing. All of you have worked long hard hours no doubt! And living day to day lives too, it's not like this was all you guys had to do, it's coming along great!

BOP

[Seaco1988]

@BirdOfParadise777 Thank you for the constructive criticism, I appreciate it, I should have looked at it twice, I hadn't noticed the space between their lines, but thank you I really appreciate it :)