Spoken Word, Winter

[flashmanwade]

thats my baby :)

[chrichri105]

omg have u gone to any urban word poetry slams???

[soupthatsux]

dont get me wrong your not horable but i feel like u should try to get more deep or somthing you seem to exited you should try a carer in childerens books ;P go shane koyzcan :DDD

[pulpedpoetry]

this spoken word is AMAZING. I agree, very good way with words. I write spoken word too! Check me out if you have a second

[itachisan1993]

i'm only 16 but ..can i just marry you now haha

[MsKaylaBaby23]

Trust me on this, move to southern california and winter will never come -___-

[leopardprintlion]

i love your work! spoken word is what i live for! check out my page!!!!!!!

[cognacblac1]

u are so fascinating..

[mrilldoitlater]

This is simple and powerful. u have quite a silver tounge

[TRAD3Z]

Support New Artist.....Quant'em as I try to leave my mark on the rapping and spoken word game....feedback is crucial and vital

[lov3nolimit]

I love this! You are so talented and creative.

[MaliMcFlyG6BOI]

Your beauty,personhood,and the poem have me lost for words...I think of you in colors that don't exist

[dw4lubu]

She's pretty hot

[AshleyNoelleH]

i love your enthusiasm! check out some of my spoken word videos. i think you would like them

[waitizova34]

Well said. I really enjoyed this piece.

[KnapyPuppy]

You're beautiful but you're very obnoxious.

[Santanafiona]

LOVE LOVE LOVE the poem , and the picture in the background !

[dastuntmaan]

im sorry i couldnt listen to it and focus ... was too busy lookin at u ... o_o ur gorgeous

[foxynerd101]

Amazing x

[jayjayisback]

Well Shannon. you got me sprung. lol you are wonderful.

[moniezzcalling]

Love this poem I looked up your book its on my christmas list !!!

[djtaco15]

dam i love poetry and yes im a guy

[bittersweetkuri22]

winter as in winter? or winter as in the person??? hmmmmmmm what if?

[aznsRockk42]

wow that was very touching and deep!

[swagglykewoah]

Beautiful

[xplainex]

this inspired me to write.

good job, shannon.

[PrettyLittleLiar527]

Did she just say what's going on sons and daughters? hahahaha i say that alll the timeee ;) i love shannon! the poems was awesome! *snaps fingers*

[LifeOfAPetiteArtist]

That was dope Shannon word life! *does poet snap*

[vapid1000]

you have a wonderful way with words, Shannon! Very talented. You should do something with that!

[thosegirlsarewild]

@vapid1000 I kind of have a book in stores :) writing is what I do for a living. Well journalism all around and writing is a big part of that. Checkout our blog for more info and thanks for the love Vapid

[vapid1000]

@thosegirlsarewild lol...sorry for the confusion! I meant you should do something with poetry/spoken word. I know about your book, LAID!! And I know about the book you're doing with your mom! :)

[p8anut]

@vapid1000

Hey Girly. Just wanted to tell U that U outta' check out my spoken word channel. I KNOW you'll love me. But I thought this poem was nice ;o]

[thosegirlsarewild]

Hey guys this spoken word piece goes with a full post on our blog called "I Am Single Because I Am Creepy"

It's a good read check it out at ThoseGirlsAreWild(dot)com

[BittersweetPoetry22]

Great use of symbolism ! ! Loved that :)

[moirasa]

No maple syrup.

[Kendra98883]

i love the poem!! but omgee i hate how pretty you are!! i love your eyes n ur hair nd ur style!

[missNordia]

That was really good. honestly i don't know an answer if winter didn't come i'd be happy but then i think will i miss winter or will fall replace winter.. but this was truly brilliant

[Brulluhman]

Good poetry. Winter when leaves have fall and arms fall into the each or another. Winter shouldn't come alone, it should come with love and passion, like you wrote that poem. First autumn /watch?v=QOSg7LFgt6Y&feature=r­elated

It is as it is. Keep in mind new things happen.. soon.

Waiting for spring.



[thosegirlsarewild]

@Brulluhman u are lovely

[Brulluhman]

@thosegirlsarewild thank you, thank you, thank you (double bow)

[funNsweetx3]

That poem was amazing..it made me think...the conection you made between winter and relationships and things ending was completely amazing. You are very talented and this poem is..well...poetry :)

[RebeccaKeturah]

wow. that was good! i can completely relate to the references you made to relationships!

[craftystringgirl]

i would be mad because then i wont get a break from the mosquitos

[thosegirlsarewild]

@craftystringgirl LOL that is what I call a silver lining - I hate mosquitoes too!

[HolyGodchild]

it would be greatttttttttttttttttttttttttt­tttttttttttttttttt

[TheBraceface3000]

if winter didn't come...christmas wouldn't be the same. =(

[DukePowell]

being from Jamaica, i would have to miss a few winters before i even noticed :P i would call you Shannon

[EQU33NZ]

love the poem shannon! :D

well if one year winter didnt come i guess a lot of things would be different.

btw this reminds me of a song by drake called "come winter" its a really good song if you agree thumbs up :)

[thosegirlsarewild]

@EQU33NZ we love that song, me and Andrea

[shaekid510]

Niccee :)

[skhawkin]

Nice!  The seamless transition from seasonal to relationship references are excellent. Smooches, SK

[mermaidparty]

First veiw(: lol

Good poemmm !