I actually got a little scared at the end when she got locked out :o(. Most women living on their own would have been a little more frightened than your actress. My first instinct would have been to get a better weapon ;o)
i really enjoyed this short film however as a film maker myself i have a few criticisms. Firstly it is very grainy also i feel that you use a lot of cut away shots which made the film very long. Overall, you did have some very creative shots especially the vent shot my favourite shot of the film i hope you can consider this in future films.
As a fellow HV40 user, I can respect this kind of film making, especially on youtube.
Though I gotta say criticize the fact that for 15 minutes this girl is on the phone and wandering back and forth in her house going "Is that you? Quit playin. Who is it? Hello? Stop messing around..."
I actually got a little scared at the end when she got locked out :o(. Most women living on their own would have been a little more frightened than your actress. My first instinct would have been to get a better weapon ;o)
cammybaby 6 months ago
great work, filmmaking is fun!!!
cheaphomemademoives 1 year ago
@cheaphomemademoives thank u and hell yea it is
casketmouth 1 year ago
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nathanielbenn 1 week ago
i really enjoyed this short film however as a film maker myself i have a few criticisms. Firstly it is very grainy also i feel that you use a lot of cut away shots which made the film very long. Overall, you did have some very creative shots especially the vent shot my favourite shot of the film i hope you can consider this in future films.
nathanielbenn 1 week ago
As a fellow HV40 user, I can respect this kind of film making, especially on youtube.
Though I gotta say criticize the fact that for 15 minutes this girl is on the phone and wandering back and forth in her house going "Is that you? Quit playin. Who is it? Hello? Stop messing around..."
The vent shot was pretty cool though. Keep it up.
mark84j 1 year ago 2
@mark84j lol thanks...cant please all right? but hopefully my next projects will appeal to u on a different scale. thanks
casketmouth 1 year ago
@casketmouth Oh don't get me wrong. It was awesome.
mark84j 1 year ago
thank u very much for taking the time to watch it
casketmouth 1 year ago
Pretty Damn good. keep up the good work.
psychocanza 1 year ago
@psychocanza thank u for taking the time
casketmouth 1 year ago