move on

[lifeoftheparty21]

stop belting, this isn't Wicked, its Sondheim.

[Mickeyt965]

Simplicity is everything...

[YouOweMeBigTime44]

I think I saw you in Beauty and the Beast. You were really good but the kid who played Chip was adorable! ;-)

[jotheodorou]

Sorry... "A" for effort but "B-/C+" for performance...too much direction, too much emoting, too much "belting"...Sondheim is much more subtle...Joanne

PS But so happy Sondheim is being performed ! Joanne

[7138575216]

okay i have seen all of the videos of u singing in SITPWG and i would like for u to sing me to bed every night cause it is soooo beautiful!!

i love ur singing!!

[jmusicmanosu]

Jesus I did quite catch what she was SCREAMING

[bohemiawelcumsyou]

You sounded a lot better in the opening number, I think. There was too much belt here, and some of it was uncontrolled. Not bad, though.

[ieatglue44]

You have to control the sound...you just kind of bust out in the beginning of the song. It has to build. It has to be more delicate throughout. And more delicate movement.

[DBon12]

Sooo many pitch problems....

[pheobedog]

your such a cunt seriously i hate people like you

[tyrizzo1]

guys guys guys, she wasnt belting at all... she was screaming

[overthemoo]

Agreed with others here - unnecessary belting (even if nicely done) and pop influenced vocal work (slides and whatnot). Otherwise, nicely done! Was the forceful teasing nature of Dot the director's suggestion? Not caring for that. She may be quite the individual, but she's still proper. Like ziggy said, too much movement.

Overall though, this is not an easy piece by any means - well done. :) And hey, the criticism here... people simply see potential and want to put in their 2 cents to help.

[dbrel]

it's not bad -- the belt is a little too forced in the upper register. Would prefer that you work in a little of your head voice, then the voice would be fantastic! Still a nice quality, and to me (who loves this musical) gets the feeling across pretty well. I much prefer you to him! (he sounds little too country in spots)

[suttonfan123]

That was a fantastic! I loved it!

[vivace09]

It's good! If you start ou loud, i is hard to grow with the song so be careful. But really good!

[ziggydamaestro]

Also, Dot seems to MOVE rather a lot, and seems rather young and skittish. Remember what she has learned from George...

In spite of what theatregirl1 says, the belt sounds ok from what I can tell - be careful of not hyperextending the neck to achieve it (visible on your side profile).

Sorry to sound so negative!

[ziggydamaestro]

Great voice - strong belt.

Be careful of "pop" inflections - it detracts from the stylistic nature of the piece.

Balance between voices sounds a little uneven, but I'm assuming that's the limitations of the recording.

Nice work, though.

[theatregirl1]

yes its sung in your head, its hard to listen to , the meaning is thrown outa the window and all i hear is a poor attemted at a belt.use your breath.

[aecollier]

hahaha!!! you're funny.

[theatregirl1]

well i am a comedian,actor.singer,dancer writer. so i think i know what im saying, ive seen it all. im harsh, you do on the other hand have a nice stage presence. you move well. this is the biz we are in, like goldfish in a shark tank

[megmcgarry]

You forgot "modest" on your resume

[JRyanReichel]

So theatre gril 1... your eaither in high school or do community theatre. Witch is it?

[theatrekid32]

I'd LOVE to know whos teaching you how to sing....because this was an AMAZING belt...not a poor attempt at one, maybe u should go back to music school? and it had SO much meaning, wht theatre have you done? ID love to know!

[5660201]

i would love to know who is teaching her to sing as well, she was Flat the entire time.

[hyugabob]

rofl. i was like... WAIT... you just sang that whole song... and... *cringe*cringe*cringe* at times i envy people who cant tell...

[mwp2paris]

This musical is pure magic...I actually hear this song in my head when I'm standing there in Chicago and trying to take in the majesty of the painting...sure the Second Act has a few problems, but those all fall by the wayside as this scene unfolds and we begin that slow, beautiful Sondheim-led journey back to the blank canvass.

Beautiful presented here...thank you.

"Move on..." words that should guide so many of us who want to linger in the past.

[miketron]

You know...it would be good if that Dot didn't sing in such a wimpy head voice:-) I mean...come on...where is the power in that voice...:-)

[aecollier]

thanks, mikey. you're an ass.

;)

[charliemerl]

This song is incredible. I wish I could sing like you ... lovely performance. Go for Broadway!

[mwp2paris]

Oh my...this song in this story is for me the emotional pinnacle of a journey Sondheim has taken us on...so beautifully acted and sung here...Thank you.

[jfudjgjd123]

this song is gorgeous!! is that really you singing?? you have an amazing voice

[TommyBoy249er]

your voice is fabulous btw

[TommyBoy249er]

omg i saw this!!! this was by far the best production of Sunday in the Park with George i've ever seen! thanks you for making my favorite musical even more fabulous!!! :-D