''that (smiles and takes his pants off, starts sucking in his dick.....)'' :O
I mean that was so stupid and ''nonsense''.. you just tell us the the most important part of the story in 3 minutes.. the ideas is great but the writing... well, sorry, but it sucks
yeah i didn't like it, i mean, I just can't picture ashley being mean and she wouldn't do that if she JUST found out that her BF was a dad, i mean she would probably be like so who do you chose?
m really sorry, but these things freak me out sooo much! dnt read this(cuz it really wrks). u will gt kissd on the nearest frieday by the love of ur life. 2mara wll b the bst day of ur life hwever if you dnt post ths comment 2 at least 3 vids u will die withn 2 days nw uv startd readn this dnt stp this is so scary snd ths ovr 2 5 vids in 143 mins when ur done press f6 nd ur crush's name wll appear on the screen n big letters ths is so scary cuz it actully wrks ths really wrk
o my god !! i love it i have been looking 4 a zanessa story like this but other people just made them the same boring thing so i cant for the other ep
ok i am going to say that i loved it but I thought it is a zanessa story so why is zac with ahley and not trying to get back with vanessa. instead he finds out that he has a daughter and makes love to ashley gross
amazingly good.... realli awesome for ur first ever story cant wait too see wot the rest of the series brings... and if u can try makin them slightly longer in the future x but anyway good job x
make it morreeee!!!!!
CutieBellaBena 1 month ago
is it actually true???
Negin231 6 months ago
that wuz great
<3
happygirl1299 6 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
it was so good
tosino121 7 months ago
it was o good
tosino121 7 months ago
i loved it
dancestuff12 9 months ago
that was wierd...she randomly sucks his thing and vanessa randomly has a baby..WHAT THE HELL?
mysterypeep55 1 year ago
@vanessa580i I don't see why you're moaning at people because their giving feedback so they can make it better!
Tizzyfan4Ever 1 year ago
Ashley's amazing why does she always get stuck being the horrible one :(
Tizzyfan4Ever 1 year ago
Do you mind giving us time to read
jordancassidymarie 1 year ago
Such a little Whore (Ashley)
Bhut qreat story.!!
MareyaMax 1 year ago
I need another one so badly
cupcake040404 1 year ago
that baby pic is really CUTE.X
ElsieeeAndMillieeex 1 year ago
omg vaness rlly pregnant
topdawg456 1 year ago
omg vannessa you really had a baby awesome and by the way sommer is so cute why did you and zach brake up how old is sommer she is so beutifull
Roller5711 1 year ago
why is this all about pregnancy??????
ElaineErika 1 year ago
why is this all about pregnancy??????
ElaineErika 1 year ago
todo bagon
charmvicente 1 year ago
i like it but i think vanessa and zac efron are romantic it would be 2 sad if it was true well great video any ways
MissShyGurl100 1 year ago
post more
NICKJISOFFDACHAIN19 1 year ago
Its was ok, but where's episode 2?
DancerTGS 2 years ago
WTF! :O
''that (smiles and takes his pants off, starts sucking in his dick.....)'' :O
I mean that was so stupid and ''nonsense''.. you just tell us the the most important part of the story in 3 minutes.. the ideas is great but the writing... well, sorry, but it sucks
misstrindade 2 years ago
i really liked it can't wait to see the next one : )
mcsexy303 2 years ago
i hated it
raider070707 2 years ago
what a wate of time!!!
MegaNotme123 2 years ago
wow dat was awsome so ppl stop hatin its just a story!!
101dreamer 2 years ago
is that that baby real
i know its real but is your couxin your someone
Money23king 2 years ago
please make a new episode!!! ILOVEIT
DANIELLE6729868 2 years ago 5
i loved it
cant wait 4 the nxt 1
corbinb22189 2 years ago 5
i love this series make another ppppppppleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
zanessa49 2 years ago
Thats allll fake :(
12Chazzy101 2 years ago
Great video :p
LOL
angelinsix 2 years ago
Honestly i hated it.
Plus Ashley wudnt do that if she just found out her bf was a dad:/
Gimme thumbs down if u want but thats jst my opinion x
bettyboo129 2 years ago
yeah i didn't like it, i mean, I just can't picture ashley being mean and she wouldn't do that if she JUST found out that her BF was a dad, i mean she would probably be like so who do you chose?
CHECK OUT MY NBB SERIES!
aNd the words moved to fast! srry it as ok
MyNBBStory4810321 2 years ago
coooooooollllll vid irte 4 stars atleast it something
epymok 2 years ago
great vid i rate 5 STARS
hitmanbling46 2 years ago 3
the baby looks wierd but good vid
5 stars
eliseyfab 2 years ago 2
I think the writing goes a bit too fast, but it is good.
tarletonfamily 2 years ago 2
were are the episode 2?????
earl050381 2 years ago
ok thats good
earl050381 2 years ago
love it next one PLEASE PLEAASEE !!!!!!!!!!!
VanessaxxAshleyxx 2 years ago
its soo good!! Make 1 soon
edenmachy 2 years ago
i loved it
plz mke another 1 soon
corbinb22189 2 years ago
crapp
EluvzASooMuch 2 years ago
is 25 reallyyy to soon to have a baby for alot of people..? ;S
shitwa1 2 years ago
I h8 it very simple no excitements
GiViNgBiRtH1234 2 years ago
i loved it
plz mke another 1 soon
corbinb22189 2 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
m really sorry, but these things freak me out sooo much! dnt read this(cuz it really wrks). u will gt kissd on the nearest frieday by the love of ur life. 2mara wll b the bst day of ur life hwever if you dnt post ths comment 2 at least 3 vids u will die withn 2 days nw uv startd readn this dnt stp this is so scary snd ths ovr 2 5 vids in 143 mins when ur done press f6 nd ur crush's name wll appear on the screen n big letters ths is so scary cuz it actully wrks ths really wrk
Isobelatisdale 2 years ago
whens the next one cuz i subscribed but i can unsubscribe if u dont make more
bellawatch09 2 years ago
that baby is so cute ..
aNgeLLi180 2 years ago
hey I thought ashley is in LA but who's V talking to??is it ASHLEY
GiViNgBiRtH1234 2 years ago
this is a good episode you should make more
BlueBerryCp 3 years ago
cool graeat
12jumjum 3 years ago
o my god !! i love it i have been looking 4 a zanessa story like this but other people just made them the same boring thing so i cant for the other ep
tina1014life 3 years ago
awesome i cant wait for the next
lemnos2000 3 years ago 2
i loved it when is the next one???????
zanessa4eva1122 3 years ago 2
when is the next going to be on here
eliiselouiise94 3 years ago 2
I love thi series, whens the next episode coming?
I can't wait to see that :D <33
XoXo MZ
maazanessa 3 years ago 2
so cool and i hate ash as well shes a big slut
popprincess916 3 years ago 2
I think that so far it is really gd,
please continue,
can't wait for the next one to come out, cause i luved this eppi!!!!
KH3816 3 years ago 2
love it!!
Caro9623 3 years ago
i liv it plz continue
assmunch57 3 years ago
make a other 1 plzs i love it
eliiselouiise94 3 years ago
awsome
troylovesgabby123 3 years ago
ok i am going to say that i loved it but I thought it is a zanessa story so why is zac with ahley and not trying to get back with vanessa. instead he finds out that he has a daughter and makes love to ashley gross
rigger0 3 years ago
i loved it cant wait for the next one and please comment on my videos
pollymed1995 3 years ago
amazingly good.... realli awesome for ur first ever story cant wait too see wot the rest of the series brings... and if u can try makin them slightly longer in the future x but anyway good job x
weerach91 3 years ago
Ill try but now with all the exams and so its hard you know
xD
xoxDelaxox 3 years ago
@weerach91
Roller5711 1 year ago
the video explained alot but i dont really u need to tell us about her sucking his dick... other whise i loved...:)
4444boohoo 7 months ago
its great
xozanessa411xo 3 years ago
really cool i cant believe its your first one! awsome
12jumjum 3 years ago
I loved it:P
Emsebasse 3 years ago
Okay guys if you watch this but dont comment there wont be a next one .....
xoxDelaxox 3 years ago