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From: blaiklewisfan
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  • I LOVE ZELENA !!!

  • Nice!!I like Nelena but Zelena is kinda kool!

  • U SHOULD MAKE IT LIKE A MINI SERIES!

  • This was amazing :)

  • FAB-U-LOUS!

  • that was well good :D x

  • wonderful work . .

    ( :

  • awesome job :D I loved it

  • awsome

  • Holy-!

    That was Fan-FLIPPIN-tastic!!!!!

    (hehe)

    I was a bit shocked when i read Zac Efron...then my eyes practically bulged out of my sockets when i read Selena. lol

    But my goodness that was great.

    Its like reading one of those books i enjoy so much.

    :]

    Hope you get it...win...whatever it is...

    :)

  • hhaha. If you want, jsut ignore the people(; just ignore the couple, its strange, but i like itt. :D

  • i just imagine it being like Another Cinderella Story.

    I just picture that guy...shoot whats his name?....being Zac x)

  • uhhm dreww? SEELEY. YES. thats it :D

  • YEAH! HIM!

  • This is an amazing one shot!!

    I love the ending!! :)

  • It was really good!

    You know, I understand the deeper meaning, and the way you described things, I feel like you've given me 3 long chapters, not a few paragraphs.

    You got the point of the story out, and that's good! :]

    The only thing I would have done was I would have written the ending like this;

    Stealing on more glance at Selena, I promise myself, like I do everyday, that tomorrow will be the day I will have the courage.

  • Uhhuh(:

    Thanks for that. I like your ending more than mine. I might rewrite it later[obviously not exactly like yours] but we'll see(:

    I love constructive criticism:D

  • That's good!

    :]

    And you're one-shot was really good!

    No doubt, it will be in the tops.

  • Urg, this is sooo good.

    I'm soo not gonna win. [x

  • pleasee. I bet your's will be AMAZING. :D

  • I loved this one-shot.

    :] It was really amazing.

    Your writing is really good!

  • eeeep! hhhaaha.

    you know those comments that jsut maek yuo smile the widest smile? this is one of those! i feel like dancing :D

  • ur SO gonna win

    im gunna enter

    but ur gonna winn

  • NOOOO. you're gonna win, because my friend, you are AMAZINGG.:D

  • dream on

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