there are lot of gud concepts in the screenplay-The lady is very rude to all including the old man.She doesnt give any money to the boy when his sister is in serious condition.But at the same time she is forced to give money to the gundas.It shows the fear in her mind to those gundas,but she doesnt others to feel her fear,So,the next moment after giving money,she says to one gunda"Helmet eduthu vachittu podaaaaaa"...this is just to 'show' others that those gundas are like 'friends'.
The boy simply doesnt leave the job n joins anthr job....he tries to suicide,but whn he sees anthr suicde attempt..a body in the railwy track,he changs his mind n cmes bk to life...itz the hope....
A boy hadn't a job,finally he got a job in teastall, he cant accept the circumstances in the teastall,then he leave his job and wandering and finally planed to work again in another teastall,,what a utter nonsense, What do you actually means?Very poor...very poor theme.except that small girl, all are very poor.many unwanted scenes and unwanted characters.
i know it was your 1st attempt..no problem,,we expect better in next time...
direction is good, but last frames are good and worthy, that little girl and grand father performed in a natural way!. story is not good, it lacks something ( did you tried to tell any story?) and (what is the moral of the story?), i think you people don't have any message to convey through this film.
Movie is well written with an above average acting from the lead actors. Direction is okay. Last 2-3 frames were really good. The shocking news and the sudden senti scene by the lead actor could have directed well. Background score wasnt that impressive.
+ves
appoppan
2 gundas
dialogues
last 3-4 shots / frames
overall a nice attempt which could have been made better.Average.
From next time, choose unique subjects for short films.
All the characters in this film except 2 are ordinary people who dont know the abc of acting.They all are the workers of the same 'kudumbasree' hotel.
This is a short film Directed by Arun.T.Vaasudevan,written by Jay suraj & G.Kuttan Ranni,Camera by Prajil Mohan,releasing under the banner of HERITAGE PRODUCTIONS.
THE FIRST VENTURE FROM MOVIE ADMIRER'S ASSOCIATION (MAA) - A SHORT FILM NAMED "TEA-STALL" OFFICIALLY RELEASED AND PRESENTED BY THE YOUNG SUPERSTAR,THE PRIDE OF KERALA- PRITHVIRAJ SUKUMARAN..
i dint think it was a hope...MR.neela do you think he bcme cmfrt in his nxt job...
abhieledath 1 year ago
there are lot of gud concepts in the screenplay-The lady is very rude to all including the old man.She doesnt give any money to the boy when his sister is in serious condition.But at the same time she is forced to give money to the gundas.It shows the fear in her mind to those gundas,but she doesnt others to feel her fear,So,the next moment after giving money,she says to one gunda"Helmet eduthu vachittu podaaaaaa"...this is just to 'show' others that those gundas are like 'friends'.
MrNeelathamara 1 year ago
The boy simply doesnt leave the job n joins anthr job....he tries to suicide,but whn he sees anthr suicde attempt..a body in the railwy track,he changs his mind n cmes bk to life...itz the hope....
MrNeelathamara 1 year ago
A boy hadn't a job,finally he got a job in teastall, he cant accept the circumstances in the teastall,then he leave his job and wandering and finally planed to work again in another teastall,,what a utter nonsense, What do you actually means?Very poor...very poor theme.except that small girl, all are very poor.many unwanted scenes and unwanted characters.
i know it was your 1st attempt..no problem,,we expect better in next time...
abhieledath 1 year ago
Gud concept...The old man's charctr is really gud...
MrNeelathamara 1 year ago
direction is good, but last frames are good and worthy, that little girl and grand father performed in a natural way!. story is not good, it lacks something ( did you tried to tell any story?) and (what is the moral of the story?), i think you people don't have any message to convey through this film.
any way some good frames are from real life
good luck,
pkapildas 1 year ago
story was good...but the acting of the main role seems to be just fair.....editing was little poor......
munduvangal 1 year ago
Very nice!
mausamudeshi 1 year ago
good attempt.. tho voice dubbing cud have been better.. better luck next time.. :)
bgeorge841 1 year ago
thanks dear friend ur support by komban jose
sethunath1 1 year ago
Gr8...hats off to team-MAA
Shajinvk 1 year ago
Good story - Journey through a real life.. appreciable attempt
dharu7 1 year ago
What was written in the board @ last
prabhu19 1 year ago
Movie is well written with an above average acting from the lead actors. Direction is okay. Last 2-3 frames were really good. The shocking news and the sudden senti scene by the lead actor could have directed well. Background score wasnt that impressive.
+ves
appoppan
2 gundas
dialogues
last 3-4 shots / frames
overall a nice attempt which could have been made better.Average.
From next time, choose unique subjects for short films.
yahiyahamsa 1 year ago
Its original, its got an appealing story, its got humour and above all its well designed.
vinodusha 1 year ago
nice attempt.. dont think its a great work. try to choose good elements in creation and learn more about the technology. best wishes.
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meharali 1 year ago
We welcome nice comments and criticisms.As we can learn only thru mistakes.Please dont 4 gt to write your comments here
slanuraj 1 year ago
All the characters in this film except 2 are ordinary people who dont know the abc of acting.They all are the workers of the same 'kudumbasree' hotel.
slanuraj 1 year ago
This is a short film Directed by Arun.T.Vaasudevan,written by Jay suraj & G.Kuttan Ranni,Camera by Prajil Mohan,releasing under the banner of HERITAGE PRODUCTIONS.
slanuraj 1 year ago
THE FIRST VENTURE FROM MOVIE ADMIRER'S ASSOCIATION (MAA) - A SHORT FILM NAMED "TEA-STALL" OFFICIALLY RELEASED AND PRESENTED BY THE YOUNG SUPERSTAR,THE PRIDE OF KERALA- PRITHVIRAJ SUKUMARAN..
slanuraj 1 year ago