My point wasn't that sex isn't a big deal in a relationship. My point was that sex is sex and it isn't the focal point of this poem. He isn't going out of his way to make dirty comments about having sex with her in front of her mother. The people saying THAT are the ones i was talking to and the ones who need to grow up. If you think this is about sex, you're an idiot. It's about love.
Oh my gosh. Was the whole audience visualizing her then, wearing or them... . He knows exactly which times require he leave the stage, immediately. heh. Love his gifts.
I'm so confused after this one...
imachristian22 10 hours ago
is this before his wife died
hope0hurts 4 months ago
@hope0hurts No this is about his second wife.
Darkeklaw 4 months ago
@hope0hurts DUH!
HoustonSoleCollector 2 months ago
@HoustonSoleCollector i actually found out that this was about his second wife. sooo no. not "duh"
hope0hurts 2 months ago
bunch of sexually repressed whiners and teenagers can't understand that sex really isn't a big deal. Appreciate the wonderful poem.
Eknoid4 1 year ago
@Eknoid4 If sex isn't a big deal, then why do we make such a big deal over it so often?
oplu45 7 months ago
@Eknoid4 I disagree with you. My boyfriend is celibate, and it makes me feel so terribly unwanted. Like I'm not worthy of being desired.
LadyeXo 6 months ago
@LadyeXo
My point wasn't that sex isn't a big deal in a relationship. My point was that sex is sex and it isn't the focal point of this poem. He isn't going out of his way to make dirty comments about having sex with her in front of her mother. The people saying THAT are the ones i was talking to and the ones who need to grow up. If you think this is about sex, you're an idiot. It's about love.
Eknoid4 6 months ago
@Eknoid4 I agree with you completely here. Thanks for clarifying.
LadyeXo 6 months ago
can not beleive he said that in front of her mother lol
gigiperson123 1 year ago
@gigiperson123
Almost makes you wonder if he said that just because she was there.
h3lblad3 1 year ago
Well...there must've been some running after that.
Tahkaullus01 1 year ago
4 ways not to write a poem...
1: talk about having sex with her infront of her mother...
2.....
HullioProductions 1 year ago
@HullioProductions alternatively:
1. Convince her mother that her live-in partner is not shagging her...
2.....
crazybay46913 1 year ago
Haha, he's funny and a great poet! I can't help but wonder whether it was awkward for him to perform this in front of his mother-in-law...
x4812k 1 year ago
This is the first poem I've heard him read that was dedicated to his new wife. =]
Koribaby1 1 year ago
Oh my gosh. Was the whole audience visualizing her then, wearing or them... . He knows exactly which times require he leave the stage, immediately. heh. Love his gifts.
klytaemnistras 2 years ago
I love this poem! You, Mr. Mali, are my favorite poet.
Konko123 2 years ago
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after watching it a few times, I just now got that last line!
davisdebard 2 years ago 2
This is so lovely and wonderful. Thank you again Mr. Mali.
raester37 2 years ago 2