The Notorious B.I.G. (feat. Sadat X) and For Jerz - Come On (first half)

[CarlosArballo13]

ima big fan of rap and i luv how u did ur piano work......who cares about bad words ther jst words.....luv it keep it up =)

[SuperMpare]

mPaRe!

[Kythepianist]

Nice

[ResetoveR]

love the piano. nice work

[crazymonkeygirl1231]

NICE PIANO PLAYIN' BUT THE RAP IT IS VERY VERY VERY NAUGHTY WITH BAD WORDS!

[BigTruckDrivingJobs]

Love it! Sounds like it could be song from Save The Last Dance with a contemporary dance choreographed to it.

[unitedstateofamerful]

very good na bro......

but i don't like rap ,because too much bad word

[flopy0coldmi]

good ;)

[trexik1]

Nice playing , catchy song, but I aint fan of rap ;)

[mcoc017]

not bad... you should finish it

[Eritsasaku]

Anyway that's my 2 paragraphs good luck with your music might be able to help depending on where your trying to go with it.

hope to see some more from you as long as you avoid that visual effect.

[Eritsasaku]

other then the visuals being hard on the eyes though I'd watch another one.

As long as your next song doesn't have these visuals go ahead and send me the next one, i'd suggest just sticking to a picture, it lets you worry more about the music and less about video editing and lets you release music quicker.

Again audio wise, the instruments just don't send the same message as the lyrics. they're conflicting in that regard they would work with a different song but i'm not feeling this one myself.

[Eritsasaku]

You got good spirit but you need a bit more meaning.

as for the beat it isn't bad at all but the instruments just do not fit to my taste at all.

The instruments being actually played is a nice change but an keyboard with midi output does wonders if your serious about music. not saying you need it, but it does help.

but for the largest suggestion, Get some cover art made and make that a picture for all your songs, or make videos for each one, But please do not use this visual effect later.

[WWEGirl231]

This is pretty good! Keep up the good work!

[L1s2p3ForeveRrR]

I LoVe iT.

[juVelAt511]

good!

[SoulaXFUH]

well done

[BrendaEsposito]

loved it!!! really cool!!! ;)

[sceptical3]

\m/ this is cool. 

[GlitchedFix]

fuck biggie. but the beat is very nice. props.

[llAK06ll]

Good...

[12345popimpin]

nice beat. i like it.