cold facts

[Tomken8d2]

Good poem. It's true.

I hope the studio was warm though. :)

[rpVerlaine]

@Tomken8d2 great ressponse thank so much and we sweat in that studio! hard work

[Tomken8d2]

@rpVerlaine

If I say what I'm thinking you'll think I'm a pig.

Actually, you'll KNOW I'm a pig. heeheebhee

[MrWhiteskull]

wtf sucks!

[naveslaikss]

i heard 12 year old whiteboys rap better

[Zentz29]

WTF!?! Why?...

[DACHAGS]

urfukknhot



[spilledinsanity]

you look good with black hair but not the tan. @__@

[JJBoyz1968]

Ew what's with all the black dyed hair?

[rpVerlaine]

@JJBoyz1968 cheaper than henna....we're on a budget

[Maziyar]

girl with the lipstick looks like gaga.

[rpVerlaine]

@Maziyar cuter!

[metaltigeruk]

I'm not 100% on the meaning of the poem but i can understand some of it very nice i'm subbing to your channel.

[rpVerlaine]

@metaltigeruk thanks so much...new vids soon

[Noah2112]

Does that chick not have a shirt? I can lend her a shirt if she needs one.

[Innomen]

Could you post a couple links in the description? I feel like I'm missing something vital here. Clearly there is passion, but I think I'm missing some sort of back story.

[gt40f]

I think people are whining because this is going over their head. The juxtaposition of all the signs/symbols that match up with the poem might be distracting, they are watching them match up and missing the message. Gawd that Ariel is HAWT, and she's not wearing that much make-up. Even with the small chest she is so sexy.

[rpVerlaine]

@gt40f thanks for the kind words.

i just feel too much on you tube aims

for the lowest common denominator.

Ariel is not only hot but sweet as can be!

[cobol528]

A little serious,

No guilt free sex exists,

Every-Body pays.

[darkmoth38]

im with towlie on this one... i have no idea whats goin on

[seansalvador1]

"Bodies disappear, obviously of fear Lobbyists can't get near shit Everybody's spirits are under control Computers run with the soul Elitists defeat us, they live by the beaches Bubbledome over the hemisphere, so you can't enter here We live in the dumps with mutant rodents With blood red eyes, saliva drips for opponents Scratch your ID chip off cuz everybody own it" Del tha Funkee Homosapien. Real poetry

[seansalvador1]

Awfull!

[yjq0715]

huh???what is this about

[rpVerlaine]

read the last lines slowly...

[EndlessPalm]

Well done, I liked it quite a lot. It's always cool to randomly find little gems like this on youtube.

[tonybaby100]

what the fuck is he on

[rpVerlaine]

the floor

[Valstein0]

Obviously. Nearly every video on this channel has a provocative still-frame as it's thumbnail. It's an easy way to get people to listen to you. Everyone loves skin.

[rpVerlaine]

Sonny Liston thanks you! You may however have to explain the word provacative to him.

[rpVerlaine]

no, no it was hot that day

love rp

[yogurtking]

you've got to love these folks that mistake themselves for "artists."

[rpVerlaine]

dont worry

we never make those kind of mistakes

[drogoscg1]

shitty poetry award for 2009 goes to.....

[rpVerlaine]

haha very funny.

the best

rp

[yogurtking]

you're being generous.

[Sniperkitty89]

what the hell is going on?

[MyJibJib]

I preferred the 2nd girl on this, and I'm 24!Who's meant to be prettier. The 1st one just has heaps of makeup on and less clothes on

[Progressence]

I love it!

[rpVerlaine]

thanks so much

[tomitstube]

it's alright.

[Kahiara]

I did totally agree with the line "a pretty face is a degenerates menu" it's so sad how society is these days :(

[rpVerlaine]

thanks for pointing that out

and for leaving the thoughtful comment

the best

rp

[criticalzen]

Cool... there is a street named after me!

[Freshman000000]

There is a street with the same name.

It is unlikely it was named after you, slightly more likely but probably not the case either is that you were named after the street.

[rpVerlaine]

glad you cleared that up!

[culus2]

the related videos for this video, are strange....why???

[rpVerlaine]

hmmmmmm

[DiddlyPeePee]

*sigh* just another failed attempt tomake a good video

[lilmijo619]

Nice poem! Even nicer bra! God I'm such a pervert.

[geminielf7]

I wish I could read the poem...

I have a good voice.

[DarkEyedJunko]

Verbal masturbation. Grow up and put a little more thought into your art.

[getplaning]

The girl at the beginning of this clip is beautiful. Really, really beautiful.

[rpVerlaine]

more amazing to me that you can't see the art,

[BOSegypt]

i apoligize if i offended u, i have no right to jjudge or insult your work. Im just saying that some forms of "art" is given way too much credit. I can give u multiple examples. Do you, but i dont know why...

[Dyakki]

Hey, I could understand everything he said. Open your ears. As if black people someone can't enunciate.

[Dyakki]

Also, you don't even know if he's even black. LOL.

[Dyakki]

The first girl almost looked like she wasn't real. LOL. :]

[rpVerlaine]

we spare no expense with special effects

[snorgisborg2]

I like the blueish rainbow aura effect

[jasonmallison87]

Even so, try to imagine someone important trying to socialize with this guy. His english is just garbage.. What happened to our language? I can't even understand him. Ugh it's garbage!

[jasonmallison87]

Wow.... If that -was- a good poem, I couldn't tell because of that garbage that's called rap that was even so, poorly done. One star.

[Dyakki]

One, rap isn't garbage, and two, this isn't rap.

[emailchrisvideo]

sorry... not impressed.

[Albtraumen]

Son of Sam had a good poem about New York City too. His packed more punch if you know what I mean, lolol.

[sahilg123]

very nice

[thoughtplacebo]

good video

[EmoHunting666]

is this supposed to be some kind of rap?

[rpVerlaine]

you get an F in poetry but good luck hunting for emo

[healthyaddixion]

:D ha!

[juicr500]

I'm likin' it.

[steppenwolf350125]

Hanged herself.....grammar matters

[rpVerlaine]

got me there-

you are the second to win a

no prize

[steppenwolf350125]

I was expecting at the least a pedantry medal. Nice video i enjoyed it...grammar aside.

[twohawksfucking]

That carried the force of language like a bucket of gold nuggets...

...then that last lined poured the contents out. And wonderfully.

Roy

[gerardm]

That was very good

[toocoolcat]

watching it again, i really like it

[audadvnc]

Keep 'em coming Mr. Verlaine! This is hard beauty.

[doctorcatsburger]

It is Art !

[angelskin75]

devestating

[healthyaddixion]

doesnt get more nyc than that. fantastic.

[tovasdad]

i love your work