wow, i really like this, like a lot. the one thing i would change is the melody you sing for "I call out, but make no sound" and "I cave in, just fall apart" the note on "call" and "cave" i would make it like an octave higher just so it's not exactly the same as the line before and i think it would sound good that way. other then that i think it's a really beautiful song, good job
You have such an amazing voice and your guitar skills are impecable. You make wonderful music and it's like amazing just to sit down and listen to your music. Really highlights my day sometimes and can even make me happy.
outstanding choice of chords, especially how you change up the main sequence during parts of the song. open chords for most of it, with some non-open chords mixed in, way to end on regular e after keeping it open most of the song, that's tight man.
good bro keep it
sound191 1 year ago
i love this song its my favorite from you!(:
Pepefromthebario 1 year ago
your lovely :D
WildKittie13 2 years ago
I love just playing all your songs when I am doing my homework or whatnot. I could listen to your songs all day. Is there a way I can buy a cd?
smartguy88lotr 2 years ago
j'adore comment tu chante et la façons de jouer de la guitar j'aime bien
bravo !!!!!
murderXwonderful 2 years ago
i think this is my favorite...
AmandaWiddifield 3 years ago 2
your good at guitar
ProfeshYesh 3 years ago 2
I really like your guitar playing!!!
Check out my original's in my profile ;)
elvisgomes 3 years ago
love the guitar
JobroxLuver 3 years ago
well its good but in the link it says FREE mp3 download, i liked it so i waz gonna but then it sed BUY so im confused.
tonkoisafatmess 3 years ago
wow, i really like this, like a lot. the one thing i would change is the melody you sing for "I call out, but make no sound" and "I cave in, just fall apart" the note on "call" and "cave" i would make it like an octave higher just so it's not exactly the same as the line before and i think it would sound good that way. other then that i think it's a really beautiful song, good job
theflyingllama91 3 years ago
thats awesome seriosly your gonna be the next big thing
i wrote lyrics but cant play guitar well i definitely cant make stuff up
carlcastillo55 3 years ago 2
You have such an amazing voice and your guitar skills are impecable. You make wonderful music and it's like amazing just to sit down and listen to your music. Really highlights my day sometimes and can even make me happy.
moviesmyway 3 years ago
wow dude ur vocals have improved so much.. im so impressed! like wow.. im not even mad... thats amazing.
qubainoc 3 years ago
Wonderful...
creseahceres 3 years ago
another beautiful piece ^^
bittercokejjang 3 years ago
star quality
pimmagrimm 3 years ago
Damn i love this. I have lisstnend to you're videos. All of them. And everyone is great. Keep working up. :D
Alecks1992 3 years ago
outstanding choice of chords, especially how you change up the main sequence during parts of the song. open chords for most of it, with some non-open chords mixed in, way to end on regular e after keeping it open most of the song, that's tight man.
pi3k 3 years ago
excellent. very nice timing, controlled strumming, and good voice.
pi3k 3 years ago
youve got so much better since your 1st video,much more confident. this is really good.
yorkie2014 3 years ago
omgg! PAUL i loveddddd this one! really great guitar! awsome!!!!! <3 sarah (p.s. this might be my favorite haha)
moojuice252 3 years ago
hair! =]
as always, you've amazed me darling.
bethywethy147 3 years ago
wow man!good job. you look alot different from your other videos too.
pedrodogg69 3 years ago
Great writting smallpaul101!!!
Five stars from Eloy....
Escagedo3rd 3 years ago
its really great.
lyrics are awesome!
andersonbrittany 3 years ago
u r soooo cute and i love to hear u sing :$
raqueloide7 3 years ago
You are most certainly really talented, but I think this song is missing a solo :D.
Keep up the good work :).
eheh1 3 years ago
Really great song!
12thLeveIWizardKing 3 years ago
Good song bro - sounds great
claypaff 3 years ago
wow, i really like it! where are you from?
FW1993 3 years ago
Thanks for sharing your voice and talents with us, Paul. This is definitely one of your best in your repertoire of songs!!!
vhuynhsfsu 3 years ago
Top shout mate nice one. Nice words
EagleJonesMcBride 3 years ago
DAYUM! i really love the lyrics. i'm a sucker for poetry and good writing. much love from a female..lol
muriel
twinkiemp 3 years ago
Well done.
PowerOfThePenTV 3 years ago