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  • percy jackson is the best

  • i love the booke but that was not aw good but you should make more

  • @sweppysung Gawd you don't gotta be rude. Gosh, really rude people on YouTube...

  • bro u got some srious shit goin on; wid a little bit of editing nd all, nd i am dead serious, u could like seriously publish that on the internet for all to enjoy!!!! i loved it!!! nd the thing that attracted me the most, well other than ur gud ideas, u did an excellent job in imitating the writing style of Rick and did Percy and his character justice!! GREAT JOB DUDE!!!

    btw, have u read the LOST HERO; its epic and the the Son of Neptune, 7th book, will be even better cuz its from Percy's view

  • There's a sixth book? I didn't know that The Lost Hero was a continuation of The Last Olympian...

  • I checked out Rick's website and their is a page specifically for questions. Some people asked if they could use his stories he said as long as u don't publish them u can use them for fanfics. He actually wouldn't mind if he gave u permission to use them for other stuff but his manager wouldn't like it.

  • i knew that!

  • perfect spelling..

  • I loved this, are you going to make another?

  • @Zenas76 I agree

  • @fredweasleyfan0918 there not 18 it would be agians the law exept in Scotland here you can marry at 16

  • This is filled with inAcurasys bad spelling but if you rethink it a bit a 13 year old like me might enjoy in a lot (also do next chapter I'll reveier it and maybe recomend it )

  • this is actually pretty good 4 a person whos not a professinal writing and i also ike doing stuff like that ecept in a notebook thet i hide and u said that u were goin 2 make this into a series and its been freaken years

  • Okay some grammar errors could be better and I was waiting for awhile after reading and Leo and Percy shouldn't be at the same school else they would get a lot of monsters

  • @FreeRelmsDerector Cause she is the new oracle! Duh!

  • why would rachel go to camp??? shes a mortal

  • I like the heroes of Olympus but no other book is going to be better than the Percy Jackson series

  • You came close to The Lost Hero with your title

  • i must say that i have 1 suggtestion percys 2 popular ! but nice job

  • @pkm2209 hahahahahaha im comenting to myself!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • There will also be another book after the Lost Hero. It's called Son of Neptune and it comes out this Fall!!!!!!! I'm so excited.

  • i bought and read the whole lost hero book it was aw some happy sad funny and more i read Kane conicals new book sometime in may 2011 an another 2012 in may ! and the son on Neptune a hero's of Olympus book and it comes fall 2011 cant wait!

  • @HaloReachFan1234 actually it's much better

  • The lost hero probably won't be as good as the Percy Jackson series...

  • woah also the next book comes out tomorrow.....and theres gana be atleast another 4 or 5 books in this series

  • yah i was dissapointed at the ending of the last olympian,it was entresting the last 2 chapers and it just ended dead...i hope rick writes another bug series.

  • wait...percy have the achrill (i dont now how to spell that) curse,how can he then hurt his arm?

  • this is really great you must do more

  • this is very good lol when u finish it send a free copy my wayXD

  • God dam Disneys taking The Jackson Series I AM SO MAD! GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR­RRRRRRRRRRRRrrrrr

  • The Sixth Book Isn't The Lost Goddess: It's A New Series Called "The Heroes Of Olympus", But I've Read The Preview And It's Great! You Can Wikipedia-It And See The First Two Chapters Free On A Disney Website! I Hope It Will Have The View Of Percy, And I'm SOOOO Glad That The Series Won't End, As I Was VERY Upset With The Ending Of The Last Olympian! AWESOME!!!

    Whoever Made This, Thank You For Trying, But It's Pretty.... Well, Thanks For Trying :)

  • Go to @&$&. You have so many grammar mistakes that I can't even count them. Also, everyone knows Percy is the lost hero and somehow a kid named Jason and two other people have to save him. If you did not know this you obviously have not read the first two chapters

  • @johnp1199 Why pay any attention to grammer mistakes?

  • i respect you for making this vid man

  • why is a zelda playing in the background?

  • actually the new book starts with a kid named Jason and these two ppl named Piper and Leo who are also demigods. Jason forgot his whole life and was ambushed by two venti,storm spirits, Jason's instinks took over and killed 2 the third took their coach,their styr guardian, and then annabeth showed up with a guy namedbutch to take them to camp half blood when butch says something about Percy missing. thats all the imformation i got enjoy the new book

  • I hate to point this out im really loving your fan fic, but when the hell hound bites percy shouldnt it have just broke its teeth or something percy is invulnerable except for the small speck on his back, Again im just pointing out im not trying to be a douche or anything, just constructive citicism. but other then that its pretty great!!

  • i wished they made more books bout percy -.-

  • And there will be a book I am 100 % sure, it is called The Lost Hero it is not a Percy Jackson series, but the old campers will be in the books . I am sooo exited, I can not wait for it to come out, but It is bad that Percy is the lost hero.

  • @gerybarzaka WHAT??? Percy is the lost hero????

  • @gerybarzaka Percy jackson is in The son of neptune book number 2 and book number three for sure is gonna be percy jackson in there and the book is called The Mark of Athena now I can wait for that book

  • I am sooo exited, I can not wait for it to come out, but It is bad that Percy is the lost hero.

  • ya it was good. nice job. and if you go to the percy jackson website you can read the 1st two chapters of the new book (the passwords newhero) cant wait for the rest! and for all of you sayin this is bad, lay off!!!

  • make the next!!! pleasee

  • This is really good .

    When is the next chapter coming out ?

  • cant wait until this book comes out!

  • i know this song minda's lamenate from the legend of zelda

  • @jlohnik i know, he's right! Why would a son of Hades hit on every girl. What is the point of that? Plus i rather have it in Annebeth's piont of view so i can hear how much she likes percy's an idiot

  • Who is the lost goddess?

  • um @jlohnik then y did u rate it thumbs up?

    and if u hated it, then y did u read it in the first place

  • Yeah whats up with Midna's Lament?

  • awesome!!

  • not to be mean but this is kinda lame and bad spelling

  • If you go to Rick Riordan's blog(Myth and Mystery) and you click on the first 4 words(The Heroes of Olympus) then the tab will change to something where you have to put a password in. If you put in the right password(newhero) than you will get to read the first two chapters of the new book The Lost Hero. Then on June 21st he will unveil the Final cover to the book. It takes place right after the Last Olympian cuz Annabeth is still a teen, but new problems, new people. Password: newhero. READ IT

  • @jlohnik your right it is a fucken bad Idea, but I already read the series

  • Nico fliting with girls?And percy gradtion? Oh no

  • what has zelda got to do with any of this?

  • Hey dude that was pretty cool and all but, I think you should leave it to mr. Riordan. If he see's this he will either be really proud, or he'll probably think your trying to mock him or make fun of the way he writes. But hey, that's just a thought.

  • Whoa dude this is actually pretty amazing even though it doesn't exactly sound like Percy!!! Good job, continue up the good work!!

  • @jlohnik

    You don't have to read it and why should he get sued for this? It's only fanmade, not like he is going to publish it or anything unless Rick likes it. Oh, and shut your foul mouth please if you do not have anything nice to say. Idiots do that. Only idiots.

  • you spelled goddess wrong, 'tard.

  • on amzaon.com it said the book is called : The Lost Hero and it should be coming out on October12,2010

  • @omibeast :cool is the story going to be from a new character's point of view or Percy's.

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  • @perceousjackson8 percy and annabeth will be mentioned in the book but they will be minor characters so yes it will be from a different characters view :)

  • @perceousjackson8 it'll be a different persons point of view but percy will be a minor character

  • @perceousjackson8 percy will be a minor character in the new book, so yes it will be in a different characters point of view

  • @perceousjackson8 Its Goin To Be With WHole New Characters IDK If ILL Like It

    But Im Excited

  • @perceousjackson8 new one i checked out rick riordens site its pretty cool

  • @perceousjackson8 well, ive been researchin this myself. There is an interview with Rick Riordan: What's Next For The Olympians. He states there will be a new series, not from the view of Percy, but he's involved. I've started to make my own story.

  • @Zayahsan ....i think the series is the red pyramid series its about the egiption gods it was really a good book!....(sorry cant spell worth crap! lol)

  • @perceousjackson8 no its not even about percy, its baout a kid names Jason. i read the first ch.

  • @perceousjackson8 by another charactors point of view his name: jason

  • @perceousjackson8 its the new characters view

  • @perceousjackson8 new people

  • @perceousjackson8 a new character...if u read the first chapter in the website its about jason then in the end a satyr said 2 jason dats her boyfriend percy...

  • @perceousjackson8 new characters and in its 3rd person D: ahh but im almost done with it jaw dropping book if u ask me!

  • @perceousjackson8 niether rick riordan tells the story

  • @omibeast what! really are u joking thats like a dream come true!! if it is plz tell me it is true!!!!

  • @omibeast actually its september 12 lol

  • Bad grammar.

    Incorrect spelling.

    Incorrect information .

    And for petes sake isnt he supposed to be invincible?

  • With meh careful eye I see a bunch o spelling errors. And grammer is also a bit weird no offense

  • I swear percy has the curse of achilles??? how could he have got bitten?

  • god this was awful... i could do waaaaay better. find another hobby stupid

  • @blackmoon46579 stop being mean! you get another hobby!

  • @pennypeat i have one. my book is made by ME. the main character is based on myself. i dont think anyone else uses a character with my name based on me. -_- dont tell me how to live. you have no taste

  • @blackmoon46579 that just really didn't make sense. And i am not telling you how to live! but you look like you need some pointers now!

  • @pennypeat um, yeah it did, idiot. and you cant tell me what i do and dont need. i'm actually good at writing books. so shut up and leave me alone. dumbass

  • @blackmoon46579

    Well, after you've done that quest of doing good in writing, try studying spelling next.

  • @SimlishSammy whats your problem? i DO do good. 

  • @blackmoon46579

    My problem is that YOU need to learn how to spell.

  • @SimlishSammy i can spell my ass -_- your asking for a fight

  • @blackmoon46579

    Wait, I am not insulting you. i'm just saying that you need to learn how to spell before posting stories like these on youtube. Just a suggestion.

  • @SimlishSammy why are you insulting me? this isnt my book!

  • @blackmoon46579

    I know this isn't your book! The kind of stories I am talking about is fan made stories. All I said is you need to spell better! And by the gods, for the last time I AM NOT insulting you!

  • @SimlishSammy i never made any fan-made stories or whatever, and i never spelled anything wrong. so shut up.

  • where did he say the people from the percy jackson series will be in it?

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  • @jlohnik AMEN!! i hope he does get sued.. and he spelled like probably 193458 some words wrong..

  • @Skilledman4 you ppl are not true percy jackson fans!!!! if you didnt like it dont coment! gosh!

  • @123catrice wats it called?

  • @NadineSings1 lol your name is nadine? i have the same name! thats soooooooooo cool!!!!! and i totally agree with you! way off!

  • @jlohnik dont be a ass at lest she/he has the guts to put it on here nobodys perfect dude and you need to grow up and let him/her be a freakin free spirt...douche!!!

  • Why did you use a Zelda song?  Good upload where can I find the first book?

  • lol awsome man this is good

  • percy cant get hurt cause his achilles heel

  • @picnic223 PWNED!!!

    Unless He Got Stabbed In The Small Spot On HIs BAck

  • dude percy can only be a junior cause he nvr lasted a year at any of his other schools sept that one there.. and that was pretty bad story. im sorry but i dont lie.

  • Ok u hav a lot of mispellings, and some of the details in yur chapter are inaccurate. But overall I thought it was good 5*

  • keep trying only w/ ur own ideas.

  • He is going to make a new series abaut other half bloods but Now he is starting a new thing compleatly called the Kane chronicels or something it's Egyptian myth.

  • there is no such thing as the 6 book of percy jackson. Rick Riordan said he was not going to make another percy jackson book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 4 of my friends and i r also writing the 6th book the lost goddess yeah but we did it like the other books even tho hes nmot writing another liek that because one day we all just came up with it and started writing now were on chapter 5

  • wa nico bcome a flirter

  • when is it gonna come out?

  • cough (bad) no offence

  • you a zelda fan? just asking becaue of the music

    and by the way good vid

  • I writing a book 7 to percy jackson.. and it iss alot better then this one

  • nice legend of zelda music

  • It made me belive that I was reading the next percy jackson and the olympians series it was pretty darn good.

  • u have good ideas just dont make it into a percy jackson book u can get sued xD

  • it is good but the problem is a lot of people will think it is a cheao rip off of percy jackson

  • That's awesome can't wait for the next book

  • It's a good idea to publish a new book on to youtube, but it really wasn't very good.

  • Same here. Seven demigods. Really hope it comes out this year cuz The Last Olympian came out in May 2009

  • number 6 is comin' out this fall i was informed

  • i knew they were gonna make a new series i just finished reading the last book today about an hour ago i knew rite after Rachel made the prophecy thatthey would do it

  • oh wow so did i lol

  • rick riordan said that he is not going to continue the percy jackson series he is going to start a new series still about demi gods and camp half blood but no annabeth no grover and no percy

  • wrong. Annabeth, grover, and percy will still be in the story, only side characters, not vanish from the storyline! Also rachel became the oracle so, she will also probably get some parts. The only character who i think wont be seen anymore is Tyson, due to the fact that he isn't even in the percy jackson books all that much.

  • Do you think Nico will be in it? Because I absolutely love his character

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  • *panicking* (Well I Was)

    I was worried There would be no percy or annabeth or grover.

    SPOILER

    I hope percy and annabeth continue to date

  • hll yea i agree..... and they better be the main characters. annabeth and percy are the reasons i fell in love with the series.

  • they dont DATE. they just make out. (3 times) lol and with rachel being around them being the Oracle and all its just a matter of time until a cat-fight breaks out. :) Now THAT would be a fun thing to read. LOL

  • No they are considered boyfriend and girlfriend, and Rachel actually WANTED Percy to be with Annabeth in the end!

  • xD i like the part bout nico xD

  • loved it but whats with the legend of zelda twilight princess music???

  • its awesome

  • @perceousjackson8 this seriously sucked, oh and please for your own sake learn how to spell.

  • @23maddpaul stop being mean!

  • wow thats pretty good

    you should write a lot more

  • its funny hes like basing this on lighting theif page 60 somthing noob

  • you misspelled perseus

  • Nice job im making my own series but not about half bloods ya...i decided on the title ya. cool vid

  • you should put this in fiction press/fan fic.

  • this is awsome

  • DONKEY BONER BULL SHIT!!!!

    DONT U DARE FINISH THIS BOOK OR ILL SEND JESUS AND CHUCK NORRIS WITH FLAMING TACO GUNS TO KICK UR FAN MADE BOOKS DOUBEL ASS IN THE DICK FACE THAT U GAVE BIRTH TO

    al tho good first chapter XD

  • he should at least contenu the love between annabeth and percy

  • amazing! please post a link in ur comments w/a webpage copy (you could just make a freewebs website) itd be easier to read

  • youd better make it into a series.

    (still has knife)

  • is there any book 6???? please anwer me

  • no there is no book

  • @blackfire1907 theres gunna be a new camp half-blood series, and i think i know the name of the next book "The Doors of Death"

  • :'( is my chapter that bad!

  • Awsome!!!

  • Hey everyond please TRY my chapter and comment. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

    No one wants to comment :(:( times 1000000000

  • um i was wondering could you read my chapter too and say if its good or not its right under hers the one with the white background not gray, gray is not working

  • why would i kill you

    (hides knife)

    interesting. ill subscribe if you make more chapters.

  • Sorry that ABD should be an AND

  • Nice job, i am writing a fan made book two please read it everybody its write under yours it has a white background the first chapter is called I SET MY HORSE ON FIRE not the one with the grayish background that one is broken. its also Called the Lost Goddess. PLEASE READ ABD SUSCRIBE

  • it was really good :) looking forward to the next one.

  • I like it very very very good, but i have a question what does suscribe mean?

  • subscribe is that lil magical button you see on the top right corner of my description, if u subscribe that means if I do a new video you will see it in the main page

  • OH ,thank you. does it cost money?

  • @perceousjackson8 When is the next chapter???

  • sorry man but the original books way bettter

  • ofcourse it is man nobody can write better than the original,im not trying to be as good as him, I don't have a major in writing or something

  • why is it called the lost goddess? and are you going to post more?

  • well im going to post more chapters and u will figure out later, and i kinda have a life and i need to go to school so sometimes I dont have time to write the chapters but im in winter break so expect alot of more videos

  • u spelled goddess wrong hun

  • I know thats what i meant to say.

  • haha nice one! dude i made my own version of book 6 XD my main character is a halfgod and a half monster. ill send my word to you if you want to try reading it :P