sound design could be a lot tighter. you've built such a fascinating eerie world here that your title leaves room for endless possibilities as to how to animate your title. I think a super organic(vines/vegitation) possibly a stop motion title animation would be fitting. you could go back and film bits and pieces of the world in a stop motion title into the word "Kamp". maybe leave your name for the end credits, minor adds could really elevate this piece.
everything is wonderful, I would chance the font's style title. looks cheap and not related with the animation.
dewcita 4 years ago
What do you think would add to the story? Examples? Maybe something more organic? Thanks for the comment.
pja79 4 years ago
sound design could be a lot tighter. you've built such a fascinating eerie world here that your title leaves room for endless possibilities as to how to animate your title. I think a super organic(vines/vegitation) possibly a stop motion title animation would be fitting. you could go back and film bits and pieces of the world in a stop motion title into the word "Kamp". maybe leave your name for the end credits, minor adds could really elevate this piece.
obemalto 3 years ago
Nice. Thanks for clear advice and examples. The new titles are definitely on my plate!
pja79 3 years ago